Author: adrian
Date: 2012-03-02 09:16:52 -0800 (Fri, 02 Mar 2012)
New Revision: 17630

Modified:
   django/trunk/django/contrib/gis/tests/geoapp/test_regress.py
   django/trunk/django/db/models/options.py
   django/trunk/docs/howto/deployment/wsgi/uwsgi.txt
   django/trunk/docs/howto/initial-data.txt
   django/trunk/docs/intro/tutorial01.txt
   django/trunk/docs/intro/tutorial02.txt
   django/trunk/docs/ref/databases.txt
   django/trunk/docs/ref/django-admin.txt
   django/trunk/docs/ref/request-response.txt
   django/trunk/docs/ref/settings.txt
   django/trunk/docs/ref/utils.txt
   django/trunk/docs/releases/1.4.txt
   django/trunk/docs/topics/auth.txt
   django/trunk/docs/topics/db/queries.txt
   django/trunk/docs/topics/testing.txt
   django/trunk/tests/regressiontests/admin_views/tests.py
Log:
Edited stuff from [17543] to [17629]

Modified: django/trunk/django/contrib/gis/tests/geoapp/test_regress.py
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/django/contrib/gis/tests/geoapp/test_regress.py        
2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 17629)
+++ django/trunk/django/contrib/gis/tests/geoapp/test_regress.py        
2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 17630)
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 class GeoRegressionTests(TestCase):
 
     def test01_update(self):
-        "Testing GeoQuerySet.update(), see #10411."
+        "Testing GeoQuerySet.update(). See #10411."
         pnt = City.objects.get(name='Pueblo').point
         bak = pnt.clone()
         pnt.y += 0.005
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
         self.assertEqual(bak, City.objects.get(name='Pueblo').point)
 
     def test02_kmz(self):
-        "Testing `render_to_kmz` with non-ASCII data, see #11624."
+        "Testing `render_to_kmz` with non-ASCII data. See #11624."
         name = '\xc3\x85land Islands'.decode('iso-8859-1')
         places = [{'name' : name,
                   'description' : name,
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
     @no_spatialite
     @no_mysql
     def test03_extent(self):
-        "Testing `extent` on a table with a single point, see #11827."
+        "Testing `extent` on a table with a single point. See #11827."
         pnt = City.objects.get(name='Pueblo').point
         ref_ext = (pnt.x, pnt.y, pnt.x, pnt.y)
         extent = City.objects.filter(name='Pueblo').extent()
@@ -44,14 +44,14 @@
             self.assertAlmostEqual(ref_val, val, 4)
 
     def test04_unicode_date(self):
-        "Testing dates are converted properly, even on SpatiaLite, see #16408."
+        "Testing dates are converted properly, even on SpatiaLite. See #16408."
         founded = datetime(1857, 5, 23)
         mansfield = PennsylvaniaCity.objects.create(name='Mansfield', 
county='Tioga', point='POINT(-77.071445 41.823881)',
                                                     founded=founded)
         self.assertEqual(founded, PennsylvaniaCity.objects.dates('founded', 
'day')[0])
 
     def test05_empty_count(self):
-         "Testing that PostGISAdapter.__eq__ does check empty strings, see 
#13670"
+         "Testing that PostGISAdapter.__eq__ does check empty strings. See 
#13670."
          # contrived example, but need a geo lookup paired with an id__in 
lookup
          pueblo = City.objects.get(name='Pueblo')
          state = State.objects.filter(poly__contains=pueblo.point)
@@ -61,6 +61,6 @@
          self.assertEqual(cities_within_state.count(), 1)
 
     def test06_defer_or_only_with_annotate(self):
-        "Regression for #16409 - make sure defer() and only() work with 
annotate()"
+        "Regression for #16409. Make sure defer() and only() work with 
annotate()"
         
self.assertIsInstance(list(City.objects.annotate(Count('point')).defer('name')),
 list)
         
self.assertIsInstance(list(City.objects.annotate(Count('point')).only('name')), 
list)

Modified: django/trunk/django/db/models/options.py
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/django/db/models/options.py    2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 
17629)
+++ django/trunk/django/db/models/options.py    2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 
17630)
@@ -40,15 +40,15 @@
         self.abstract = False
         self.managed = True
         self.proxy = False
-        # For any class which is a proxy (including automatically created
-        # classes for deferred object loading) the proxy_for_model tells
+        # For any class that is a proxy (including automatically created
+        # classes for deferred object loading), proxy_for_model tells us
         # which class this model is proxying. Note that proxy_for_model
-        # can create a chain of proxy models. For non-proxy models the
+        # can create a chain of proxy models. For non-proxy models, the
         # variable is always None.
         self.proxy_for_model = None
-        # For any non-abstract class the concrete class is the model
+        # For any non-abstract class, the concrete class is the model
         # in the end of the proxy_for_model chain. In particular, for
-        # concrete models the concrete_model is always the class itself.
+        # concrete models, the concrete_model is always the class itself.
         self.concrete_model = None
         self.parents = SortedDict()
         self.duplicate_targets = {}

Modified: django/trunk/docs/howto/deployment/wsgi/uwsgi.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/howto/deployment/wsgi/uwsgi.txt   2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC 
(rev 17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/howto/deployment/wsgi/uwsgi.txt   2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC 
(rev 17630)
@@ -12,14 +12,14 @@
 Prerequisite: uWSGI
 ===================
 
-The wiki describes several `installation procedures`_. Using pip, the python
-package manager, installing any uWSGI version can be done with one command
-line. For example::
+The uWSGI wiki describes several `installation procedures`_. Using pip, the
+Python package manager, you can install any uWSGI version with a single
+command. For example::
 
-    # install current stable version
+    # Install current stable version.
     pip install uwsgi
 
-    # or install LTS (long term support)
+    # Or install LTS (long term support).
     pip install http://projects.unbit.it/downloads/uwsgi-lts.tar.gz
 
 .. _installation procedures: http://projects.unbit.it/uwsgi/wiki/Install
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 uWSGI model
 -----------
 
-uWSGI operates on a client-server model. Your Web server (ie. nginx, Apache)
+uWSGI operates on a client-server model. Your Web server (e.g., nginx, Apache)
 communicates with a django-uwsgi "worker" process to serve dynamic content.
 See uWSGI's `background documentation`_ for more detail.
 
@@ -36,13 +36,13 @@
 Configuring and starting the uWSGI server for Django
 ----------------------------------------------------
 
-uWSGI supports multiple ways to configure the process, see uWSGI's
+uWSGI supports multiple ways to configure the process. See uWSGI's
 `configuration documentation`_ and `examples`_
 
 .. _configuration documentation: http://projects.unbit.it/uwsgi/wiki/Doc
 .. _examples: http://projects.unbit.it/uwsgi/wiki/Example
 
-An example command to start a uWSGI server::
+Here's an example command to start a uWSGI server::
 
     uwsgi --chdir=/path/to/your/project
         --module='mysite.wsgi:application' \
@@ -52,27 +52,28 @@
         --processes=5 \                 # number of worker processes
         --uid=1000 --gid=2000 \         # if root, uwsgi can drop privileges
         --harakiri=20 \                 # respawn processes taking more than 
20 seconds
-        --limit-as=128 \                # limit the project to 128 Megabytes
+        --limit-as=128 \                # limit the project to 128 MB
         --max-requests=5000 \           # respawn processes after serving 5000 
requests
         --vacuum \                      # clear environment on exit
-        --home=/path/to/virtual/env \   # optionnal path to a virtualenv
+        --home=/path/to/virtual/env \   # optional path to a virtualenv
         --daemonize=/var/log/uwsgi/yourproject.log      # background the 
process
 
-This assumes that you have a top-level project package named ``mysite``, and
+This assumes you have a top-level project package named ``mysite``, and
 within it a module :file:`mysite/wsgi.py` that contains a WSGI ``application``
-object. This is the layout you will have if you ran ``django-admin.py
+object. This is the layout you'll have if you ran ``django-admin.py
 startproject mysite`` (using your own project name in place of ``mysite``) with
-a recent version of Django. If this file does not exist, you'll need to create
+a recent version of Django. If this file doesn't exist, you'll need to create
 it. See the :doc:`/howto/deployment/wsgi/index` documentation for the default
-contents you should put in this file, and what else you can add to it.
+contents you should put in this file and what else you can add to it.
 
 The Django-specific options here are:
 
-* ``chdir``: the path to the directory that needs to be on Python's import 
path; i.e. the directory containing the ``mysite`` package.
-* ``module``: The WSGI module to use, probably the ``mysite.wsgi`` module which
-  :djadmin:`startproject` creates.
-* ``env``: should probably contain at least ``DJANGO_SETTINGS_MODULE``
-* ``home``: optional path to your project virtualenv
+* ``chdir``: The path to the directory that needs to be on Python's import
+  path -- i.e., the directory containing the ``mysite`` package.
+* ``module``: The WSGI module to use -- probably the ``mysite.wsgi`` module
+  that :djadmin:`startproject` creates.
+* ``env``: Should probably contain at least ``DJANGO_SETTINGS_MODULE``.
+* ``home``: Optional path to your project virtualenv.
 
 Example ini configuration file::
 
@@ -89,8 +90,7 @@
 
     uwsgi --ini uwsgi.ini
 
-
 See the uWSGI docs on `managing the uWSGI process`_ for information on
-starting, stoping, and reloading the uWSGI workers.
+starting, stoping and reloading the uWSGI workers.
 
 .. _managing the uWSGI process: http://projects.unbit.it/uwsgi/wiki/Management

Modified: django/trunk/docs/howto/initial-data.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/howto/initial-data.txt    2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 
17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/howto/initial-data.txt    2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 
17630)
@@ -69,10 +69,10 @@
 
 Loading data is easy: just call :djadmin:`manage.py loaddata <fixturename>
 <loaddata>`, where ``<fixturename>`` is the name of the fixture file you've
-created. Every time you run :djadmin:`loaddata` the data will be read from the
-fixture and re-loaded into the database. Note that this means that if you
-change one of the rows created by a fixture and then run :djadmin:`loaddata`
-again you'll wipe out any changes you've made.
+created. Each time you run :djadmin:`loaddata`, the data will be read from the
+fixture and re-loaded into the database. Note this means that if you change one
+of the rows created by a fixture and then run :djadmin:`loaddata` again, you'll
+wipe out any changes you've made.
 
 Automatically loading initial data fixtures
 -------------------------------------------

Modified: django/trunk/docs/intro/tutorial01.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/intro/tutorial01.txt      2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 
17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/intro/tutorial01.txt      2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 
17630)
@@ -222,7 +222,8 @@
 If you're new to databases, we recommend simply using SQLite by setting
 :setting:`ENGINE` to ``'django.db.backends.sqlite3'`` and :setting:`NAME` to
 the place where you'd like to store the database. SQLite is included as part
-of Python 2.5 and later, so you won't need to install anything else.
+of Python 2.5 and later, so you won't need to install anything else to support
+your database.
 
 .. note::
 
@@ -234,11 +235,10 @@
     database file will be created automatically when it is needed.
 
 While you're editing :file:`settings.py`, set :setting:`TIME_ZONE` to your
-time zone. The default value isn't correct for you, unless you happen to live
-near Chicago.
+time zone. The default value is the Central time zone in the U.S. (Chicago).
 
-Also, take note of the :setting:`INSTALLED_APPS` setting towards the bottom of
-the file. That variable holds the names of all Django applications that are
+Also, note the :setting:`INSTALLED_APPS` setting toward the bottom of
+the file. That holds the names of all Django applications that are
 activated in this Django instance. Apps can be used in multiple projects, and
 you can package and distribute them for use by others in their projects.
 
@@ -510,10 +510,10 @@
 
     python manage.py syncdb
 
-The :djadmin:`syncdb` command runs the sql from :djadmin:`sqlall` on your
+The :djadmin:`syncdb` command runs the SQL from :djadmin:`sqlall` on your
 database for all apps in :setting:`INSTALLED_APPS` that don't already exist in
 your database. This creates all the tables, initial data and indexes for any
-apps you have added to your project since the last time you ran syncdb.
+apps you've added to your project since the last time you ran syncdb.
 :djadmin:`syncdb` can be called as often as you like, and it will only ever
 create the tables that don't exist.
 
@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@
 
 Note the addition of ``import datetime`` and ``from django.utils import
 timezone``, to reference Python's standard :mod:`datetime` module and Django's
-time zone-related utilities in :mod:`django.utils.timezone` respectively. If
+time-zone-related utilities in :mod:`django.utils.timezone`, respectively. If
 you aren't familiar with time zone handling in Python, you can learn more in
 the :doc:`time zone support docs </topics/i18n/timezones>`.
 

Modified: django/trunk/docs/intro/tutorial02.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/intro/tutorial02.txt      2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 
17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/intro/tutorial02.txt      2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 
17630)
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
     displayed on the public site. Django solves the problem of creating a
     unified interface for site administrators to edit content.
 
-    The admin isn't intended to be used by site visitors; it's for site
+    The admin isn't intended to be used by site visitors. It's for site
     managers.
 
 Activate the admin site
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
 
 If the value of "Date published" doesn't match the time when you created the
 poll in Tutorial 1, it probably means you forgot to set the correct value for
-the :setting:`TIME_ZONE` setting. Change it, reload the page, and check that
+the :setting:`TIME_ZONE` setting. Change it, reload the page and check that
 the correct value appears.
 
 Change the "Date published" by clicking the "Today" and "Now" shortcuts. Then

Modified: django/trunk/docs/ref/databases.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/ref/databases.txt 2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/ref/databases.txt 2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 17630)
@@ -155,13 +155,13 @@
 change the default storage engine in the server configuration.
 
 Until MySQL 5.5.4, the default engine was MyISAM_ [#]_. The main drawbacks of
-MyISAM are that it doesn't support transactions or enforce foreign keys
+MyISAM are that it doesn't support transactions or enforce foreign-key
 constraints. On the plus side, it's currently the only engine that supports
 full-text indexing and searching.
 
 Since MySQL 5.5.5, the default storage engine is InnoDB_. This engine is fully
 transactional and supports foreign key references. It's probably the best
-choice at this point in time.
+choice at this point.
 
 .. versionchanged:: 1.4
 

Modified: django/trunk/docs/ref/django-admin.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/ref/django-admin.txt      2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 
17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/ref/django-admin.txt      2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 
17630)
@@ -379,8 +379,8 @@
 .. admonition:: MySQL with MyISAM and fixtures
 
     The MyISAM storage engine of MySQL doesn't support transactions or
-    constraints, so you won't get a rollback if multiple transaction files are
-    found, or validation of fixture data, if you use MyISAM tables.
+    constraints, so if you use MyISAM, you won't get validation of fixture
+    data, or a rollback if multiple transaction files are found.
 
 Database-specific fixtures
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Modified: django/trunk/docs/ref/request-response.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/ref/request-response.txt  2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 
17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/ref/request-response.txt  2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 
17630)
@@ -228,8 +228,8 @@
                                 parts = request.META[field].split(',')
                                 request.META[field] = parts[-1].strip()
 
-        This middleware should be positionned before any other middleware that
-        relies on the value of :meth:`~HttpRequest.get_host()`, for instance
+        This middleware should be positioned before any other middleware that
+        relies on the value of :meth:`~HttpRequest.get_host()` -- for instance,
         :class:`~django.middleware.common.CommonMiddleware` or
         :class:`~django.middleware.csrf.CsrfViewMiddleware`.
 

Modified: django/trunk/docs/ref/settings.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/ref/settings.txt  2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/ref/settings.txt  2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 17630)
@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@
 .. warning::
 
     Be careful when you override settings, especially when the default value
-    is a non-empty tuple or dict, like :setting:`MIDDLEWARE_CLASSES` and
-    :setting:`TEMPLATE_CONTEXT_PROCESSORS`. Make sure you keep the components
-    required by the features of Django you wish to use.
+    is a non-empty tuple or dictionary, such as :setting:`MIDDLEWARE_CLASSES`
+    and :setting:`TEMPLATE_CONTEXT_PROCESSORS`. Make sure you keep the
+    components required by the features of Django you wish to use.
 
 Available settings
 ==================
@@ -705,9 +705,9 @@
     '%B %d, %Y', '%d %B %Y', '%d %B, %Y')
 
 A tuple of formats that will be accepted when inputting data on a date field.
-Formats will be tried in order, using the first valid. Note that these format
-strings are specified in Python's datetime_ module syntax, that is different
-from the one used by Django for formatting dates to be displayed.
+Formats will be tried in order, using the first valid one. Note that these
+format strings use Python's datetime_ module syntax, not the format strings
+from the ``date`` Django template tag.
 
 When :setting:`USE_L10N` is ``True``, the locale-dictated format has higher
 precedence and will be applied instead.
@@ -747,9 +747,9 @@
     '%m/%d/%y %H:%M:%S', '%m/%d/%y %H:%M', '%m/%d/%y')
 
 A tuple of formats that will be accepted when inputting data on a datetime
-field. Formats will be tried in order, using the first valid. Note that these
-format strings are specified in Python's datetime_ module syntax, that is
-different from the one used by Django for formatting dates to be displayed.
+field. Formats will be tried in order, using the first valid one. Note that
+these format strings use Python's datetime_ module syntax, not the format
+strings from the ``date`` Django template tag.
 
 When :setting:`USE_L10N` is ``True``, the locale-dictated format has higher
 precedence and will be applied instead.
@@ -1344,7 +1344,7 @@
 .. note::
     You can use :func:`~django.core.urlresolvers.reverse_lazy` to reference
     URLs by their name instead of providing a hardcoded value. Assuming a
-    ``urls.py`` with an URL pattern named ``home``::
+    ``urls.py`` with an URLpattern named ``home``::
 
         urlpatterns = patterns('',
             url('^welcome/$', 'test_app.views.home', name='home'),
@@ -2082,9 +2082,9 @@
 Default: ``('%H:%M:%S', '%H:%M')``
 
 A tuple of formats that will be accepted when inputting data on a time field.
-Formats will be tried in order, using the first valid. Note that these format
-strings are specified in Python's datetime_ module syntax, that is different
-from the one used by Django for formatting dates to be displayed.
+Formats will be tried in order, using the first valid one. Note that these
+format strings use Python's datetime_ module syntax, not the format strings
+from the ``date`` Django template tag.
 
 When :setting:`USE_L10N` is ``True``, the locale-dictated format has higher
 precedence and will be applied instead.

Modified: django/trunk/docs/ref/utils.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/ref/utils.txt     2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/ref/utils.txt     2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 17630)
@@ -600,8 +600,8 @@
     requests a sublanguage where we have a main language, we send out the main
     language.
 
-    If ``check_path`` is ``True`` the function first checks the requested URL
-    whether its path begins with a language code listed in the
+    If ``check_path`` is ``True``, the function first checks the requested URL
+    for whether its path begins with a language code listed in the
     :setting:`LANGUAGES` setting.
 
 .. function:: to_locale(language)

Modified: django/trunk/docs/releases/1.4.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/releases/1.4.txt  2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/releases/1.4.txt  2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 17630)
@@ -621,8 +621,8 @@
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 Running Django with an empty or known :setting:`SECRET_KEY` disables many of
-Django's security protections, and can lead to remote-code-execution
-vulnerabilities; no Django site should ever be run without a
+Django's security protections and can lead to remote-code-execution
+vulnerabilities. No Django site should ever be run without a
 :setting:`SECRET_KEY`.
 
 In Django 1.4, starting Django with an empty :setting:`SECRET_KEY` will raise a
@@ -631,7 +631,6 @@
 due to the severity of the consequences of running Django with no
 :setting:`SECRET_KEY`.
 
-
 django.contrib.admin
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
@@ -1000,7 +999,7 @@
 Session cookies now include the ``httponly`` attribute by default to
 help reduce the impact of potential XSS attacks. As a consequence of
 this change, session cookie data, including sessionid, is no longer
-accessible from Javascript in many browsers. For strict backwards
+accessible from JavaScript in many browsers. For strict backwards
 compatibility, use ``SESSION_COOKIE_HTTPONLY = False`` in your
 settings file.
 
@@ -1055,11 +1054,11 @@
 
 Previously, the :ttag:`extends` tag used a buggy method of parsing arguments,
 which could lead to it erroneously considering an argument as a string literal
-when it wasn't.  It now utilises ``parser.compile_filter`` like other tags.
+when it wasn't. It now uses ``parser.compile_filter``, like other tags.
 
 The internals of the tag aren't part of the official stable API, but in the
 interests of full disclosure, the ``ExtendsNode.__init__`` definition has
-changed which may break any custom tags that use this node class.
+changed, which may break any custom tags that use this class.
 
 Features deprecated in 1.4
 ==========================

Modified: django/trunk/docs/topics/auth.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/topics/auth.txt   2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/topics/auth.txt   2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 17630)
@@ -1461,9 +1461,9 @@
 Limiting access to generic views
 --------------------------------
 
-Controlling access to a :doc:`class-based generic view 
</ref/class-based-views>`
-is done by decorating the :meth:`View.dispatch 
<django.views.generic.base.View.dispatch>`
-method on the class. See :ref:`decorating-class-based-views` for the details.
+To limit access to a :doc:`class-based generic view </ref/class-based-views>`,
+decorate the :meth:`View.dispatch <django.views.generic.base.View.dispatch>`
+method on the class. See :ref:`decorating-class-based-views` for details.
 
 Function-based generic views
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Modified: django/trunk/docs/topics/db/queries.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/topics/db/queries.txt     2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 
17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/topics/db/queries.txt     2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 
17630)
@@ -73,10 +73,10 @@
 .. seealso::
 
     :meth:`~django.db.models.Model.save` takes a number of advanced options not
-    described here.  See the documentation for
+    described here. See the documentation for
     :meth:`~django.db.models.Model.save` for complete details.
 
-    To create an object and save it all in one step see the
+    To create and save an object in a single step, use the
     :meth:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet.create()` method.
 
 Saving changes to objects
@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@
 ----------------------------------------------------
 
 Updating a :class:`~django.db.models.ForeignKey` field works exactly the same
-way as saving a normal field; simply assign an object of the right type to the
-field in question.  This example updates the ``blog`` attribute of an ``Entry``
-instance ``entry``::
+way as saving a normal field -- simply assign an object of the right type to
+the field in question. This example updates the ``blog`` attribute of an
+``Entry`` instance ``entry``::
 
     >>> from blog.models import Entry
     >>> entry = Entry.objects.get(pk=1)
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@
     >>> entry.save()
 
 Updating a :class:`~django.db.models.ManyToManyField` works a little
-differently; use the
+differently -- use the
 :meth:`~django.db.models.fields.related.RelatedManager.add` method on the field
 to add a record to the relation. This example adds the ``Author`` instance
 ``joe`` to the ``entry`` object::
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
 Retrieving objects
 ==================
 
-To retrieve objects from your database, you construct a
+To retrieve objects from your database, construct a
 :class:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet` via a
 :class:`~django.db.models.Manager` on your model class.
 
@@ -164,14 +164,14 @@
 
 The :class:`~django.db.models.Manager` is the main source of ``QuerySets`` for
 a model. It acts as a "root" :class:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet` that
-describes all objects in the model's database table.  For example,
+describes all objects in the model's database table. For example,
 ``Blog.objects`` is the initial :class:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet` that
 contains all ``Blog`` objects in the database.
 
 Retrieving all objects
 ----------------------
 
-The simplest way to retrieve objects from a table is to get all of them.  To do
+The simplest way to retrieve objects from a table is to get all of them. To do
 this, use the :meth:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet.all` method on a
 :class:`~django.db.models.Manager`::
 
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@
 
 To handle both of these situations, Django has a consistent way of processing
 :meth:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet.filter` and
-:meth:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet.exclude` calls.  Everything inside a
+:meth:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet.exclude` calls. Everything inside a
 single :meth:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet.filter` call is applied
 simultaneously to filter out items matching all those requirements. Successive
 :meth:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet.filter` calls further restrict the set
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@
 .. versionadded:: 1.3
 
 For date and date/time fields, you can add or subtract a
-:class:`~datetime.timedelta` object.  The following would return all entries
+:class:`~datetime.timedelta` object. The following would return all entries
 that were modified more than 3 days after they were published::
 
     >>> from datetime import timedelta
@@ -942,7 +942,7 @@
 
 You can only set non-relation fields and :class:`~django.db.models.ForeignKey`
 fields using this method. To update a non-relation field, provide the new value
-as a constant.  To update :class:`~django.db.models.ForeignKey` fields, set the
+as a constant. To update :class:`~django.db.models.ForeignKey` fields, set the
 new value to be the new model instance you want to point to. For example::
 
     >>> b = Blog.objects.get(pk=1)
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@
 :meth:`~django.db.models.Model.save`). If you want to save every item in a
 :class:`~django.db.models.query.QuerySet` and make sure that the
 :meth:`~django.db.models.Model.save` method is called on each instance, you
-don't need any special function to handle that.  Just loop over them and call
+don't need any special function to handle that. Just loop over them and call
 :meth:`~django.db.models.Model.save`::
 
     for item in my_queryset:
@@ -1035,7 +1035,7 @@
 
 You can get and set via a foreign-key attribute. As you may expect, changes to
 the foreign key aren't saved to the database until you call
-:meth:`~django.db.models.Model.save`.  Example::
+:meth:`~django.db.models.Model.save`. Example::
 
     >>> e = Entry.objects.get(id=2)
     >>> e.blog = some_blog

Modified: django/trunk/docs/topics/testing.txt
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/docs/topics/testing.txt        2012-03-02 17:13:53 UTC (rev 
17629)
+++ django/trunk/docs/topics/testing.txt        2012-03-02 17:16:52 UTC (rev 
17630)
@@ -1477,13 +1477,13 @@
 
 .. note::
 
-    When overriding settings make sure to also handle the cases in which your
-    app's code uses a cache or similar feature that retains state even if the
+    When overriding settings, make sure to handle the cases in which your app's
+    code uses a cache or similar feature that retains state even if the
     setting is changed. Django provides the
-    :data:`django.test.signals.setting_changed` signal to connect cleanup and
-    other state-resetting callbacks to. Note that this signal isn't currently
-    used by Django itself, so changing built-in settings may not yield the
-    results you expect.
+    :data:`django.test.signals.setting_changed` signal that lets you register
+    callbacks to clean up and otherwise reset state when settings are changed.
+    Note that this signal isn't currently used by Django itself, so changing
+    built-in settings may not yield the results you expect.
 
 Emptying the test outbox
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Modified: django/trunk/tests/regressiontests/admin_views/tests.py
===================================================================
--- django/trunk/tests/regressiontests/admin_views/tests.py     2012-03-02 
17:13:53 UTC (rev 17629)
+++ django/trunk/tests/regressiontests/admin_views/tests.py     2012-03-02 
17:16:52 UTC (rev 17630)
@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@
 
     def testI18NLanguageNonEnglishDefault(self):
         """
-        Check if the Javascript i18n view returns an empty language catalog
+        Check if the JavaScript i18n view returns an empty language catalog
         if the default language is non-English but the selected language
         is English. See #13388 and #3594 for more details.
         """
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@
 
     def testL10NDeactivated(self):
         """
-        Check if L10N is deactivated, the Javascript i18n view doesn't
+        Check if L10N is deactivated, the JavaScript i18n view doesn't
         return localized date/time formats. Refs #14824.
         """
         with self.settings(LANGUAGE_CODE='ru', USE_L10N=False):
@@ -2862,7 +2862,7 @@
         self.assertEqual(get_max_age(response), None)
 
     def testJsi18n(self):
-        "Check the never-cache status of the Javascript i18n view"
+        "Check the never-cache status of the JavaScript i18n view"
         response = self.client.get('/test_admin/admin/jsi18n/')
         self.assertEqual(get_max_age(response), None)
 
@@ -2896,7 +2896,7 @@
     def test_prepopulated_maxlength_localized(self):
         """
         Regression test for #15938: if USE_THOUSAND_SEPARATOR is set, make sure
-        that maxLength (in the javascript) is rendered without separators.
+        that maxLength (in the JavaScript) is rendered without separators.
         """
         response = 
self.client.get('/test_admin/admin/admin_views/prepopulatedpostlargeslug/add/')
         self.assertContains(response, "maxLength: 1000") # instead of 1,000
@@ -2909,7 +2909,7 @@
 
     def test_basic(self):
         """
-        Ensure that the Javascript-automated prepopulated fields work with the
+        Ensure that the JavaScript-automated prepopulated fields work with the
         main form and with stacked and tabular inlines.
         Refs #13068, #9264, #9983, #9784.
         """

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