Author: russellm
Date: 2010-10-08 09:16:50 -0500 (Fri, 08 Oct 2010)
New Revision: 14009

Modified:
   django/branches/releases/1.2.X/docs/ref/contrib/gis/tutorial.txt
Log:
[1.2.X] Fixed #14221 -- Cleaned up some text in the GIS tutorial. Thanks to 
Grant <render...@gmail.com> for the report.

Backport of r14006 from trunk.

Modified: django/branches/releases/1.2.X/docs/ref/contrib/gis/tutorial.txt
===================================================================
--- django/branches/releases/1.2.X/docs/ref/contrib/gis/tutorial.txt    
2010-10-08 14:16:29 UTC (rev 14008)
+++ django/branches/releases/1.2.X/docs/ref/contrib/gis/tutorial.txt    
2010-10-08 14:16:50 UTC (rev 14009)
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@
     please consult the :ref:`installation documentation <ref-gis-install>`
     for more details.
 
-This tutorial is going to guide you through guide the user through the creation
-of a geographic web application for viewing the `world borders`_. [#]_  Some of
-the code used in this tutorial is taken from and/or inspired by the
-`GeoDjango basic apps`_ project. [#]_
+This tutorial will guide you through the creation of a geographic web
+application for viewing the `world borders`_. [#]_ Some of the code
+used in this tutorial is taken from and/or inspired by the `GeoDjango
+basic apps`_ project. [#]_
 
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