Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timing-06: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-key-timing/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Please move Appendix A into section 1.3 as it would be better to have all terms, symbols, and variables used in the draft defined in the terminology section. Russ Housley noticed this and I agree with him in that it would be good to fix. In 1.4 should this include key sizes as well since they are not discussed? I see the explanation in section 5 and am just wondering if the procedures are the same when key properties change as opposed to expiration and revocation, which are both mentioned in the draft. The SecDir review found a few nits you should probably fix as well: https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05318.html _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
