Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for "DNS Terminology" (draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis)

2023-03-10 Thread Benno Overeinder

Dear WG, authors,

Summarising the feedback on the mailing list and follow-up steps for the 
authors.


The feedback of Sara has been incorporated in 
draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis-06.


The feedback of Peter consists of two items:
1) clarification zone origin to parent zone origin (in the section 
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis-05.html#section-7-2.36)
2) definition of degree of kinship in context of the term "unrelated 
name server".


Feedback 1) can be easily incorporated in the document.

For feedback 2), the chairs agree that the term "unrelated" is a 
general/everyday language word and not very specific.  We tried to come 
up with a better, more specific word, also with help from others, but we 
and the WG could not come up with a better term.


While the degree of kinship is more specific and helps us define the 
term "unrelated", we feel it adds some complexity to the glue definition 
and is otherwise not used/relevant in the document.  Therefore, we 
suggest that the authors stick to the use of the term "unrelated name 
server".


See for context the following email thread, 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/PBr7-ZMVYiqEzFalOFAQaMnPpFs/.


The document is now in WG consensus and waiting for write up state.

Best regards,

-- Benno


On 10/03/2023 18:21, Benno Overeinder wrote:

Dear WG,

Thank you for your feedback, also from Peter Thomassen in another email 
thread about the glue definition.


Herewith I close the WGLC.


Best,

-- Benno


On 20/02/2023 15:37, Sara Dickinson wrote:

Hi,

LGTM.

I’ve opened a small PR to just update the DoQ references now there is 
an RFC:

https://github.com/ietf-wg-dnsop/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis/pull/12

Regards

Sara.


On 17 Feb 2023, at 15:51, Benno Overeinder  wrote:

Dear DNSOP WG,

Following the latest consultation with the Working Group on bailiwick 
and in-domain/sibling name servers terminology, the authors and 
chairs believe this document has reached the stage of being ready for 
Working Group Last Call.


Due to normative reference to draft-ietf-dnsop-glue-is-not-optional 
(because that draft explains what to do with the definitions in this 
draft), both drafts will go to WGLC together.  (WGLC for 
glue-is-not-optional will be issued early next week.)



This starts a Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis.

Current versions of the draft is available here: 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis/.


The Current Intended Status of this document is: Best Current Practice.

Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please 
speak out with your reasons.

Supporting statements that the document is ready are also welcome.


This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on: 
March 3rd 2023


Thanks,

-- Benno

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Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for "DNS Terminology" (draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis)

2023-03-10 Thread Benno Overeinder

Dear WG,

Thank you for your feedback, also from Peter Thomassen in another email 
thread about the glue definition.


Herewith I close the WGLC.


Best,

-- Benno


On 20/02/2023 15:37, Sara Dickinson wrote:

Hi,

LGTM.

I’ve opened a small PR to just update the DoQ references now there is an RFC:
https://github.com/ietf-wg-dnsop/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis/pull/12

Regards

Sara.


On 17 Feb 2023, at 15:51, Benno Overeinder  wrote:

Dear DNSOP WG,

Following the latest consultation with the Working Group on bailiwick and 
in-domain/sibling name servers terminology, the authors and chairs believe this 
document has reached the stage of being ready for Working Group Last Call.

Due to normative reference to draft-ietf-dnsop-glue-is-not-optional (because 
that draft explains what to do with the definitions in this draft), both drafts 
will go to WGLC together.  (WGLC for glue-is-not-optional will be issued early 
next week.)


This starts a Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis.

Current versions of the draft is available here: 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis/.

The Current Intended Status of this document is: Best Current Practice.

Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak out 
with your reasons.
Supporting statements that the document is ready are also welcome.


This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on: March 3rd 
2023

Thanks,

-- Benno

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Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for "DNS Terminology" (draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis)

2023-02-20 Thread Sara Dickinson
Hi, 

LGTM.

I’ve opened a small PR to just update the DoQ references now there is an RFC:
https://github.com/ietf-wg-dnsop/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis/pull/12

Regards

Sara. 

> On 17 Feb 2023, at 15:51, Benno Overeinder  wrote:
> 
> Dear DNSOP WG,
> 
> Following the latest consultation with the Working Group on bailiwick and 
> in-domain/sibling name servers terminology, the authors and chairs believe 
> this document has reached the stage of being ready for Working Group Last 
> Call.
> 
> Due to normative reference to draft-ietf-dnsop-glue-is-not-optional (because 
> that draft explains what to do with the definitions in this draft), both 
> drafts will go to WGLC together.  (WGLC for glue-is-not-optional will be 
> issued early next week.)
> 
> 
> This starts a Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis.
> 
> Current versions of the draft is available here: 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis/.
> 
> The Current Intended Status of this document is: Best Current Practice.
> 
> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
> If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
> If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak 
> out with your reasons.
> Supporting statements that the document is ready are also welcome.
> 
> 
> This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on: March 
> 3rd 2023
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> -- Benno
> 
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Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for "DNS Terminology" (draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis)

2023-02-17 Thread Tim Wicinski
(speaking without a hat)

I think this includes some good updates around the definition of Glue, and
not because
we've spent many hours wordsmithing this.  I would like to see some folks
who have
commented about the definitions in the past, review these changes.

Thanks the authors for their patience

tim


On Fri, Feb 17, 2023 at 10:51 AM Benno Overeinder 
wrote:

> Dear DNSOP WG,
>
> Following the latest consultation with the Working Group on bailiwick
> and in-domain/sibling name servers terminology, the authors and chairs
> believe this document has reached the stage of being ready for Working
> Group Last Call.
>
> Due to normative reference to draft-ietf-dnsop-glue-is-not-optional
> (because that draft explains what to do with the definitions in this
> draft), both drafts will go to WGLC together.  (WGLC for
> glue-is-not-optional will be issued early next week.)
>
>
> This starts a Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis.
>
> Current versions of the draft is available here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis/.
>
> The Current Intended Status of this document is: Best Current Practice.
>
> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
> If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
> If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please
> speak out with your reasons.
> Supporting statements that the document is ready are also welcome.
>
>
> This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on:
> March 3rd 2023
>
> Thanks,
>
> -- Benno
>
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[DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for "DNS Terminology" (draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis)

2023-02-17 Thread Benno Overeinder

Dear DNSOP WG,

Following the latest consultation with the Working Group on bailiwick 
and in-domain/sibling name servers terminology, the authors and chairs 
believe this document has reached the stage of being ready for Working 
Group Last Call.


Due to normative reference to draft-ietf-dnsop-glue-is-not-optional 
(because that draft explains what to do with the definitions in this 
draft), both drafts will go to WGLC together.  (WGLC for 
glue-is-not-optional will be issued early next week.)



This starts a Working Group Last Call for: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis.

Current versions of the draft is available here: 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc8499bis/.


The Current Intended Status of this document is: Best Current Practice.

Please review the draft and offer relevant comments.
If this does not seem appropriate please speak out.
If someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please 
speak out with your reasons.

Supporting statements that the document is ready are also welcome.


This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on: 
March 3rd 2023


Thanks,

-- Benno

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