Folks, I've finished my proofreading of the Getting Started guide (version
4.1, copyright 2022).

The project is so well done that I have little to suggest in the way of
improving it. But I did find three contexts in which it might be tweaked a
little.

   1.

   A glossary, especially of terms (e.g., from pages 11 and 12, odbc; jdbc,
   GNU, kernel, and glibc; page 114: regular expression; page 158: Bezler
   curves; page 185: database normalization) with which a lot of people might
   be unfamiliar, would make *Getting Started* even more useful.


   1.

   Greater consistency in the presentation of internal links (for instance,
   some Figures being shown in the text *before**,* rather than after, the
   link to them – such as, on page 273, the reference to Figure 244, which
   occurs *after* the Figure itself) would improve workability.


   1.

   Some more “colloquial” wording might also serve to make less skilled
   users more comfortable. For instance, on page 94, what's shown as “provides
   the oportunity” might be better expressed simply as “allows you to”.

I've got lots more individual items, but those are the basic contexts. Tell
me how you'd like to proceed.

And thanks again for the opportunity …


On Tue, Jun 6, 2023 at 12:57 AM F Campos Costero <fjcc.apa...@gmail.com>
wrote:

> On Thu, May 4, 2023 at 8:40 AM Keith N. McKenna <keith.mcke...@comcast.net
> >
> wrote:
>
> > F Campos Costero wrote:
> > > On the Calc Guide, I will first accept or reject all of the changes
> > > currently shown and push those versions back to the repository. Judging
> > > from the first chapter, all of my and Dick's changes have not yet been
> > > accepted. I hope I will have time after that to do a full review of
> each
> > > document. Let me know if that plan isn't good.
> > > Regards,
> > > Francis
> > >
> > That sounds good Francis. Thanks for moving this along.
> >
> > Keith
> >
> > > On Tue, May 2, 2023 at 9:08 AM Keith N. McKenna <
> > keith.mcke...@comcast.net>
> > > wrote:
> > >
> > >> F Campos Costero wrote:
> > >>> I'll take a look at the Calc changes.
> > >>> Francis
> > >>>
> > >>
> > >> Thanks Francis. I will finish with the Getting started changes from
> > >> Czeslaw morning, and will get back to the Writer Guide this afternoon.
> > >>
> > >> Regards
> > >> Keith
> > >>
> > >>> On Mon, May 1, 2023 at 1:07 PM Keith N. McKenna <
> > >> keith.mcke...@comcast.net>
> > >>> wrote:
> > >>>
> > >>>> Digro has had changes for Calc waiting review for some time could
> > >>>> another member of the team start reviewing those so that Guide can
> > start
> > >>>> Moving along.
> > >>>>
> > >>>> I am still trying to catch up with with the Getting Started changes
> > from
> > >>>> Czeslaw that Francis made and re publishing them, as well as trying
> to
> > >>>> work on the Writer Guide.
> > >>>>
> > >>>> I have also been spending a lot of time taking my Girlfriend in and
> > out
> > >>>> of the Veterans Administration Hospital in the Jamaica Plains
> section
> > of
> > >>>> Boston for medical issues.
> > >>>>
> > >>>> Thank you all in Advance
> > >>>> Keith
> > >>>>
> > >>>>
> > >>>>
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> > I just pushed new versions of all the Calc Guide chapters. I limited my
> changes to formatting and fixing typos. Some sections would benefit from
> broader revisions but I did not start that. Michele's input on that would
> be very valuable.
> I did not modify the front matter of any of the chapters and that will have
> to be updated. I assume Keith has text that can be used for that with
> minimal revisions.
>
> Regards,
> Francis
>

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