Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
2008/6/25 Luya Tshimbalanga [EMAIL PROTECTED]: New draft of system-lock-screen based on computer icon. Comments welcome. Luya Reference: -- http://luya.fedorapeople.org/echo/actions Hi, Your icons always look kinda nice but this one.. You've outdone yourself but not in the positive way (sorry to say it). The screen looks like an ancient old screen of a 8086 machine.. or one of the first flat manitors (bulky but flat).. please change the screen to a modern day screen then it will probably be fine for me ^_^ Also there was a monitor icon in echo that did look good.. why not re-use that? will save you time and looks better as well. For the lock idea in the screen.. i like the last attempt of Martin. Good luck! ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
Quoting Mark [EMAIL PROTECTED]: 2008/6/25 Luya Tshimbalanga [EMAIL PROTECTED]: New draft of system-lock-screen based on computer icon. Comments welcome. Luya Reference: -- http://luya.fedorapeople.org/echo/actions Hi, Your icons always look kinda nice but this one.. You've outdone yourself but not in the positive way (sorry to say it). The screen looks like an ancient old screen of a 8086 machine.. or one of the first flat manitors (bulky but flat).. please change the screen to a modern day screen then it will probably be fine for me ^_^ Already fixed on 0.3.2 version which is by far better than the old monitor. The bulky look is true for 32x32 icons and above on these drafts. Also there was a monitor icon in echo that did look good.. why not re-use that? It actually violated the guideline because of its perspective. Luya Tshimbalanga Fedora Project contributor http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/LuyaTshimbalanga ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
Pushed in git tree. Luya ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
On Sat, 2008-06-28 at 01:31 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Pushed in git tree. Fixed some minor problems + built into rawhide [1]. Luya Martin References: [1] http://koji.fedoraproject.org/koji/buildinfo?buildID=54103 signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
Martin Sourada a écrit : Still needs to be aligned in x-direction. Otherwise it's looking fine. Fixed. See version c on http://luya.fedorapeople.org/echo/actions/ Luya ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
Martin Sourada a écrit : As promised, here are the fixes, I also made the monitor approximately 16:10 and slightly enlarged the shadow, I leave the rest to you if you feel like making any changes to the other sizes. Would be also nice to add shadow to the 22x22 (and 24x24) size - even though it uses flat perspective, it should still drop a simple shadow. Here is the updated 22x22. The shadow is made of half-circle. Luya inline: system-lock-screen22d.pnginline: system-lock-screen22d.svg___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
On Fri, 2008-06-27 at 14:29 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Here is the updated 22x22. The shadow is made of half-circle. I guess you can use full ellipse. Make the shadow a little bigger (e.g. like it's done for the go-* icons). Otherwise than that I'm fine with it :) Luya Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
I reworked 22x22 and 24x24 icons. Luya inline: system-lock-screen22b.pnginline: system-lock-screen22b.svginline: system-lock-screen24b.png___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
On Thu, 2008-06-26 at 00:58 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: I reworked 22x22 and 24x24 icons. Luya Looking good and crisp. I have no further comments regarding these two sizes :-) Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
On Thu, 2008-06-26 at 11:47 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Martin Sourada a écrit : On Thu, 2008-06-26 at 00:58 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: I reworked 22x22 and 24x24 icons. Luya Looking good and crisp. I have no further comments regarding these two sizes :-) 32x32 and 48x48 tweaked. Aligned top and bottom. Luya Still needs to be aligned in x-direction. Otherwise it's looking fine. Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
[Echo] system-lock-screen draft
New draft of system-lock-screen based on computer icon. Comments welcome. Luya Reference: -- http://luya.fedorapeople.org/echo/actions inline: system-lock-screen16.svginline: system-lock-screen22.pnginline: system-lock-screen48.png___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] system-lock-screen draft
On Tue, 2008-06-24 at 15:44 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: New draft of system-lock-screen based on computer icon. Comments welcome. Luya Reference: -- http://luya.fedorapeople.org/echo/actions Not bad, here are few comments: * 16x16 version seems to have not very well defined shape, perhaps will need further simplification * 22x22 (and 24x24) version should use flat perspective instead of on-the-table * 32x32 is rendered in 16x16, I cannot say, if it's 32x32 or 16x16 one by looking at the png * 48x48 - the top line is a little blurry, you can easily make it sharp if you create the perspective by following the on the table perspective how-to [1] (err... I just noticed it's probably because the lines are not perfectly vertical/horizontal. Seems like you took the isometric monitor and only deformed it in inkscape... Would be better to copy over only the content of the display [wallpaper] and redraw the rest from scratch) * the shadow in on-the-table and flat perspective icons should be only bellow the icon, unlike in the isometric one * is there any particular reason for the lock to be plain white? * it would also help to create more contrast between the top and front faces of the display Martin References: [1] https://fedorahosted.org/echo-icon-theme/wiki/Guidelines/OnTheTablePerspective signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
