Re: [Echo] New view-sort-ascending icon set draft
On Sun, 2008-09-21 at 02:19 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > These sets are based from gnome-version. Only difference is Echo treatment. > Comment welcome. > > > Luya The arrow looks too tall, if you played a little with its tale shape, it might help. I think the dots might be better of if the were actually globes - and thus using radial gradient. The white inner outline is too thin in the arrow, the side face is too dark, compared to other action icons. Could you try adding colour for the arrow? At 32x32 and bellow the arrow is hard to recognise. The dots should be distributed evenly IMHO. You could perhaps try some sort of fade-off for the arrow, like in the gnome icon, but I am not sure if that would work for echo. Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] New view-sort-ascending icon set draft
On Sun, 2008-09-21 at 11:42 +0200, Martin Sourada wrote: > icons. Could you try adding colour for the arrow? At 32x32 and bellow FYI, I just checked oxygen icons and they use blue for the arrow, so I suggest you try blue as well :) Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] New view-sort-ascending icon set draft
On Sun, 2008-09-21 at 22:36 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > I modified the tale shape of arrow, enlarge white inner line to 2px > and lighten the side. > Dots have radial gradients and are evenly distributed (3 instead of > 4). Also took suggestion > of making blue arrow. > > Luya That's much, much better. Few remaining comments: for ball-like objects, the most bright spot for the radial gradient is a little to top and a little to right (check e.g. applications-internet). The arrow still needs some love in 22x22 and 16x16, the white inner outline needs to be about 1px wide there. Also the shadow is too strong, try adding gradient, more blur and decrease opacity a little. Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] New view-sort-ascending icon set draft
On Mon, 2008-09-22 at 00:30 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > Shadow is fixed. Both 22x22 and 16x16 got outline sightly reduced to > give more space to white inner outline. > Ball object got radial gradient set at the right position. > > Luya Hmm... still not feel good. The 22x22 is almost fixed, but the 16x16 is still hard to recognise... Perhaps you could try to simplify the shape a bit and better fill the available canvas? Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: [Echo] New view-sort-ascending icon set draft
Martin Sourada a écrit : > Still not quite right, so I decided to give it a go myself to see what > can be done. See the attached result. Note that I also slightly changed > the gradient to better fit with other icons (most notably I made it > brighter). > I saw that you increased outline to 2.5 px on both 22x22 and 16x16. The latter looks good enough. Next target, view-sort-descending. Luya P.S: you haven´t reviewed last update of edit-clear. ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list