i forgot to title my/your poem. i will title that: "Blockade with fresh fruit addendum: when indeterminite poetry once relavent becomes diminished by poets perpetuating it not unlike as a crutch....... essentially a disservice " i was going to go with "Instead of learning from a relevant source some people religiously(?) adhere to and perpetuate it like a crutch thus diminishing it's primary impact ......with fresh fruit addendum" but that wasn't anywhere near as snappy. maybe i will just go with a nore simple "Blockade with Fresh Fruit Addendum" Jason Pierce rep. Fluxlisters Against Poetic Agression
