[Bug 279481] Grammar in Handbook section on ZFS snapshot rollback

2024-06-30 Thread bugzilla-noreply
https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=279481

Benedict Reuschling  changed:

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 Resolution|--- |FIXED
 Status|New |Closed

--- Comment #2 from Benedict Reuschling  ---
I've committed a patch based on your suggestions. Thanks for reporting it! PR
closed.

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[Bug 279481] Grammar in Handbook section on ZFS snapshot rollback

2024-06-30 Thread bugzilla-noreply
https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=279481

--- Comment #1 from commit-h...@freebsd.org ---
A commit in branch main references this bug:

URL:
https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=e077ac9ac197b8836c41d2644c29e7c85d7bb904

commit e077ac9ac197b8836c41d2644c29e7c85d7bb904
Author: Benedict Reuschling 
AuthorDate: 2024-06-30 14:29:23 +
Commit: Benedict Reuschling 
CommitDate: 2024-06-30 14:29:23 +

Fix grammar in ZFS handbook chapter, rollback section

Submitted by:   ntrem...@gmail.com
PR: 279481

 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

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[Bug 279481] Grammar in Handbook section on ZFS snapshot rollback

2024-06-02 Thread bugzilla-noreply
https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=279481

Bug ID: 279481
   Summary: Grammar in Handbook section on ZFS snapshot rollback
   Product: Documentation
   Version: Latest
  Hardware: Any
OS: Any
Status: New
  Severity: Affects Many People
  Priority: ---
 Component: Books & Articles
  Assignee: d...@freebsd.org
  Reporter: ntrem...@gmail.com

FreeBSD Handbook Section 22.4.5.3 ZFS Snapshot Rollback

Current:
"Most often this is the case when the current state of the dataset is no longer
and if preferring an older version."

Suggested:
"Most often this is the case when the current state of the dataset is no longer
valid, or an older version is preferred.

And further down in the same section, next paragraph:
Current:
"In the first example, roll back a snapshot because of a careless rm operation
that removes too much data than intended."

Suggested:
"In the first example, roll back a snapshot because a careless rm operation
removed more data than intended."

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