[Gen-art] Review draft-vaudreuil-futuredelivery-04.txt
Title: Review draft-vaudreuil-futuredelivery-04.txt I'm doing this review since Francis is currently on vacation and had previously done a review of the -03, finding only nits. Document: draft-vaudreuil-futuredelivery-04.txt Reviewer: Mary Barnes (for Francis Dupont) Review Date: 30 August 2006 IESG Telechat Date: 31 August 2006 Summary: Ready. Comments: I've reviewed the comments Francis had made on the -03 and those appear to have all been addressed. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
Re: [Gen-art] Review assignments for 31 Aug 2006
Not to worry. I will trust my fellow ADs on this one. Brian Michael A. Patton wrote: I've been having a number of computer and connectivity problems recently. This means that my normal load of paying work is taking longer and I won't have any time this week to review the document I was assigned for this Thursday's telechat: APP A Uniform Resource Name (URN) Namespace for The Near Field Communication Forum (NFC Forum) (Informational) - 3 of 3 draft-abel-nfc-urn-00.txt [Open Web Ballot] Token: Ted Hardie If someone else can do a review, that would probably be good. Otherwise, this is to let Brian know that he won't be getting one from me. -MAP P.S. Despite being on limited availability even before these recent problems, I seem to have a number of LC items assigned to me. If anyone wants to take one or two (or more) of them, that would probably be good as well. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] review of: draft-ietf-netlmm-nohost-req-04.txt
I noticed that Brian has already issued his ballot on this, but I had written-up some rough comments on this, so I'm sending them for completeness sake. These are mostly nits, but I generally have to say that overall, the document doesn't seem very readable. 1) Contributor section at the beginning seems odd, and the second sentence seems a bit gratitous. I'd suggest moving it to the acknoledge section and dropping the last sentence. Gerardo Giaretta, Kent Leung, Katsutoshi Nishida, Phil Roberts, and Marco Liebsch all contributed major effort to this document. Their names are not included in the authors' section due to the RFC Editor's limit of 5 names. 2) The 1 sentence abstract is a bit weak, I think it could state a bit more. 3) Editorially, I found the entire document difficult to read. It took me several re-reads to make heads-or-tails of the document, but then again, I should probably read drafts earlier in the day (or after a stiff cup of coffee). 4) Some of section 2 seems like design trade-offs or design considerations more than goals. 5) Appendix, section 8.6 has an entry called Micro. but it isn't clear if the document means Cellular IP or HAWAII or generally all micromobility protocols. John ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ospf-iana-01.txt
no-objection ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-rddp-ddp-06.txt
In your previous mail you wrote: As you suggested, I did contact the IESG, specifically the Security ADs, about IKEv1 vs. IKEv2, and the verdict is to stick with IKEv1 as profiled by RFC 3723 for iSCSI so that iSCSI and RDDP use the same profile of IPsec. If/when RFC 3723 is updated, all the protocols that use it will be uniformly affected. Text will be added to the next version of the draft to explain this. = IMHO this is a good solution... Thanks [EMAIL PROTECTED] ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 31 August 2006
Hi all, Here's this week's LC assignments along with one Early Review assignment: http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art.html http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-by-reviewer.html Thanks, Mary. --- Reviewer: David Black - 'End-to-middle Security in the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP)' draft-ietf-sip-e2m-sec-02.txt This is an Early Review requested by the AD. Early Review ends on 2006-09-08. The file can be obtained via http://tools.ietf.org/wg/sip/draft-ietf-sip-e2m-sec/draft-ietf-sip-e2m-s ec-02.txt --- Reviewer: Eric Gray - 'Exclude Routes - Extension to RSVP-TE ' draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-exclude-route-05.txt as a Proposed Standard IETF LC ends on 2006-09-08. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-exclude-rou te-05.txt --- Reviewer: Elwyn Davies - 'Extensions to GMPLS RSVP Graceful Restart ' draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-restart-ext-05.txt as a Proposed Standard IETF LC ends on 2006-09-08. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-restart-ext-05 .txt --- Reviewer: Francis Dupont - 'Forward Error Correction Grouping Semantics in Session Description Protocol ' draft-ietf-mmusic-fec-grouping-05.txt as a Proposed Standard IETF LC ends on 2006-09-08. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mmusic-fec-grouping-05.tx t --- Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo - 'Label Switching Router Self-Test ' draft-ietf-mpls-lsr-self-test-06.txt as a Proposed Standard IETF LC ends on 2006-09-08. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mpls-lsr-self-test-06.txt --- Reviewer: Harald Alvestrand - 'RTP Payload Format and File Storage Format for the Adaptive Multi-Rate (AMR) and Adaptive Multi-Rate Wideband (AMR-WB) Audio Codecs ' draft-ietf-avt-rtp-amr-bis-05.txt as a Proposed Standard IETF LC ends on 2006-09-11. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-amr-bis-05.txt --- Reviewer: Joel Halpern - 'The Kerberos V5 (GSSAPI) SASL mechanism ' draft-ietf-sasl-gssapi-07.txt as a Proposed Standard IETF LC ends on 2006-09-11. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sasl-gssapi-07.txt --- Reviewer: John Loughney - 'BGP Support for Four-octet AS Number Space ' draft-ietf-idr-as4bytes-12.txt as a Proposed Standard IETF LC ends on 2006-09-12. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-idr-as4bytes-12.txt The implementation report can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/IESG/Implementations/bgp4_impleme.txt --- Reviewer: Robert Sparks - 'The SDP (Session Description Protocol) Content Attribute ' draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-media-content-05.txt as a Proposed Standard IETF LC ends on 2006-09-12. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-media-content- 05.txt --- Reviewer: Sharon Chisholm - 'Operation of Anycast Services ' draft-ietf-grow-anycast-04.txt as a BCP IETF LC ends on 2006-09-13. Note: Previously reviewed -03 for LC ending 2006-06-16. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-grow-anycast-04.txt --- Reviewer: Spencer Dawkins - 'Network based IP VPN Architecture Using Virtual Routers ' draft-ietf-l3vpn-vpn-vr-03.txt as an Informational RFC - 'Using BGP as an Auto-Discovery Mechanism for VR-based Layer-3 VPNs ' draft-ietf-l3vpn-bgpvpn-auto-07.txt as an Informational RFC - 'Applicability Statement for Virtual Router-based Layer 3 PPVPN Approaches ' draft-ietf-l3vpn-as-vr-02.txt as an Informational RFC Active participation in the L3VPN WG on Virtual Routers has not existed for some time. There is little evidence of energy to significantly modify these documents further. The documents are, however, mature enough and of sufficient quality that there is general consensus to publish what has been accomplished as Informational. IETF LC ends on 2006-09-14. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-l3vpn-vpn-vr-03.txt http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-l3vpn-bgpvpn-auto-07.txt http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-l3vpn-as-vr-02.txt --- Reviewer: Scott Brim - 'DNSSEC Opt-In ' draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-opt-in-09.txt as an Experimental RFC IETF LC ends on 2006-09-14. The file can be obtained via http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-opt-in-09.t xt --- Reviewer: Eric Gray - 'Host Identity Protocol ' draft-ietf-hip-base-06.txt as an Experimental RFC IETF LC ends on
