[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-narten-successful-bof-03.txt
Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-narten-successful-bof-03.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo [EMAIL PROTECTED] Review Date: 15 January 2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Comments: BOF should be expanded in the title. The Normative References Section is empty. It should be removed. The document provides a few HTTP URIs that point to web pages at the IETF site. If these pages are moved at some point, the URIs will not work any longer. I am actually OK with the draft using those URIs, but I point the issue out just in case... Thanks, Gonzalo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-gulbrandsen-imap-enable-05
Suresh Krishnan wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-gulbrandsen-imap-enable-05.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Hi Suresh, Thanks for your comments, Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication, but a couple of nits need to be fixed Editorial: 1) Some of the lines are more than 72 chars long (Lines 346,350,351,356,357) Ok, this will be fixed during publication. 2) RFC2177 (IMAP IDLE) is not referenced anywhere in the document. Probably remove the reference. Removed in my copy. Thanks for spotting that. ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] review of draft-daboo-imap-annotatemore-12.txt
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-daboo-imap-annotatemore-12.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2008-01-14 IETF LC End Date: 2008-01-30 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Comments: Some editorial (i.e., to be handled by the RFC Editor) comments: - Abstract page 1: add (IMAP) after Internet Message Access Protocol - 3.3 page 8: A user - Users - 3.3 page 8: If the client - if a client - 4.1 page 9: i.e. - i.e., (there are four i.e.s in this page and some others after) - 4.2 page 11: this criteria - these criteria - 4.3 page 12: the extended LIST command return - ... returns - 5 page 22: parenthesised - parenthesized - 6.3.5 pag 27: remove Please register... Note you have some comments from the Last Call and many normative references are still at the draft state (the second point should not be a problem, the RFC Editor will just publish all interdependent documents together). Thanks [EMAIL PROTECTED] ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
