Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-nfsdirect-07.txt
In your previous mail you wrote: At 11:57 AM 3/21/2008, Francis Dupont wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft ... Editorial: - 3 page 3, etc: about the case of read/write: operations should get all uppercase, list only the first letter and other all lowercase. In term of grammar: nouns are in all uppercase, adjective one uppercase, verb all lowercase. Applying this: ... 4 page 5: RDMA READs and RDMA READ ... I have incorporated almost all of your comments, but felt I should indicate why I did not take just one in particular. The terms RDMA Read and RDMA Write are used consistently with these letter cases throughout RFC5040 and other documents, so it seems best to retain their style here. Your observation did lead me to fix a couple of other inconsistencies, however! = the rule itself does not matter, what is important is to have one and to apply it consistently (:-)! Thanks for the careful review. Acknowledgment being spelled inconsistently was a particular surprise! :-) = in fact IMHO both spellings exist but the RFC Editor decided for one (and again one had to be chosen and to become the only one to be used). Thanks [EMAIL PROTECTED] ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 17 April 2007
Hi all, Here's the link to the new LC assignments for this week: http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/reviewers-080417-lc.html The assignments are captured in the spreadsheets: http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art.html http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-by-reviewer.html The standard template is included below. Thanks, Mary. --- I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: Reviewer: Review Date: IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: Comments: ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] Assignments for 24 April 2008
Hi all, Here's the link to the summary of assignments for the April 24, 2008 telechat: http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/reviewers-080424.html With the updated spreadsheets: http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art.html http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-by-reviewer.html For your convenience, the review boilerplate template is included below. Mary. --- I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: Reviewer: Review Date: IESG Telechat date: 24 April 2008 Summary: Comments: ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-freed-sieve-environment-05.txt
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-freed-sieve-environment-05.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2008-04-18 IESG Telechat date: 2008-04-24 Summary: Ready Comments: My Last Call comments were all handled ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-lemonade-msgevent-05.txt
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-lemonade-msgevent-05.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia [EMAIL PROTECTED] Review Date: 18 April 208 IESG Telechat date: 24 April 2008 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a proposed standard RFC. Comments: The document is well written and crystal clear. No comments. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia tel:+358-50-4804586 Nokia Siemens Networks Espoo, Finland ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
