Re: [Gen-art] Assignments for 03 July 2008
Hi, This must be the worst week for biting insects all year. for midsummer, I went to the lakes region in Finland, and the mosquitoes almost ate me alive! Cheers, Gonzalo ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-08.txt
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-08.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication but I have some comments. Minor = * MBZ undefined I am not aware of any standard definition of MBZ in the IETF. Given this, the document needs to define MBZ in its terminology. Something like The bits marked MBZ MUST be set to zero by senders and MUST be ignored by receivers. * Section 3.5 Creating Test Sessions From my reading of this document I understand that the Request-TW-Session command defined here is based on the Request-Session command from RFC4656. This is not made explicit in this document. It would also be helpful to have a command format ASCII art picture before going into defining things. I also think that this section goes too much into what OWAMP does, and I feel it distracts the reader. e.g. The Conf-Sender and the Conf-Receiver text. * Section 3.8 I think that the number of sessions field should be set to 0 since there are no session description records that follow. Right now this field is undefined in the draft. Cheers Suresh ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
