Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-container-00

2009-04-11 Thread Scott Brim
Excerpts from Ralph Droms on Fri, Apr 10, 2009 03:25:49PM -0400:
 Scott raises an interesting point about identifying the source of  
 options when delivered to clients.

 BTW, Scott - what is DHS?

Sorry, DHCP server

 The usual case - almost the only case today - is that there is a single 
 upstream service provider and a single source of DHCP options to be 
 passed along to the client.  In this scenario, there's no need to pass 
 along any information identifying the source of the options.

 To allow for a multihomed subscriber network, I can imagine adding a tag 
 that would be passed along with the options so the subscriber client can 
 identify the source of each option.  But, what would the client do with 
 that information?  How would the client interpret it?  What is the syntax 
 and semantics of the tagging?

 Taken a step farther, sourcing information might be required even if  
 there is no intermediate RG and the contained option is not in use.  How 
 does a device with multiple interfaces make policy decisions about  
 information received on those multiple interfaces (which is pretty much 
 the question Scott asks about the container option)?

 - Ralph

Well put.  It all comes down to where information is going to be
merged.  The case where a single RG client connected to multiple SP
servers is essentially already covered by MIF/6man, they just need to
document it.  If the information is merged at the RG server, then the
RG server should somehow know which interface which DHCP information
came from.  If all of the information is transparently passed to the
consumer device, then it needs the tags as well.

I don't know how the information could be usefully tagged -- the SP
server's IP address doesn't sound like a good idea.  The WG should
decide if tagging should be included in the container syntax or added
later (but documented now as needing study).

I'm CCing MIF in case people there aren't on the ietf list.

Thanks ... Scott


 On Apr 7, 2009, at 2:25 PM 4/7/09, Scott Brim wrote:

 I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
 reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
 http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

 Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
 or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

 Document: draft-ietf-dhc-container-00
 Reviewer: Scott Brim
 Review Date: 7 April 2009
 IESG Telechat date: 14 April 2009

 Summary:

 This draft is on the right track but has open issues.

 Comments:

 More significant:

   I am concerned about multiple interface scenarios as are being
   discussed in MIF and 6MAN, where either the RG is multiply connected
   or the end device is.  For a discussion of the sort of problems that
   lead to this concern, see (for example) notes from the MIF BOF at
   IETF74.

   - There must be a way to associate options with a particular
 upstream DHS they were obtained from, when the container is passed
 to the RG server and perhaps to the end device.  This source
 information may or may not be in the container itself -- that's up
 to the WG to decide.  If it is decided that the source information
 will not be part of the container syntax, at least the fact that
 it is necessary should be documented for people who ultimately do
 specify how container options are passed.

   - The SP server may have its ideas of how a consumer device should
 be configured, but it is not appropriate to say that the SP
 server MUST be able to control which DHCP options are transmitted
 to the consumer device.  The RG server may need to make decisions
 about information from multiple DHCP servers.  Perhaps you could
 say that the SP server MUST be able to provide information to
 the RG server.

 Less significant:

   5.1 and 5.2

 Alignment between the v4 and v6 descriptions would be better. The
 v4 description has code in the diagram and says that code is
 OPTION_CONTAINER_V4.  The v6 description has OPTION_CONTAINER_V6
 in the diagram and says that option-code is OPTION_CONTAINER_V6.
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Re: [Gen-art] Retry: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcpsecure-11.txt

2009-04-11 Thread Randall Stewart

Brian:

Yes, I have asked Anantha (primary editor now) to change
my contact address. Unfortunately he has not
done so yet.

R
On Apr 10, 2009, at 7:17 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:


And: Randy's address is wrong in the I-D, hence mail
to the generic address doesn't reach him.
draft-ietf-tcpm-tcpsecure-11-carpenter.txt


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Re: [Gen-art] Retry: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcpsecure-11.txt

2009-04-11 Thread Randall Stewart

I am cool with that...

Anantha can you get Mitesh to respond to this too?

R
On Apr 10, 2009, at 11:31 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:


On 2009-04-11 12:57, Anantha Ramaiah (ananth) wrote:

Thanks for the responses.

...

- when you mention disclaimer for pre-RFC5378  I am assuming this  
comes
with the new boiler plate change. If yes, the new boiler plate  
changes

would also be addressed.
FWIW, this document has been circulating in the TCPM for the past 5
years! So not sure about pre-RFC 5378 etc.,


The question is, do all contributors to the draft agree to it being
re-submitted under RFC5378 rules? If so, you just use the normal  
version

of the new boilerplate (rfc ipr=trust200902 in xml2rfc).

If you can't be sure that all contributors agree, you have to add the
extra disclaimer (rfc ipr=pre5378Trust200902 in xml2rfc).

At least, that's my non-lawyer understanding.

   Brian



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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-container-00

2009-04-11 Thread Ralph Droms
Scott - even knowing which interface which DHCP information came  
from may not be enough for a device with multiple interfaces.  Can  
policies for merging information be written just based on the  
characteristics of the interface - say, 3GPP versus 802.11, or IP  
address of the interface - or does the device need to differentiate  
between Verizon Wireless and Starbucks if I'm away from home?  Or  
differentiate between my ATT femtocell and my home WiFi network?


- Ralph

On Apr 11, 2009, at 6:00 AM 4/11/09, Scott Brim wrote:


Excerpts from Ralph Droms on Fri, Apr 10, 2009 03:25:49PM -0400:

Scott raises an interesting point about identifying the source of
options when delivered to clients.

BTW, Scott - what is DHS?


Sorry, DHCP server

The usual case - almost the only case today - is that there is a  
single

upstream service provider and a single source of DHCP options to be
passed along to the client.  In this scenario, there's no need to  
pass

along any information identifying the source of the options.

To allow for a multihomed subscriber network, I can imagine adding  
a tag
that would be passed along with the options so the subscriber  
client can
identify the source of each option.  But, what would the client do  
with
that information?  How would the client interpret it?  What is the  
syntax

and semantics of the tagging?

Taken a step farther, sourcing information might be required even if
there is no intermediate RG and the contained option is not in  
use.  How

does a device with multiple interfaces make policy decisions about
information received on those multiple interfaces (which is pretty  
much

the question Scott asks about the container option)?

- Ralph


Well put.  It all comes down to where information is going to be
merged.  The case where a single RG client connected to multiple SP
servers is essentially already covered by MIF/6man, they just need to
document it.  If the information is merged at the RG server, then the
RG server should somehow know which interface which DHCP information
came from.  If all of the information is transparently passed to the
consumer device, then it needs the tags as well.

I don't know how the information could be usefully tagged -- the SP
server's IP address doesn't sound like a good idea.  The WG should
decide if tagging should be included in the container syntax or added
later (but documented now as needing study).

I'm CCing MIF in case people there aren't on the ietf list.

Thanks ... Scott



On Apr 7, 2009, at 2:25 PM 4/7/09, Scott Brim wrote:


I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-dhc-container-00
Reviewer: Scott Brim
Review Date: 7 April 2009
IESG Telechat date: 14 April 2009

Summary:

This draft is on the right track but has open issues.

Comments:

More significant:

 I am concerned about multiple interface scenarios as are being
 discussed in MIF and 6MAN, where either the RG is multiply  
connected
 or the end device is.  For a discussion of the sort of problems  
that

 lead to this concern, see (for example) notes from the MIF BOF at
 IETF74.

 - There must be a way to associate options with a particular
   upstream DHS they were obtained from, when the container is  
passed

   to the RG server and perhaps to the end device.  This source
   information may or may not be in the container itself -- that's  
up
   to the WG to decide.  If it is decided that the source  
information

   will not be part of the container syntax, at least the fact that
   it is necessary should be documented for people who ultimately do
   specify how container options are passed.

 - The SP server may have its ideas of how a consumer device should
   be configured, but it is not appropriate to say that the SP
   server MUST be able to control which DHCP options are transmitted
   to the consumer device.  The RG server may need to make  
decisions

   about information from multiple DHCP servers.  Perhaps you could
   say that the SP server MUST be able to provide information to
   the RG server.

Less significant:

 5.1 and 5.2

   Alignment between the v4 and v6 descriptions would be better. The
   v4 description has code in the diagram and says that code is
   OPTION_CONTAINER_V4.  The v6 description has  
OPTION_CONTAINER_V6
   in the diagram and says that option-code is  
OPTION_CONTAINER_V6.


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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-container-00

2009-04-11 Thread Michael StJohns
Sorry to stick my oar in, but does this or could this interact with the options 
specified in RFC3046 in an unexpected way? 

At 01:41 PM 4/11/2009, Ralph Droms wrote:
Scott - even knowing which interface which DHCP information came  
from may not be enough for a device with multiple interfaces.  Can  
policies for merging information be written just based on the  
characteristics of the interface - say, 3GPP versus 802.11, or IP  
address of the interface - or does the device need to differentiate  
between Verizon Wireless and Starbucks if I'm away from home?  Or  
differentiate between my ATT femtocell and my home WiFi network?

- Ralph

On Apr 11, 2009, at 6:00 AM 4/11/09, Scott Brim wrote:

Excerpts from Ralph Droms on Fri, Apr 10, 2009 03:25:49PM -0400:
Scott raises an interesting point about identifying the source of
options when delivered to clients.

BTW, Scott - what is DHS?

Sorry, DHCP server

The usual case - almost the only case today - is that there is a  
single
upstream service provider and a single source of DHCP options to be
passed along to the client.  In this scenario, there's no need to  
pass
along any information identifying the source of the options.

To allow for a multihomed subscriber network, I can imagine adding  
a tag
that would be passed along with the options so the subscriber  
client can
identify the source of each option.  But, what would the client do  
with
that information?  How would the client interpret it?  What is the  
syntax
and semantics of the tagging?

Taken a step farther, sourcing information might be required even if
there is no intermediate RG and the contained option is not in  
use.  How
does a device with multiple interfaces make policy decisions about
information received on those multiple interfaces (which is pretty  
much
the question Scott asks about the container option)?

- Ralph

Well put.  It all comes down to where information is going to be
merged.  The case where a single RG client connected to multiple SP
servers is essentially already covered by MIF/6man, they just need to
document it.  If the information is merged at the RG server, then the
RG server should somehow know which interface which DHCP information
came from.  If all of the information is transparently passed to the
consumer device, then it needs the tags as well.

I don't know how the information could be usefully tagged -- the SP
server's IP address doesn't sound like a good idea.  The WG should
decide if tagging should be included in the container syntax or added
later (but documented now as needing study).

I'm CCing MIF in case people there aren't on the ietf list.

Thanks ... Scott


On Apr 7, 2009, at 2:25 PM 4/7/09, Scott Brim wrote:

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-dhc-container-00
Reviewer: Scott Brim
Review Date: 7 April 2009
IESG Telechat date: 14 April 2009

Summary:

This draft is on the right track but has open issues.

Comments:

More significant:

 I am concerned about multiple interface scenarios as are being
 discussed in MIF and 6MAN, where either the RG is multiply  
connected
 or the end device is.  For a discussion of the sort of problems  
that
 lead to this concern, see (for example) notes from the MIF BOF at
 IETF74.

 - There must be a way to associate options with a particular
   upstream DHS they were obtained from, when the container is  
passed
   to the RG server and perhaps to the end device.  This source
   information may or may not be in the container itself -- that's  
up
   to the WG to decide.  If it is decided that the source  
information
   will not be part of the container syntax, at least the fact that
   it is necessary should be documented for people who ultimately do
   specify how container options are passed.

 - The SP server may have its ideas of how a consumer device should
   be configured, but it is not appropriate to say that the SP
   server MUST be able to control which DHCP options are transmitted
   to the consumer device.  The RG server may need to make  
decisions
   about information from multiple DHCP servers.  Perhaps you could
   say that the SP server MUST be able to provide information to
   the RG server.

Less significant:

 5.1 and 5.2

   Alignment between the v4 and v6 descriptions would be better. The
   v4 description has code in the diagram and says that code is
   OPTION_CONTAINER_V4.  The v6 description has  
OPTION_CONTAINER_V6
   in the diagram and says that option-code is  
OPTION_CONTAINER_V6.

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