[Gen-art] review of draft-brown-versioning-link-relations-05.txt

2009-12-24 Thread Francis Dupont
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-brown-versioning-link-relations-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2009-12-23
IETF LC End Date: 2010-01-11
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - A.1 page 10: I don't know if it is by design or an unexpected side
  effect of xml2rfc but I don't understand why the section 1 of the
  appendix A is at this place... IMHO it should be(come) the appendix B.

 - Authors' Addresses page 13: (twice) US - USA

Regards

francis.dup...@fdupont.fr

PS: I' like to know the real content of the draft.all aliases,
of course tools.ietf.org MTAs refuse EXPN SMTP command...
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[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 24 Dec 2009

2009-12-24 Thread Mary Barnes

Hi all,

Here's the link to the new LC assignments for this week:
http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/reviewers-091224-lc.html

The assignments are captured in the spreadsheets:
http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/gen-art.html
http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/gen-art-by-reviewer.html

The standard template is included below.
Thanks,
Mary.

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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

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Document:
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