[Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary

[Roni Even]

Hi,

 

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Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2010-12-04

IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-14

IESG Telechat date: (if known)

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. There
are some nits

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.  In the abstract the document starts with LoST,  Please expand to
Location-to-Service Translation

2.  At the end of section 3.2  in the note, I think that the first
"getServiceListBoundary" should be " getServiceBoundary"

 

 

 

Roni Even

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[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2 Dec 2010

[Mary Barnes]

Hi all,

Here's the link to the new LC assignments for last week:
http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/reviewers-101202-lc.html

The assignments are captured in the spreadsheets:
http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/gen-art.html
http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/gen-art-by-reviewer.html

The standard template is included below.

Thanks,
Mary.
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
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Document:
Reviewer:
Review Date:
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Summary:

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
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