Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt

2009-05-12 Thread DRAGE, Keith (Keith)
We did have a debate before WGLC on Info versus BCP with the AD and a few other 
experts, but I forgot to include reference to that in the PROTO writeup.

If I am ever in the position of doing other PROTO writeups, and the issue comes 
up again, I'll try to remember to include it.

regards

Keith

 -Original Message-
 From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com] 
 Sent: Tuesday, May 12, 2009 12:44 AM
 To: DRAGE, Keith (Keith)
 Cc: Shida Schubert; draft-ietf-sip-ua-priv...@tools.ietf.org; 
 General Area Review Team; sip-cha...@tools.ietf.org; Cullen Jennings
 Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt
 
 Thanks. I have no problem with this explanation. Maybe it 
 will become a candidate for BCP status in a year or two.
 
Brian
 
 On 2009-05-12 09:37, DRAGE, Keith (Keith) wrote:
  So to summarise, my understanding is that this document 
 provides a way of using the protocol tools that are 
 normatively specified elsewhere, rather than creating the 
 protocol itself. As such informational would appear to be appropriate.
  
  regards
  
  Keith
  
  
  From: Shida Schubert [mailto:sh...@ntt-at.com]
  Sent: Thursday, May 07, 2009 1:35 PM
  To: Brian E Carpenter
  Cc: draft-ietf-sip-ua-priv...@tools.ietf.org; General Area Review 
  Team; sip-cha...@tools.ietf.org; Cullen Jennings
  Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt
  
  
   I have sent the copy of this e-mail from my personal 
 e-mail address, 
  so sending it again from the address listed in the draft.
   I apologize if people are receiving a duplicate copy.
  
  Brian;
  
   Many thanks for your review.
  
   I have pasted relevant text from your comments and replied to them 
  inline..
  
  [Brian]
  Comments:
  -
  
  Apart from the small point mentioned below, I didn't find any 
  technical issues with this draft, but it left me feeling a little 
  uncomfortable. It isn't a standard, it isn't an experiment, 
 it isn't a 
  description of current practice, so what is it?
  [Brian]
  
   We had a draft which clarified the use of RFC3323 (Currently in the
  AUTH48 state) along with the recommendation to use tools 
 that were not 
  available at the time of RFC3323. WG decided to take on the portion 
  which described the toolset that were recently defined to obtain 
  user's privacy as a BCP, and we progressed the portion that 
 clarified 
  the use of RFC3323 as a separate draft and submitted as an 
 independent 
  submission.
  
   As the toolset recommended in this draft aren't widely 
 deployed and 
  not even an RFCs, the WG agreed to change the status to 
 informational.  
  (We really believed the referenced specifications namely 
 GRUU and TURN 
  were to be an RFCs by the time this draft was to be published.)
  
   There are more and more implementations of GRUU observed 
 at interop 
  test events and some in deployments and TURN are seeing 
 tractions as 
  well, so putting this out there will ensure the use of 
 proper toolsets 
  to obtain privacy in SIP without relying on what is defined in 
  RFC3323.
  
  [Brian]
  Minor issues:
  -
  
  Referring to section 5.1.2, note that in RFC5364, 
 sip:anonym...@anonymous.invalid
  is a MUST rather than a SHOULD. I don't know whether that interacts 
  with the current draft in any way.
  [Brian]
  
   Sniplet from the introduction of RFC5364 --
  
Additionally, we provide the sender with the
 capability of indicating in the URI list that one or 
 more resources
 should be anonymized, so that some recipients' URIs are 
 not disclosed
 to the other recipients.  Instead, these URIs are replaced with
 anonymous URIs.
   --
  
   So the anonymization is for not the sender itself but for the 
  recipients of the copied messages (receivers). The 
 UA-privacy is about 
  obtaining the privacy of the sender thus there is no 
 interaction that 
  we have to worry about between this draft and RFC5364. But 
 thanks for 
  bringing this up anyhow.
  
   As for the reference I will update the reference and 
 resubmit the version 08 of the draft.
  
   Many Thanks
Regards
 Shida
  
  
  On 5-May-09, at 11:45 AM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
  
  draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07-carpenter.txt
  
  
 
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt

2009-05-11 Thread DRAGE, Keith (Keith)
So to summarise, my understanding is that this document provides a way of using 
the protocol tools that are normatively specified elsewhere, rather than 
creating the protocol itself. As such informational would appear to be 
appropriate.

regards

Keith


From: Shida Schubert [mailto:sh...@ntt-at.com]
Sent: Thursday, May 07, 2009 1:35 PM
To: Brian E Carpenter
Cc: draft-ietf-sip-ua-priv...@tools.ietf.org; General Area Review Team; 
sip-cha...@tools.ietf.org; Cullen Jennings
Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt


 I have sent the copy of this e-mail from my personal e-mail address,
so sending it again from the address listed in the draft.
 I apologize if people are receiving a duplicate copy.

Brian;

 Many thanks for your review.

 I have pasted relevant text from your comments and replied to
them inline..

[Brian]
Comments:
-

Apart from the small point mentioned below, I didn't find any technical
issues with this draft, but it left me feeling a little uncomfortable. It isn't
a standard, it isn't an experiment, it isn't a description of current practice,
so what is it?
[Brian]

 We had a draft which clarified the use of RFC3323 (Currently in the
AUTH48 state) along with the recommendation to use tools that were
not available at the time of RFC3323. WG decided to take on the
portion which described the toolset that were recently defined to obtain
user's privacy as a BCP, and we progressed the portion that clarified
the use of RFC3323 as a separate draft and submitted as an independent
submission.

 As the toolset recommended in this draft aren't widely deployed
and not even an RFCs, the WG agreed to change the status to
informational.  (We really believed the referenced specifications
namely GRUU and TURN were to be an RFCs by the time this
draft was to be published.)

 There are more and more implementations of GRUU observed at
interop test events and some in deployments and TURN are seeing
tractions as well, so putting this out there will ensure the use of
proper toolsets to obtain privacy in SIP without relying on what is
defined in RFC3323.

[Brian]
Minor issues:
-

Referring to section 5.1.2, note that in RFC5364, 
sip:anonym...@anonymous.invalid
is a MUST rather than a SHOULD. I don't know whether that interacts with the
current draft in any way.
[Brian]

 Sniplet from the introduction of RFC5364 --

  Additionally, we provide the sender with the
   capability of indicating in the URI list that one or more resources
   should be anonymized, so that some recipients' URIs are not disclosed
   to the other recipients.  Instead, these URIs are replaced with
   anonymous URIs.
 --

 So the anonymization is for not the sender itself but for the recipients
of the copied messages (receivers). The UA-privacy is about obtaining
the privacy of the sender thus there is no interaction that we have to
worry about between this draft and RFC5364. But thanks for bringing
this up anyhow.

 As for the reference I will update the reference and resubmit the version 08 
of the draft.

 Many Thanks
  Regards
   Shida


On 5-May-09, at 11:45 AM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:

draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07-carpenter.txt

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt

2009-05-11 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Thanks. I have no problem with this explanation. Maybe it will
become a candidate for BCP status in a year or two.

   Brian

On 2009-05-12 09:37, DRAGE, Keith (Keith) wrote:
 So to summarise, my understanding is that this document provides a way of 
 using the protocol tools that are normatively specified elsewhere, rather 
 than creating the protocol itself. As such informational would appear to be 
 appropriate.
 
 regards
 
 Keith
 
 
 From: Shida Schubert [mailto:sh...@ntt-at.com]
 Sent: Thursday, May 07, 2009 1:35 PM
 To: Brian E Carpenter
 Cc: draft-ietf-sip-ua-priv...@tools.ietf.org; General Area Review Team; 
 sip-cha...@tools.ietf.org; Cullen Jennings
 Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt
 
 
  I have sent the copy of this e-mail from my personal e-mail address,
 so sending it again from the address listed in the draft.
  I apologize if people are receiving a duplicate copy.
 
 Brian;
 
  Many thanks for your review.
 
  I have pasted relevant text from your comments and replied to
 them inline..
 
 [Brian]
 Comments:
 -
 
 Apart from the small point mentioned below, I didn't find any technical
 issues with this draft, but it left me feeling a little uncomfortable. It 
 isn't
 a standard, it isn't an experiment, it isn't a description of current 
 practice,
 so what is it?
 [Brian]
 
  We had a draft which clarified the use of RFC3323 (Currently in the
 AUTH48 state) along with the recommendation to use tools that were
 not available at the time of RFC3323. WG decided to take on the
 portion which described the toolset that were recently defined to obtain
 user's privacy as a BCP, and we progressed the portion that clarified
 the use of RFC3323 as a separate draft and submitted as an independent
 submission.
 
  As the toolset recommended in this draft aren't widely deployed
 and not even an RFCs, the WG agreed to change the status to
 informational.  (We really believed the referenced specifications
 namely GRUU and TURN were to be an RFCs by the time this
 draft was to be published.)
 
  There are more and more implementations of GRUU observed at
 interop test events and some in deployments and TURN are seeing
 tractions as well, so putting this out there will ensure the use of
 proper toolsets to obtain privacy in SIP without relying on what is
 defined in RFC3323.
 
 [Brian]
 Minor issues:
 -
 
 Referring to section 5.1.2, note that in RFC5364, 
 sip:anonym...@anonymous.invalid
 is a MUST rather than a SHOULD. I don't know whether that interacts with the
 current draft in any way.
 [Brian]
 
  Sniplet from the introduction of RFC5364 --
 
   Additionally, we provide the sender with the
capability of indicating in the URI list that one or more resources
should be anonymized, so that some recipients' URIs are not disclosed
to the other recipients.  Instead, these URIs are replaced with
anonymous URIs.
  --
 
  So the anonymization is for not the sender itself but for the recipients
 of the copied messages (receivers). The UA-privacy is about obtaining
 the privacy of the sender thus there is no interaction that we have to
 worry about between this draft and RFC5364. But thanks for bringing
 this up anyhow.
 
  As for the reference I will update the reference and resubmit the version 08 
 of the draft.
 
  Many Thanks
   Regards
Shida
 
 
 On 5-May-09, at 11:45 AM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
 
 draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07-carpenter.txt
 
 
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt

2009-05-07 Thread Shida Schubert


 I have sent the copy of this e-mail from my personal e-mail address,
so sending it again from the address listed in the draft.
 I apologize if people are receiving a duplicate copy.

Brian;

 Many thanks for your review.

 I have pasted relevant text from your comments and replied to
them inline..

[Brian]
Comments:
-

Apart from the small point mentioned below, I didn't find any technical
issues with this draft, but it left me feeling a little uncomfortable.  
It isn't
a standard, it isn't an experiment, it isn't a description of current  
practice,

so what is it?
[Brian]

 We had a draft which clarified the use of RFC3323 (Currently in the
AUTH48 state) along with the recommendation to use tools that were
not available at the time of RFC3323. WG decided to take on the
portion which described the toolset that were recently defined to obtain
user's privacy as a BCP, and we progressed the portion that clarified
the use of RFC3323 as a separate draft and submitted as an independent
submission.

 As the toolset recommended in this draft aren't widely deployed
and not even an RFCs, the WG agreed to change the status to
informational.  (We really believed the referenced specifications
namely GRUU and TURN were to be an RFCs by the time this
draft was to be published.)

 There are more and more implementations of GRUU observed at
interop test events and some in deployments and TURN are seeing
tractions as well, so putting this out there will ensure the use of
proper toolsets to obtain privacy in SIP without relying on what is
defined in RFC3323.

[Brian]
Minor issues:
-

Referring to section 5.1.2, note that in RFC5364, sip:anonym...@anonymous.invalid 

is a MUST rather than a SHOULD. I don't know whether that interacts  
with the

current draft in any way.
[Brian]

 Sniplet from the introduction of RFC5364 --

  Additionally, we provide the sender with the
   capability of indicating in the URI list that one or more resources
   should be anonymized, so that some recipients' URIs are not  
disclosed

   to the other recipients.  Instead, these URIs are replaced with
   anonymous URIs.
 --

 So the anonymization is for not the sender itself but for the  
recipients

of the copied messages (receivers). The UA-privacy is about obtaining
the privacy of the sender thus there is no interaction that we have to
worry about between this draft and RFC5364. But thanks for bringing
this up anyhow.

 As for the reference I will update the reference and resubmit the  
version 08 of the draft.


 Many Thanks
  Regards
   Shida


On 5-May-09, at 11:45 AM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:


draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07-carpenter.txt


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[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt

2009-05-04 Thread Brian E Carpenter
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-07.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2009-05-05
IETF LC End Date: 2009-05-11
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary:  Ready


Comments: 
- 

Apart from the small point mentioned below, I didn't find any technical
issues with this draft, but it left me feeling a little uncomfortable. It isn't
a standard, it isn't an experiment, it isn't a description of current practice,
so what is it?


Minor issues: 
-

Referring to section 5.1.2, note that in RFC5364, 
sip:anonym...@anonymous.invalid
is a MUST rather than a SHOULD. I don't know whether that interacts with the
current draft in any way.


Editorial issues:
-

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