Re: 3-column jakarta.apache.org?

2004-12-29 Thread James Mason
Henri,

Looks good. Big improvement, I think :). I especially like how the third
column brings more information above the status bar. A few comments:

1) The first paragraph sounds more like it's describing the ASF than
describing Jakarta. A suggestion:

-
The Jakarta Project offers a diverse set of open source Java solutions
and is a part of [The Apache Software Foundation] (ASF). Like all ASF
[projects] Jakarta encourages a collaborative, consensus-based
development process under an [open software license].
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2) The first sentence of the second paragraph seems awkward to me. It's
not immediately apparent why that information is useful. If I don't know
what a TLP is it doesn't really help me, and if I'm looking for a TLP
that used to be part of Jakarta it doesn't tell me how to find it.
Unfortunately I haven't been able to come up with a better wording.
Hopefully someone else is feeling inspired :).

3) Graduated on the left needs to be in the context of a noun. Maybe
swapping the left and right columns (leaving About on the left) and
making the right column Projects with subheadings of Subprojects and
Graduated? That might take up too much space, though.

4) Removing the margin from the ul that makes up the news would help
spread that section out a bit.

-James



On Wed, 2004-12-29 at 14:01 -0500, Henri Yandell wrote:
 Here's my mockup proposal:
 
 http://www.apache.org/~bayard/mock-jakarta-frontpage.html
 
 Changes:
3 column
Strikethrough of links/pages I'd like to kill.
Less news.
Removal of Related section (aim is to make this a new page).
Rewrite of the welcome message to hopefully say the same main thing,
 but use a lot less space.
 
 The aim would also be to switch entirely over to the XSL build version 
 which seems to work fine and dump Anakia creation.
 
 Hen
 
 On Wed, 29 Dec 2004, Henri Yandell wrote:
 
 
  I'm a fan of the www.apache.org look and how it gives us a lot more 
  usability 
  in terms of available column space. I'd like to change Jakarta to the 
  3-columns (though not the lf or anything).
 
  Switching to 3-columns means less space in the center for content, however 
  I 
  also want to simplify the content so I think it will look fine.
 
  Any views?
 
  Hen
 
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Re: 3-column jakarta.apache.org?

2004-12-29 Thread James Mason
Comments below.

On Wed, 2004-12-29 at 21:41 -0500, Henri Yandell wrote:
 
 On Wed, 29 Dec 2004, James Mason wrote:
 
  Henri,
 
  Looks good. Big improvement, I think :). I especially like how the third
  column brings more information above the status bar. A few comments:
 
 Thanks :)
 
  1) The first paragraph sounds more like it's describing the ASF than
  describing Jakarta. A suggestion:
 
  -
  The Jakarta Project offers a diverse set of open source Java solutions
  and is a part of [The Apache Software Foundation] (ASF). Like all ASF
  [projects] Jakarta encourages a collaborative, consensus-based
  development process under an [open software license].
  -
 
 It actually is meant to be describing the ASF :) To cut down on text, I 
 threw away 'jakarta, like all ASF, encourages...' to the simpler 'ASF 
 encourages'. It's just as true and uses less space. I'd like to dump 'for 
 all its projects' to be honest, but didn't want to lose the link to the 
 ASF Project page.
 
 It's tempting to chop the last 4 words and add a ASF link on the right, 
 together with the other ASF ones, under a new heading of About Apache or 
 something.

How important is it to put the projects link right in text? I like the
way it reads without the last four words, so if it works to put the link
elsewhere I think it would be good.

 
  2) The first sentence of the second paragraph seems awkward to me. It's
  not immediately apparent why that information is useful. If I don't know
  what a TLP is it doesn't really help me, and if I'm looking for a TLP
  that used to be part of Jakarta it doesn't tell me how to find it.
  Unfortunately I haven't been able to come up with a better wording.
  Hopefully someone else is feeling inspired :).
 
 Two big parts I'm looking for in this paragraph.
 
 1) Jakarta = umbrella project. I don't want to say umbrella as that's an 
 odd metaphor to the uninitiated.

How about parent?

 
 2) Definition of graduating, attempt at an explanation of why projects are 
 no longer to be found in Jakarta (a common user confusion I think). The 
 TLP acronym isn't highly important (at first I thought it was good to get 
 it accross, but it's too much info). Linking to the bit above, I could 
 dump the TLP acronym and make this the link to the ASF project page.

Hmmm... How about Jakarta shepherds?? many [subprojects], many of which
have grown and [graduated] into top level ASF [projects].

Some synonyms for shepherds: guides, oversees, supervises, watches over,
is responsible for.

I think it would be good to link to the list of graduated projects from
the text.

 
  3) Graduated on the left needs to be in the context of a noun. Maybe
  swapping the left and right columns (leaving About on the left) and
  making the right column Projects with subheadings of Subprojects and
  Graduated? That might take up too much space, though.
 
 Gah! Much as I want to scoff at the suggestion for the pain it causes, I 
 think you're right, to be correct it should be a noun.
 
 Putting the projects on the right was an option, but I think that 
 consumers will mostly want to click through to a subproject, rather than 
 any other link there and the LHS is the prime navigation spot.
 
 It also matches the www.apache.org approach, which is nice for the 
 symmetry of a user clicking through and not having to adjust their 
 navigation flow.

Looking at apache.org, how about moving the About Jakarta section to the
right. This would parallel the Foundation section on apache.org.

What I was thinking of for projects is something like:

++
|=Projects===|
+--Subprojects---+
| * Alexandia|
| * etc...   |
+--Graduated-+
| * Ant  |
| * etc...   |
++

I have two concerns with this: It takes up more space and nothing else
uses subheadings. It does put Graduated into context with a noun,
though.

 
 Possibly I could change Graduated to Graduated Subprojects? Seems a bit 
 long. 'Graduates' seems wrong. Looking for a good label here :)
 
  4) Removing the margin from the ul that makes up the news would help
  spread that section out a bit.
 
 Yep. I'm going to hassle a few web designers I know on spacing issues once 
 I've updated the XSL build to output this site. All their suggestions will 
 involve CSS, so I'll need to have a CSS sheet by then I suspect.

If you need a hand here, let me know. Part of my day job is web design.

-James

 
 Thoughts?
 
 Hen


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[ANNOUNCE] Release of Slide 2.1

2004-12-26 Thread James Mason
The Jakarta Slide community is pleased to announce the release of Slide
2.1. This is a combined bug fix and feature release. Feedback is greatly
appreciated, especially in the form of bug reports.

You can download Slide2.1 from:
http://jakarta.apache.org/slide/download.html

Release notes are at:
http://cvs.apache.org/viewcvs.cgi/jakarta-slide/RELEASE-NOTES-2.1?rev=1.1.2.1

The Slide project page is:
http://jakarta.apache.org/slide

-James
(on behalf of the Jakarta Slide community)




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Re: [vote] moving jakarta-site2 to subversion

2004-12-18 Thread James Mason
+1

It sounds like the potential pitfalls have been covered.

-James

On Sat, 2004-12-18 at 22:39 -0500, Tim O'Brien wrote:
 This is the simplest SVN migration in Jakarta.  The migration
 instructions follow for review:
 
 http://wiki.apache.org/jakarta/Site2_20Conversion_20Instructions
 
 72 hours for this vote - classify this as a public release vote requires
 majority (at least 3 +1s and more +1s than -1s )
 
 [ ] +1, migrate jakarta-site2 CVS to /jakarta/site SVN
 [ ] +0
 [ ] -0
 [ ] -1, No
 
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Re: Request for karma for jakarta-site2

2004-10-12 Thread James Mason
Thanks, Stefan.

-James

On Mon, 2004-10-11 at 23:14, Stefan Bodewig wrote:
 done
 
 Stefan
 
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Request for karma for jakarta-site2

2004-10-10 Thread James Mason
As per the instructions at http://wiki.apache.org/jakarta/KarmaInfo I am
requesting karma for the jakarta-site2 CVS module. As part of the
upcoming Slide beta release I will need to update the download links.

-James


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