[PATCH] docs: fix literal quoted spaces

2017-05-31 Thread Adam Dinwoodie
When compiling the documentation, asciidoc thinks a backtick surrounded
by whitespace shouldn't be interpreted as marking the start or end of a
literal.  In most cases, that's useful behaviour, but in the git-pull
documentation the space is clearly intended to be part of the monospace
formatted text.

Instead, use + to avoid asciidoc's literal passthrough, and encode the
space as {sp}.  In particular, this means asciidoc will correctly detect
the end of the monospace formatting, rather than having it continue past
the backtick.

Signed-off-by: Adam Dinwoodie 
---
 Documentation/git-pull.txt | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-pull.txt b/Documentation/git-pull.txt
index 942af8e0f..da31c5e40 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-pull.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-pull.txt
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ present while on branch ``, that value is used 
instead of
 
 In order to determine what URL to use to fetch from, the value
 of the configuration `remote..url` is consulted
-and if there is not any such variable, the value on `URL: ` line
+and if there is not any such variable, the value on +URL:{sp}+ line
 in `$GIT_DIR/remotes/` file is used.
 
 In order to determine what remote branches to fetch (and
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ optionally store in the remote-tracking branches) when the 
command is
 run without any refspec parameters on the command line, values
 of the configuration variable `remote..fetch` are
 consulted, and if there aren't any, `$GIT_DIR/remotes/`
-file is consulted and its `Pull: ` lines are used.
+file is consulted and its +Pull:{sp}+ lines are used.
 In addition to the refspec formats described in the OPTIONS
 section, you can have a globbing refspec that looks like this:
 
-- 
2.12.3



Re: [PATCH] docs: fix literal quoted spaces

2017-05-31 Thread Jeff King
On Wed, May 31, 2017 at 04:06:24PM +0100, Adam Dinwoodie wrote:

> When compiling the documentation, asciidoc thinks a backtick surrounded
> by whitespace shouldn't be interpreted as marking the start or end of a
> literal.  In most cases, that's useful behaviour, but in the git-pull
> documentation the space is clearly intended to be part of the monospace
> formatted text.

Good catch.

> Instead, use + to avoid asciidoc's literal passthrough, and encode the
> space as {sp}.  In particular, this means asciidoc will correctly detect
> the end of the monospace formatting, rather than having it continue past
> the backtick.

In these particular cases, is the space adding anything? Would a simpler
fix be to just use:

  ...the value on `URL:` line

We've had such headaches with other entities like {sp} between different
asciidoc versions (not to mention asciidoctor) that I tend to reach for
the simplest solution.

(I'd also suggest the minor English correct of saying "_the_ URL line";
that's orthogonal to what you're trying to fix, but may make sense on
top while we're here).

-Peff


Re: [PATCH] docs: fix literal quoted spaces

2017-05-31 Thread Junio C Hamano
Jeff King  writes:

> On Wed, May 31, 2017 at 04:06:24PM +0100, Adam Dinwoodie wrote:
>
>> When compiling the documentation, asciidoc thinks a backtick surrounded
>> by whitespace shouldn't be interpreted as marking the start or end of a
>> literal.  In most cases, that's useful behaviour, but in the git-pull
>> documentation the space is clearly intended to be part of the monospace
>> formatted text.
>
> Good catch.
>
>> Instead, use + to avoid asciidoc's literal passthrough, and encode the
>> space as {sp}.  In particular, this means asciidoc will correctly detect
>> the end of the monospace formatting, rather than having it continue past
>> the backtick.
>
> In these particular cases, is the space adding anything? Would a simpler
> fix be to just use:
>
>   ...the value on `URL:` line
>
> We've had such headaches with other entities like {sp} between different
> asciidoc versions (not to mention asciidoctor) that I tend to reach for
> the simplest solution.

Me, too (and no, I am not from AOL).  If `URL:` is typeset correctly
the approach to drop the space is much more preferred.

> (I'd also suggest the minor English correct of saying "_the_ URL line";
> that's orthogonal to what you're trying to fix, but may make sense on
> top while we're here).
>
> -Peff


Re: [PATCH] docs: fix literal quoted spaces

2017-06-01 Thread Adam Dinwoodie
On Thu, Jun 01, 2017 at 11:06:18AM +0900, Junio C Hamano wrote:
> Jeff King  writes:
> 
> > On Wed, May 31, 2017 at 04:06:24PM +0100, Adam Dinwoodie wrote:
> >
> >> Instead, use + to avoid asciidoc's literal passthrough, and encode the
> >> space as {sp}.  In particular, this means asciidoc will correctly detect
> >> the end of the monospace formatting, rather than having it continue past
> >> the backtick.
> >
> > In these particular cases, is the space adding anything? Would a simpler
> > fix be to just use:
> >
> >   ...the value on `URL:` line
> >
> > We've had such headaches with other entities like {sp} between different
> > asciidoc versions (not to mention asciidoctor) that I tend to reach for
> > the simplest solution.
> 
> Me, too (and no, I am not from AOL).  If `URL:` is typeset correctly
> the approach to drop the space is much more preferred.

I decided against that fix on the assumption that there was _some_
reason for including the space, even if I couldn't immediately see it.
Given Junio wrote the original text and is now suggesting removing it,
I'll respin the patch now.

> > (I'd also suggest the minor English correct of saying "_the_ URL line";
> > that's orthogonal to what you're trying to fix, but may make sense on
> > top while we're here).

Sure.  I'll include that in the follow up patch.