Make many textual tweaks to the 2.4.0 release notes.
Signed-off-by: Michael Haggerty
---
Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt | 336 ---
1 file changed, 172 insertions(+), 164 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt
index 7b23ca3..cde64be 100644
--- a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt
+++ b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt
@@ -6,19 +6,19 @@ Backward compatibility warning(s)
This release has a few changes in the user-visible output from
Porcelain commands. These are not meant to be parsed by scripts, but
-the users still may want to be aware of the changes:
+users still may want to be aware of the changes:
- * Output from "git log --decorate" (and "%d" format specifier used in
- the userformat "--format=" parameter "git log" family of
- command takes) used to list "HEAD" just like other tips of branch
- names, separated with a comma in between. E.g.
+ * The output from "git log --decorate" (and, more generally, the "%d"
+ format specifier used in the "--format=" parameter to the
+ "git log" family of commands) has changed. It used to list "HEAD"
+ just like other branches; e.g.,
$ git log --decorate -1 master
commit bdb0f6788fa5e3cacc4315e9ff318a27b2676ff4 (HEAD, master)
...
- This release updates the output slightly when HEAD refers to the tip
- of a branch whose name is also shown in the output. The above is
+ This release changes the output slightly when HEAD refers to a
+ branch whose name is also shown in the output. The above is now
shown as:
$ git log --decorate -1 master
@@ -26,15 +26,15 @@ the users still may want to be aware of the changes:
...
* The phrasing "git branch" uses to describe a detached HEAD has been
- updated to match that of "git status":
+ updated to agree with the phrasing used by "git status":
-- When the HEAD is at the same commit as it was originally
+- When HEAD is at the same commit as when it was originally
detached, they now both show "detached at ".
-- When the HEAD has moved since it was originally detached,
- they now both show "detached from ".
+- When HEAD has moved since it was originally detached, they now
+ both show "detached from ".
-Earlier "git branch" always used "from"
+ Previously, "git branch" always used "from".
Updates since v2.3
@@ -46,8 +46,9 @@ Ports
platforms with smaller SSIZE_MAX, leading to read(2)/write(2)
failures.
- * We did not check the curl library version before using
- CURLOPT_PROXYAUTH feature that may not exist.
+ * We did not check the curl library version before using the
+ CURLOPT_PROXYAUTH feature, which did not exist in older versions of
+ the library.
* We now detect number of CPUs on older BSD-derived systems.
@@ -66,99 +67,105 @@ UI, Workflows & Features
* "git log --invert-grep --grep=WIP" will show only commits that do
not have the string "WIP" in their messages.
- * "git push" has been taught a "--atomic" option that makes push to
- update more than one ref an "all-or-none" affair.
+ * "git push" has been taught an "--atomic" option that makes a push
+ that updates more than one ref an "all-or-none" affair.
- * Extending the "push to deploy" added in 2.3, the behaviour of "git
- push" when updating the branch that is checked out can now be
- tweaked by push-to-checkout hook.
+ * Extending the "push to deploy" feature that was added in 2.3, the
+ behaviour of "git push" when updating the branch that is checked
+ out can now be tweaked by a "push-to-checkout" hook.
- * Using environment variable LANGUAGE and friends on the client side,
- HTTP-based transports now send Accept-Language when making requests.
+ * HTTP-based transports now send Accept-Language when making
+ requests. The languages to accept are inferred from environment
+ variables on the client side (LANGUAGE, etc).
* "git send-email" used to accept a mistaken "y" (or "yes") as an
- answer to "What encoding do you want to use [UTF-8]? " without
- questioning. Now it asks for confirmation when the answer looks
- too short to be a valid encoding name.
+ answer to "What encoding do you want to use [UTF-8]?" without
+ questioning. Now it asks for confirmation when the answer looks too
+ short to be a valid encoding name.
* When "git apply --whitespace=fix" fixed whitespace errors in the
common context lines, the command reports that it did so.
- * "git status" now allows the "-v" to be given twice to show the
- differences that are left in the working tree not to be committed.
+ * "git status" now allows the "-v" option to be given twice, in which
+ case it also shows the differences in the working tree that are not
+ staged to be committed.
- * "git cherry-pick" used to clean-up the log message even when it is
- merely replaying an existing commit. It now replays the mess
