Re: 01/01: gnu: Add pbzip2.

2015-10-30 Thread Mark H Weaver
Hi Efraim,

Efraim Flashner  writes:

> On Thu, 22 Oct 2015 11:17:11 -0400
> Mark H Weaver  wrote:
>
>> Efraim Flashner  writes:
>> 
>> > efraim pushed a commit to branch master
>> > in repository guix.
>> >
>> > commit 5d47eab0242d6f89a6837123141acdae68745328
>> > Author: Efraim Flashner 
>> > Date:   Thu Oct 22 13:12:07 2015 +0300
>> >
>> > gnu: Add pbzip2.
>> > 
>> > * gnu/packages/compression.scm (pbzip2): New variable.  
>> 
>> Thanks for this, but did you post it to guix-devel for review?
>> It would be good to do so in the future.
> Oops, definately forgot that this time. I'll be better about that in the 
> future.
>
>> 
>> Please see below for comments.
>> 
>> > ---
>> >  gnu/packages/compression.scm |   33 +
>> >  1 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 0 deletions(-)
>> >
>> > diff --git a/gnu/packages/compression.scm b/gnu/packages/compression.scm
>> > index 941844b..0bb3919 100644
>> > --- a/gnu/packages/compression.scm
>> > +++ b/gnu/packages/compression.scm
>> > @@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
>> >  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Ricardo Wurmus 
>> >  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Leo Famulari 
>> >  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Jeff Mickey 
>> > +;;; Copyright © 2015 Efraim Flashner 
>> >  ;;;
>> >  ;;; This file is part of GNU Guix.
>> >  ;;;
>> > @@ -225,6 +226,38 @@ decompression.")
>> >"See LICENSE in the distribution."))
>> >(home-page "http://www.bzip.org/";
>> >  
>> > +(define-public pbzip2
>> > +  (package
>> > +(name "pbzip2")
>> > +(version "1.1.12")
>> > +(source (origin
>> > + (method url-fetch)
>> > + (uri (string-append "https://launchpad.net/pbzip2/1.1/"; 
>> > version
>> > +"/+download/" name "-" version 
>> > ".tar.gz"))  
>> 
>> The quote (") on the line above should be aligned with the quote on the
>> line above it.
> Ok
>
>> 
>> Also, instead of hard coding "1.1" in the URI, please use
>> 'version-major+minor' instead.  You'll find many examples of it in
>> gnu/packages/*.scm
> Ok, found one :). I wasn't sure what (version-major+minor version) was before
>
>> 
>> > + (sha256
>> > +  (base32
>> > +   "1vk6065dv3a47p86vmp8hv3n1ygd9hraz0gq89gvzlx7lmcb6fsp"
>> > +(build-system gnu-build-system)
>> > +(inputs
>> > + `(("bzip2", bzip2)))
>> > +(arguments
>> > + `(#:tests? #f ; no tests
>> > +   #:phases (modify-phases %standard-phases
>> > +  (replace 'configure
>> > +   (lambda* (#:key outputs #:allow-other-keys)
>> > +(substitute* "Makefile"
>> > +(("/usr") (assoc-ref outputs "out")))
>> > +#t)  
>> 
>> The alignment of the lines above is very confusing, to say the least.
>> 
>> Anyway, it would be better to simply remove the 'configure' phase and
>> instead add this:
>> 
>>   #:make-flags (list (string-append "PREFIX=" %output))
> That sure is shorter than what I had there before. fixed.
>
>> 
>> > +(home-page "http://compression.ca/pbzip2/";)
>> > +(synopsis "Parallel bzip2 implementation")
>> > +(description
>> > + "Pbzip2 is a parallel implementation of the bzip2 block-sorting file
>> > +compressor that uses pthreads and achieves near-linear speedup on SMP 
>> > machines.
>> > +The output of this version is fully compatible with bzip2 v1.0.2 (ie: 
>> > anything
>> > +compressed with pbzip2 can be decompressed with bzip2).")  
>> 
>> s/ie:/i.e./
> ok
>
>> 
>> > +(license (license:non-copyleft "file://COPYING"
>> > +"See COPYING in the distribution."  
>> 
>> Please align the open quotes.
> ok
>
>> 
>>  Thanks,
>>Mark
>
> I'll hold onto my patch for a little bit longer to see if anyone else has any
> suggestions, and then I'll push the fixes.

It's been a week with no further suggestions, so I suggest that you
proceed to push the fixes.

 Thanks,
   Mark



Re: 01/01: gnu: Add pbzip2.

2015-10-22 Thread Efraim Flashner
On Thu, 22 Oct 2015 11:17:11 -0400
Mark H Weaver  wrote:

> Efraim Flashner  writes:
> 
> > efraim pushed a commit to branch master
> > in repository guix.
> >
> > commit 5d47eab0242d6f89a6837123141acdae68745328
> > Author: Efraim Flashner 
> > Date:   Thu Oct 22 13:12:07 2015 +0300
> >
> > gnu: Add pbzip2.
> > 
> > * gnu/packages/compression.scm (pbzip2): New variable.  
> 
> Thanks for this, but did you post it to guix-devel for review?
> It would be good to do so in the future.
Oops, definately forgot that this time. I'll be better about that in the future.

> 
> Please see below for comments.
> 
> > ---
> >  gnu/packages/compression.scm |   33 +
> >  1 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 0 deletions(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/gnu/packages/compression.scm b/gnu/packages/compression.scm
> > index 941844b..0bb3919 100644
> > --- a/gnu/packages/compression.scm
> > +++ b/gnu/packages/compression.scm
> > @@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
> >  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Ricardo Wurmus 
> >  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Leo Famulari 
> >  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Jeff Mickey 
> > +;;; Copyright © 2015 Efraim Flashner 
> >  ;;;
> >  ;;; This file is part of GNU Guix.
> >  ;;;
> > @@ -225,6 +226,38 @@ decompression.")
> >"See LICENSE in the distribution."))
> >(home-page "http://www.bzip.org/";
> >  
> > +(define-public pbzip2
> > +  (package
> > +(name "pbzip2")
> > +(version "1.1.12")
> > +(source (origin
> > + (method url-fetch)
> > + (uri (string-append "https://launchpad.net/pbzip2/1.1/"; 
> > version
> > +"/+download/" name "-" version ".tar.gz")) 
> >  
> 
> The quote (") on the line above should be aligned with the quote on the
> line above it.
Ok

> 
> Also, instead of hard coding "1.1" in the URI, please use
> 'version-major+minor' instead.  You'll find many examples of it in
> gnu/packages/*.scm
Ok, found one :). I wasn't sure what (version-major+minor version) was before

> 
> > + (sha256
> > +  (base32
> > +   "1vk6065dv3a47p86vmp8hv3n1ygd9hraz0gq89gvzlx7lmcb6fsp"
> > +(build-system gnu-build-system)
> > +(inputs
> > + `(("bzip2", bzip2)))
> > +(arguments
> > + `(#:tests? #f ; no tests
> > +   #:phases (modify-phases %standard-phases
> > +  (replace 'configure
> > +   (lambda* (#:key outputs #:allow-other-keys)
> > +(substitute* "Makefile"
> > +(("/usr") (assoc-ref outputs "out")))
> > +#t)  
> 
> The alignment of the lines above is very confusing, to say the least.
> 
> Anyway, it would be better to simply remove the 'configure' phase and
> instead add this:
> 
>   #:make-flags (list (string-append "PREFIX=" %output))
That sure is shorter than what I had there before. fixed.

> 
> > +(home-page "http://compression.ca/pbzip2/";)
> > +(synopsis "Parallel bzip2 implementation")
> > +(description
> > + "Pbzip2 is a parallel implementation of the bzip2 block-sorting file
> > +compressor that uses pthreads and achieves near-linear speedup on SMP 
> > machines.
> > +The output of this version is fully compatible with bzip2 v1.0.2 (ie: 
> > anything
> > +compressed with pbzip2 can be decompressed with bzip2).")  
> 
> s/ie:/i.e./
ok

> 
> > +(license (license:non-copyleft "file://COPYING"
> > +"See COPYING in the distribution."  
> 
> Please align the open quotes.
ok

> 
>  Thanks,
>Mark

I'll hold onto my patch for a little bit longer to see if anyone else has any
suggestions, and then I'll push the fixes.

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Re: 01/01: gnu: Add pbzip2.

2015-10-22 Thread Mark H Weaver
Efraim Flashner  writes:

> efraim pushed a commit to branch master
> in repository guix.
>
> commit 5d47eab0242d6f89a6837123141acdae68745328
> Author: Efraim Flashner 
> Date:   Thu Oct 22 13:12:07 2015 +0300
>
> gnu: Add pbzip2.
> 
> * gnu/packages/compression.scm (pbzip2): New variable.

Thanks for this, but did you post it to guix-devel for review?
It would be good to do so in the future.

Please see below for comments.

> ---
>  gnu/packages/compression.scm |   33 +
>  1 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 0 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/gnu/packages/compression.scm b/gnu/packages/compression.scm
> index 941844b..0bb3919 100644
> --- a/gnu/packages/compression.scm
> +++ b/gnu/packages/compression.scm
> @@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
>  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Ricardo Wurmus 
>  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Leo Famulari 
>  ;;; Copyright © 2015 Jeff Mickey 
> +;;; Copyright © 2015 Efraim Flashner 
>  ;;;
>  ;;; This file is part of GNU Guix.
>  ;;;
> @@ -225,6 +226,38 @@ decompression.")
>"See LICENSE in the distribution."))
>(home-page "http://www.bzip.org/";
>  
> +(define-public pbzip2
> +  (package
> +(name "pbzip2")
> +(version "1.1.12")
> +(source (origin
> + (method url-fetch)
> + (uri (string-append "https://launchpad.net/pbzip2/1.1/"; version
> +"/+download/" name "-" version ".tar.gz"))

The quote (") on the line above should be aligned with the quote on the
line above it.

Also, instead of hard coding "1.1" in the URI, please use
'version-major+minor' instead.  You'll find many examples of it in
gnu/packages/*.scm

> + (sha256
> +  (base32
> +   "1vk6065dv3a47p86vmp8hv3n1ygd9hraz0gq89gvzlx7lmcb6fsp"
> +(build-system gnu-build-system)
> +(inputs
> + `(("bzip2", bzip2)))
> +(arguments
> + `(#:tests? #f ; no tests
> +   #:phases (modify-phases %standard-phases
> +  (replace 'configure
> +   (lambda* (#:key outputs #:allow-other-keys)
> +(substitute* "Makefile"
> +(("/usr") (assoc-ref outputs "out")))
> +#t)

The alignment of the lines above is very confusing, to say the least.

Anyway, it would be better to simply remove the 'configure' phase and
instead add this:

  #:make-flags (list (string-append "PREFIX=" %output))

> +(home-page "http://compression.ca/pbzip2/";)
> +(synopsis "Parallel bzip2 implementation")
> +(description
> + "Pbzip2 is a parallel implementation of the bzip2 block-sorting file
> +compressor that uses pthreads and achieves near-linear speedup on SMP 
> machines.
> +The output of this version is fully compatible with bzip2 v1.0.2 (ie: 
> anything
> +compressed with pbzip2 can be decompressed with bzip2).")

s/ie:/i.e./

> +(license (license:non-copyleft "file://COPYING"
> +"See COPYING in the distribution."

Please align the open quotes.

 Thanks,
   Mark