Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-21 Thread Ole Troan
Teco,

[...]

 I don't think the homenet should get into the policy part of this, but 
 rather just provide some simple tools/infrastructure.
 
 Hmm.
 I also prefer simple tools/infrastructure. But let's try to solve some 
 problems, or at least we shall not block solving later on.

are the problems clearly understood at this point?
written down?

 I agree SADR is a major part of the right solution. Source address 
 indicates the provision domain, at least for IPv6. Hosts need to be updated 
 and mif should take the lead here. But mif only can take the job if the 
 network supports multiple provisioning domains well, e.g. SADR. Updated 
 hosts need SADR as well. 
 
 I've always seen SADR as a network function. hosts would do RFC6724.
 
 SADR on hosts is used quite often, where redundant links are in place.

that's not SADR. SADR is about _forwarding_ of packets.

[...]

 Back to the draft-ietf-homenet-arch WGLC: this provisioning domain topic is 
 not addresses very well. Question is if we will address it, hand it over to 
 mif, or cooperate where we focus on the (plugplay) network part and mif 
 takes the hosts.

I think we have a fair idea of how to deal with the home network being 
multi-homed. i.e. two or more connections to the Internet.
we also have a decent idea of how to deal with multi-homing to non-congruent 
networks, see draft-ietf-v6ops-ipv6-multihoming-without-ipv6nat-05
I'm not quite sure what problem multiple provisioning domains is trying to 
solve outwith that.

cheers,
Ole
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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-21 Thread Ted Lemon
On Mar 21, 2013, at 1:51 AM, Teco Boot t...@inf-net.nl wrote:
 Back to the draft-ietf-homenet-arch WGLC: this provisioning domain topic is 
 not addresses very well. Question is if we will address it, hand it over to 
 mif, or cooperate where we focus on the (plugplay) network part and mif 
 takes the hosts.
 @Ted: can you guide us here?

There's a third alternative: help MIF to get it right.   The work is certainly 
in MIF's charter, and homenet has bitten off a pretty big chunk, so duplicate 
work is worth avoiding.   At the same time, I think MIF is in fact crucial to 
homenet, so if you want to see homenet succeed it's in your interests to help 
with the work MIF is doing as well.

I'm hearing a lot of useful thinking about the MIF architecture here, which I 
would like to see captured in the MIF architecture document.

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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-21 Thread Teco Boot
Hi Ole,

Op 21 mrt. 2013, om 09:13 heeft Ole Troan o...@cisco.com het volgende 
geschreven:

 Teco,
 
 [...]
 
 I don't think the homenet should get into the policy part of this, but 
 rather just provide some simple tools/infrastructure.
 
 Hmm.
 I also prefer simple tools/infrastructure. But let's try to solve some 
 problems, or at least we shall not block solving later on.
 
 are the problems clearly understood at this point?

 written down?

We have RFC6418 and RFC4477.
Maybe we need to write down the multiple DHCP server problem (homenet with set 
of CPE devices attach to different provides, each with incompatible DHCP 
info). v6ops-ipv6-multihoming-without-ipv6nat-05 points towards the problem, 
section 7.3.  Policy collision consideration.
However, in the abstract it says:
   ...  We conclude that DHCPv6 based
   solutions are suitable to solve the multihoming issues, described in
   this document, while NPTv6 may be required as an intermediate
   solution.
May I say I think DHCPv6 and NPTv6 don't fix the problems? Maybe they make live 
even harder for right shaped MIF hosts.


 I agree SADR is a major part of the right solution. Source address 
 indicates the provision domain, at least for IPv6. Hosts need to be 
 updated and mif should take the lead here. But mif only can take the job 
 if the network supports multiple provisioning domains well, e.g. SADR. 
 Updated hosts need SADR as well. 
 
 I've always seen SADR as a network function. hosts would do RFC6724.
 
 SADR on hosts is used quite often, where redundant links are in place.
 
 that's not SADR. SADR is about _forwarding_ of packets.

The troan-homenet-sadr is written for routers. It applies to hosts with 
multiple interfaces or single interface with multiple next-hop routers as well: 
same problem, can use same solution. For both cases, RFC6724 hosts need a 
little luck to make best guesses.
So for me, Source Address Dependent Routing (SADR) and source address-based 
routing (out of multihoming-without-ipv6nat-05) are two names for same animal.


 [...]
 
 Back to the draft-ietf-homenet-arch WGLC: this provisioning domain topic is 
 not addresses very well. Question is if we will address it, hand it over to 
 mif, or cooperate where we focus on the (plugplay) network part and mif 
 takes the hosts.
 
 I think we have a fair idea of how to deal with the home network being 
 multi-homed. i.e. two or more connections to the Internet.

Yes, we can deal with routing: do something with source address.


 we also have a decent idea of how to deal with multi-homing to non-congruent 
 networks, see draft-ietf-v6ops-ipv6-multihoming-without-ipv6nat-05
 I'm not quite sure what problem multiple provisioning domains is trying to 
 solve outwith that.

I don't think we decided how to deal with disjunct config options (DHCPv6 or 
learned via other means), on how we can relay this info over a homenet to a MIF 
host, without losing any functionality.
draft-boot-homenet-brdp-00 deals with it. It provides MIF hosts pointers to the 
border router, where for each provisioning domain there is a prefix and a 
border router with an address within that prefix. So an aware host can get all 
it wants to know.


Teco

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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-20 Thread Teco Boot
Ole,

Still I am puzzled how we can support multiple provisioning domains with 
multi-addressed hosts in a homenet. May I reference to the discussion in mif?
http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/86/slides/slides-86-mif-1.pdf 

For providing information on provisioning domains, we might look into DHCP 
_and_ ND. I think both can and should be supported. I think one of the problems 
is how to merge or multiplex information from/for these provisioning domains. 
Has DHCP a kind of ProvisioningDomain_ID on each (serf of) data element(s)? On 
SAS/DAS policy, how to create such automatically in network elements? If we 
can't on the fly, it might be irrelevant for homenet.

I agree SADR is a major part of the right solution. Source address indicates 
the provision domain, at least for IPv6. Hosts need to be updated and mif 
should take the lead here. But mif only can take the job if the network 
supports multiple provisioning domains well, e.g. SADR. Updated hosts need SADR 
as well. 

And of course the legacy stuff is out there.

Re-reading sections on multihoming (3.2.4, also 3.4.4), there is enough room 
for solution space. I would expect some more guidelines form an architecture, 
but now there are no constrains on what we may work out. That's fine.

May I suggest to add MPTCP (RFC 6824) at bottom of 3.2.4?

Teco


Op 4 mrt. 2013, om 13:04 heeft Ole Troan o...@cisco.com het volgende 
geschreven:

 Teco,
 
 Reading the homenet-arch, I can't find how multi-addressed hosts are 
 guided to prefer one address over another. I think such facility is 
 beneficial in multi-homed homenets.
 
 the intention is to propagate the SAS/DAS policy given with 
 draft-ietf-6man-addr-select-opt,
 and more specific routes learn on the border, combined with source address 
 dependent forwarding.
 as well as rule 5.5 of 6724.
 This will work when every access router is a DHCP server, right? What if no 
 DHCP or DHCP-relay? Do we generate this option out of routing information? 
 Or some other zero-config magic?
 
 I don't think there is any intention of creating SAS/DAS policy on the fly. I 
 was only thinking of passing that along to hosts.
 the homenet will using SADR ensure that BCP38 rules are satisfied. nothing 
 more.
 
 I'm not sure what you mean by the DHCP question. DHCP has an option to pass 
 SAS/DAS policy to hosts. I'm not suggesting DHCP is used to propagate that 
 information around between routers in the home net.
 
 that's in solution space though. there is already a reference to the 
 multihoming-without-ipv6nat document.
 
 do you have ideas of anything else we should add to the architecture 
 document?
 Maybe it is my reservations on the current suggested solutions. I don't 
 understand why we don't make use of ND. Then, access routers can provide 
 whatever they wish, from whatever source and the host can ignore or take 
 some benefits.
 
 again I don't quite understand what you mean. which protocol is used to 
 convey network information to the hosts doesn't much matter in my view...
 
 cheers,
 Ole

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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-20 Thread Ole Troan
Teco,

 Still I am puzzled how we can support multiple provisioning domains with 
 multi-addressed hosts in a homenet. May I reference to the discussion in mif?
 http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/86/slides/slides-86-mif-1.pdf 
 
 For providing information on provisioning domains, we might look into DHCP 
 _and_ ND. I think both can and should be supported. I think one of the 
 problems is how to merge or multiplex information from/for these provisioning 
 domains. Has DHCP a kind of ProvisioningDomain_ID on each (serf of) data 
 element(s)? On SAS/DAS policy, how to create such automatically in network 
 elements? If we can't on the fly, it might be irrelevant for homenet.

unmanaged and policy are at different ends of the scale. I don't know how you 
can do anything automatic with that.

in the homenet prototype I was talking about we implemented 
draft-bhandari-dhc-class-based-prefix-04.
where we attached a colour to each address prefix. this could then be used as 
a handle for SAS/DAS or for the application.
I don't think the homenet should get into the policy part of this, but rather 
just provide some simple tools/infrastructure.

 I agree SADR is a major part of the right solution. Source address indicates 
 the provision domain, at least for IPv6. Hosts need to be updated and mif 
 should take the lead here. But mif only can take the job if the network 
 supports multiple provisioning domains well, e.g. SADR. Updated hosts need 
 SADR as well. 

I've always seen SADR as a network function. hosts would do RFC6724.

there would be some gain in being able to signal hosts with routing 
information. not sure what that should be, unless we would just have hosts 
participate in the IGP.

 And of course the legacy stuff is out there.
 
 Re-reading sections on multihoming (3.2.4, also 3.4.4), there is enough room 
 for solution space. I would expect some more guidelines form an architecture, 
 but now there are no constrains on what we may work out. That's fine.
 
 May I suggest to add MPTCP (RFC 6824) at bottom of 3.2.4?

agree.

cheers,
Ole

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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-20 Thread Teco Boot
Hi Ole,

Op 20 mrt. 2013, om 23:38 heeft Ole Troan o...@cisco.com het volgende 
geschreven:

 Teco,
 
 Still I am puzzled how we can support multiple provisioning domains with 
 multi-addressed hosts in a homenet. May I reference to the discussion in mif?
 http://www.ietf.org/proceedings/86/slides/slides-86-mif-1.pdf 
 
 For providing information on provisioning domains, we might look into DHCP 
 _and_ ND. I think both can and should be supported. I think one of the 
 problems is how to merge or multiplex information from/for these 
 provisioning domains. Has DHCP a kind of ProvisioningDomain_ID on each (serf 
 of) data element(s)? On SAS/DAS policy, how to create such automatically in 
 network elements? If we can't on the fly, it might be irrelevant for homenet.
 
 unmanaged and policy are at different ends of the scale. I don't know how you 
 can do anything automatic with that.

So we face a problem here...
That's why I think it is a bad idea to merge information from different 
provisioning domains into a single service. Multiplexing looks better, then 
policies from provisioning domains can be transferred to the mif hosts without 
mangling.
That brings me to the concept that provisioning domains are identified by 
(IPv6) prefixes and each prefix has its own configuration channel, either DHCP 
or ND.
With BRDP, my proposal is that the ND BRDP border prefix or provision domain 
ID is also the DHCP server address, so aware mif hosts can get policies from 
it.

 
 in the homenet prototype I was talking about we implemented 
 draft-bhandari-dhc-class-based-prefix-04.
 where we attached a colour to each address prefix. this could then be used 
 as a handle for SAS/DAS or for the application.

OK, I missed this. I have my doubts on the proposed class encoding / coloring 
scheme.


 I don't think the homenet should get into the policy part of this, but 
 rather just provide some simple tools/infrastructure.

Hmm.
I also prefer simple tools/infrastructure. But let's try to solve some 
problems, or at least we shall not block solving later on.

 
 I agree SADR is a major part of the right solution. Source address indicates 
 the provision domain, at least for IPv6. Hosts need to be updated and mif 
 should take the lead here. But mif only can take the job if the network 
 supports multiple provisioning domains well, e.g. SADR. Updated hosts need 
 SADR as well. 
 
 I've always seen SADR as a network function. hosts would do RFC6724.

SADR on hosts is used quite often, where redundant links are in place.

 
 there would be some gain in being able to signal hosts with routing 
 information. not sure what that should be, unless we would just have hosts 
 participate in the IGP.

The IP stack of many host operating systems are able to route. So if we 
implement SADR on routers, hosts will have the code also one day.
I'm not so comfortable on having hosts running the routing deamon.
That's why I came on the BRDP based routing idea, where all nodes in the edge 
network act equivalent: route the packets with destinations external to the 
edge network to the right border router. Works with all routing protocols. 
Works for mif hosts. Only the Prefix_to_BorderRouter_table is needed, with some 
SADR forwarding logic.


Back to the draft-ietf-homenet-arch WGLC: this provisioning domain topic is not 
addresses very well. Question is if we will address it, hand it over to mif, or 
cooperate where we focus on the (plugplay) network part and mif takes the 
hosts.
@Ted: can you guide us here?

Teco

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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-13 Thread Tim Chown
Hi Ray,

Thanks as ever for the comments, which I have integrated and commented on 
below

On 23 Feb 2013, at 18:40, Ray Hunter v6...@globis.net wrote:

 As requested I have read draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07. Thanks everyone for
 the effort so far.
 
 IMHO I think the document is in very good shape, but that we're not
 quite there yet
 (which I guess means I'm obliged to supply comments on why I think
 that's the case).
 
 The main thrust of my comments below is an underlying feeling that we
 haven't yet fully got a handle on the boundary at the ISP/customer
 interface  the homenet/Internet interface, and that this will bite us
 later.
 
 I also think there's quite a bit of room to tighten up on nomenclature.
 e.g. home network v. homenet. ISP uplink v. Customer Internet
 connections. Border v. CER v. Border CER.
 
 Perhaps rather surprisingly, homenet is not defined anywhere.
 
 regards,
 RayH
 
 Detailed comments
 ===
 
 Section 1
 s/While at the time of writing some complex home network topologies
 exist, but most are/
 While at the time of writing some complex home network topologies exist,
 most are /
 
 s/like to avoid such/like to avoid, such/
 
 s/IPv6 with an eye/IPv6, with an eye/
 
 s/can not be affected by new /cannot be modified by new /
 
 
 /[RFC6204] defines basic requirements for customer edge routers
   (CERs).  The scope of this text is the internal homenet, and thus
   specific features on the CER are out of scope for this text./
 
 I find this particular formulation confusing.
 
 Perhaps
 /[RFC6204] defined basic requirements for customer edge routers (CERs),
 which has recently been updated with the definition of requirements for
 specific transition tools on the CER in RFC 6204-bis
 [I-D.ietf-v6ops-6204bis] i.e. DS-Lite [RFC6333] and 6rd [RFC5969]. Such
 detailed specification of CER devices is considered out of scope of this
 architecture document, and we assume that any required update of the CER
 device specification as a result of adopting this architecture will be
 handled as separate and specific updates to these existing documents./
 
 Section 1.1.
 /CER: Customer Edge Router.  A border router at the edge of the homenet./
 
 I regularly read Homenet BR or Border Router on this list used
 interchangeably with CER.
 Are they different? Equivalent? Or do we need to change our
 behaviour/definitions?

We assume that the CER has an interface to one or more ISPs, and to one or more 
internal subnets.  See section 3.2 where topology is discussed.

 This is my biggest worry. Do we have a good handle on the interface at
 the border?

The text talks about demarcation: 
Demarcation of the CER. The CER(s) may or may not be managed by
the ISP.  If the demarcation point is such that the customer can
provide or manage the CER, its configuration must be simple.  Both
models must be supported.

 Does the set of End-User network(s) in Section 3 map 1:1 with a homenet?
 I don't think so: it includes the CER.
 
 What is a Service Provider Network? The rest of the Internet that
 isn't in the homenet?
 Wouldn't harm to copy some more definitions from 6204.

Fair point, some of that has been copied.  We don't use language like 'end-user 
network' in this text though; instead we use 'homenet'.

 Section 2.1
 
 s/This is discussed later in the document./This is discussed in Section
 3.7./
 
 /border router(s)/
 See comment on 1.1 Border Router v Customer Edge Router?

Added to the definitions.

 /There will also be the need to discover which routers in the homenet
   are the border router(s) by an appropriate mechanism.  Here, there
   are a number of choices.  These include an appropriate service
   discovery protocol, or the use of a well-known name, resolved by some
   local name service.  Both might have to deal with handling more than
   one router responding in multihomed environments./
 
 Above paragraph does not make sense to me.
 Seems to be a context shift in the middle of the paragraph.
 How is a name service related to discovery of a border router?
 We're not suggesting all CER's have to be called a particular hostname?

Deleted, as it's covered under routing.

 /2.2.  Global addressability and elimination of NAT/
 Strictly speaking, NAT won't be eliminated entirely. IPv4 will still use
 NAT. IPv6 never had NAT.
 How about just /2.2.  Global addressability/
 
 s/The end-to-end communication that is potentially enabled with IPv6/
 The possibility for direct end-to-end communication on the Internet that
 will be restored by the introduction of IPv6/
 
 The Internet architecture always was, and still is, direct end-to-end
 communication. We just temporarily lost the ability to do it due to lack
 of addresses.

Indeed.  The elmination of NAT part has been left in though.

 s/on the firewall/
 on any firewall/
 
 
 Section 2.3
 s/Default Address Selection for IPv6[I-D.ietf-6man-rfc3484bis]/
 Default Address Selection for Internet Protocol Version 6 (IPv6) [RFC6724]/
 
 s/We 

Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-05 Thread Mark Townsley

Ultimately, I would like to see a host in a homenet with multiple prefixes have 
at least the same information for guiding source address selection as a host 
which is directly connected to multiple networks with multiple interfaces. 

- Mark


On Mar 4, 2013, at 9:09 AM, Teco Boot wrote:

 Reading the homenet-arch, I can't find how multi-addressed hosts are guided 
 to prefer one address over another. I think such facility is beneficial in 
 multi-homed homenets.
 
 Teco
 
 Op 12 feb. 2013, om 16:00 heeft Ray Bellis het volgende geschreven:
 
 This email marks the commencement of Working Group Last Call for 
 draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07.
 
 The WGLC will end on Monday March 4th.
 
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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-04 Thread Teco Boot
Reading the homenet-arch, I can't find how multi-addressed hosts are guided to 
prefer one address over another. I think such facility is beneficial in 
multi-homed homenets.

Teco

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 This email marks the commencement of Working Group Last Call for 
 draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07.
 
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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-03-04 Thread Ole Troan
Teco,

 Reading the homenet-arch, I can't find how multi-addressed hosts are guided 
 to prefer one address over another. I think such facility is beneficial in 
 multi-homed homenets.

the intention is to propagate the SAS/DAS policy given with 
draft-ietf-6man-addr-select-opt,
and more specific routes learn on the border, combined with source address 
dependent forwarding.
as well as rule 5.5 of 6724.

that's in solution space though. there is already a reference to the 
multihoming-without-ipv6nat document.

do you have ideas of anything else we should add to the architecture document?

cheers,
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Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-02-23 Thread Ray Hunter
As requested I have read draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07. Thanks everyone for
the effort so far.

IMHO I think the document is in very good shape, but that we're not
quite there yet
(which I guess means I'm obliged to supply comments on why I think
that's the case).

The main thrust of my comments below is an underlying feeling that we
haven't yet fully got a handle on the boundary at the ISP/customer
interface  the homenet/Internet interface, and that this will bite us
later.

I also think there's quite a bit of room to tighten up on nomenclature.
e.g. home network v. homenet. ISP uplink v. Customer Internet
connections. Border v. CER v. Border CER.

Perhaps rather surprisingly, homenet is not defined anywhere.

regards,
RayH

Detailed comments
===

Section 1
s/While at the time of writing some complex home network topologies
exist, but most are/
While at the time of writing some complex home network topologies exist,
most are /

s/like to avoid such/like to avoid, such/

s/IPv6 with an eye/IPv6, with an eye/

s/can not be affected by new /cannot be modified by new /


/[RFC6204] defines basic requirements for customer edge routers
   (CERs).  The scope of this text is the internal homenet, and thus
   specific features on the CER are out of scope for this text./

I find this particular formulation confusing.

Perhaps
/[RFC6204] defined basic requirements for customer edge routers (CERs),
which has recently been updated with the definition of requirements for
specific transition tools on the CER in RFC 6204-bis
[I-D.ietf-v6ops-6204bis] i.e. DS-Lite [RFC6333] and 6rd [RFC5969]. Such
detailed specification of CER devices is considered out of scope of this
architecture document, and we assume that any required update of the CER
device specification as a result of adopting this architecture will be
handled as separate and specific updates to these existing documents./

Section 1.1.
/CER: Customer Edge Router.  A border router at the edge of the homenet./

I regularly read Homenet BR or Border Router on this list used
interchangeably with CER.
Are they different? Equivalent? Or do we need to change our
behaviour/definitions?

This is my biggest worry. Do we have a good handle on the interface at
the border?

Does the set of End-User network(s) in Section 3 map 1:1 with a homenet?
I don't think so: it includes the CER.

What is a Service Provider Network? The rest of the Internet that
isn't in the homenet?
Wouldn't harm to copy some more definitions from 6204.

Section 2.1

s/This is discussed later in the document./This is discussed in Section
3.7./

/border router(s)/
See comment on 1.1 Border Router v Customer Edge Router?


/There will also be the need to discover which routers in the homenet
   are the border router(s) by an appropriate mechanism.  Here, there
   are a number of choices.  These include an appropriate service
   discovery protocol, or the use of a well-known name, resolved by some
   local name service.  Both might have to deal with handling more than
   one router responding in multihomed environments./

Above paragraph does not make sense to me.
Seems to be a context shift in the middle of the paragraph.
How is a name service related to discovery of a border router?
We're not suggesting all CER's have to be called a particular hostname?

/2.2.  Global addressability and elimination of NAT/
Strictly speaking, NAT won't be eliminated entirely. IPv4 will still use
NAT. IPv6 never had NAT.
How about just /2.2.  Global addressability/

s/The end-to-end communication that is potentially enabled with IPv6/
The possibility for direct end-to-end communication on the Internet that
will be restored by the introduction of IPv6/

The Internet architecture always was, and still is, direct end-to-end
communication. We just temporarily lost the ability to do it due to lack
of addresses.


s/on the firewall/
on any firewall/


Section 2.3
s/Default Address Selection for IPv6[I-D.ietf-6man-rfc3484bis]/
Default Address Selection for Internet Protocol Version 6 (IPv6) [RFC6724]/

s/We discuss such challenges in multihoming later in this document./
We discuss such challenges of multihoming in Section 3.3.1./

Section 2.4
s/Despite this counter-argument, while setting a network up there may be
a period with no connectivity/
/pDespite this counter-argument, there may be a period with no
connectivity while setting up a network/

s/when the ULA destination lies within a /48 ULA prefix known to be used
within the same homenet./
when the ULA source and destination addresses lie within a single /48
ULA prefix known to be used within the same homenet.
However, it should be noted that even if it were known that multiple /48
ULA prefixes are in use within a single homenet
(perhaps because multiple homenet routers each independently
auto-generate a /48 ULA prefix and then share routing information),
utilising a ULA source address and a ULA destination address from two
disjoint /48 ULA prefixes is not preferred 

Re: [homenet] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07

2013-02-22 Thread Brian E Carpenter
I went through the draft, and noticed an instance of the word hoemnet in 
section 2.4.

Otherwise I think this is now in good shape for publication.

Regards
   Brian

On 12/02/2013 15:00, Ray Bellis wrote:
 This email marks the commencement of Working Group Last Call for 
 draft-ietf-homenet-arch-07.
 
 The WGLC will end on Monday March 4th.
 
 Ray and Mark.
 
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