Re: Controlled vs Managed (Re: ASCII diff of ISOC-proposed changes to BCP)

2005-02-14 Thread Bob Kahn
Leslie,
Where in the body of the document does it say that the IAOC is independent 
of ISOC. This could have been clarified but was not. I believe it needs to 
be explicit.

bob
At 01:10 PM 2/14/2005, Leslie Daigle wrote:
Bob,
My point was that the abstract text should not be at odds with
the body of the document, or otherwise be misleading.
The important aspects of the definition of the IAOC and
its relationship to the IASA and ISOC are contained in the
body of the document.
Leslie.
Bob Kahn wrote:
Leslie,
If the IAOC is intended to provide oversight of the activities and 
actions of ISOC with respect to IETF related matters in the future, then 
the IAOC will need to be independent of ISOC, otherwise the IAOC cannot 
be an effective oversight body. You might as well have ISOC be directly 
responsible for overseeing these activities. Further, it makes little 
sense for IAOC, as trustee for IETF IPR, to negotiate licenses with ISOC 
if it is indeed a part of ISOC.
There needs to be a clear and clean separation here.
Finally, the issue of managed vs controlled is hardly a small matter. It 
is basic and fundamental. If IETF wants to be in charge, they should take 
steps to assure that. As it is, all that would be happening, in the guise 
of putting IETF in charge, would be to put ISOC in charge, even if ISOC 
was willing to take guidance from the IAOC.  In the language below, this 
now comes down to what is meant by housed in this context.
Clarity is needed on this important point . For example:

This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative 
Support Activity (IASA) as an [delete] activity housed within the
 Internet Society (ISOC).  [new] The IASA has two constituent elements: 
IAD and IAOC.  As an employee of ISOC, the activities of the IAD will 
be subject to ISOC supervision;  however, the IAOC serves as and 
independent oversight body on behalf of the IETF, and, as such, will 
not be subject to ISOC control.
The IETF would control the IAOC, not ISOC. It is essential not to be 
ambiguous here..
bob
At 11:15 AM 2/11/2005, Leslie Daigle wrote:

For myself, I find the arguments on both sides of controlled
and managed to be compelling -- perhaps because I am not a
lawyer.
However, I am conscious that the words we write down are scrutinized
and used by people the world over -- not always to our benefit,
and often without any of the context that caused us to write
them [*].
So, if the token really doesn't mean anything (per Jorge) because
the import is in the text of the document, perhaps the right
answer is to just *drop* that clause.
This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative
 Support Activity (IASA) as an [delete] activity housed within the
 Internet Society (ISOC).
That makes the entire abstract:

This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative Support
Activity (IASA) as an activity housed within the Internet Society
(ISOC). It defines the roles and responsibilities of the IETF
Administrative Oversight Committee (IAOC), the IETF Administrative
Director (IAD), and ISOC in the fiscal and administrative support of the
IETF standards process. It also defines the membership and selection
rules for the IAOC.

I think this is still clear about where responsibilities lie; the
document defines them in more detail; there is less possibility
for misconception (by using either controlled or managed,
depending on your perspective).
Leslie.
[*] A specific example, in a contribution to ITU re. e164.arpa:
As can be seen from:
http://www.iana.org/arpa-dom/e164.htm
the domain e164.arpa is delegated to:
Internet Architecture Board (IAB)
c/o IETF Secretariat
Corporation for National Research Initiatives (CNRI)
1895 Preston White Drive
Suite 100
Reston, Virginia 20191-5434
The IAB has no legal personality of its own, nor does the IETF. So it
would appear that the legal entity which can control changes to the
entries under e164.arpa is the Corporation for National Research
Initiatives (CNRI).

The whois entry is written this way because the IAB has no (other)
mailing address.  It does *not* mean that CNRI is in control of
the e164.arpa domain, but that's what this expression apparently
means to people.
It's this sort of thing that leads me to (personally) prefer the
use of the term controlled, if we're going to use a term. But,
if that term introduces misconceptions on the legal side, I'd
rather just drop the whole thing.

Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote:
--On 11. februar 2005 07:03 -0500 Margaret Wasserman 
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

So, with my ISOC Board hat on (a hat which none of the ISOC Board members
are legally allowed to take off), I am not inclined to ignore legal
advice from ISOC's corporate counsel.  Maybe the IETF Chair could ask the
IETF lawyer (Jorge) whether changing the word from controlled to
managed has any bad legal implications for the IETF?

I asked Jorge, and here's what he said:
this is a 

Re: Controlled vs Managed (Re: ASCII diff of ISOC-proposed changes to BCP)

2005-02-13 Thread Bob Kahn
Leslie,
If the IAOC is intended to provide oversight of the activities and actions 
of ISOC with respect to IETF related matters in the future, then the IAOC 
will need to be independent of ISOC, otherwise the IAOC cannot be an 
effective oversight body. You might as well have ISOC be directly 
responsible for overseeing these activities. Further, it makes little sense 
for IAOC, as trustee for IETF IPR, to negotiate licenses with ISOC if it is 
indeed a part of ISOC.

There needs to be a clear and clean separation here.
Finally, the issue of managed vs controlled is hardly a small matter. It is 
basic and fundamental. If IETF wants to be in charge, they should take 
steps to assure that. As it is, all that would be happening, in the guise 
of putting IETF in charge, would be to put ISOC in charge, even if ISOC was 
willing to take guidance from the IAOC.  In the language below, this now 
comes down to what is meant by housed in this context.

Clarity is needed on this important point . For example:
This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative Support 
Activity (IASA) as an [delete] activity housed within the
 Internet Society (ISOC).  [new] The IASA has two constituent elements: 
IAD and IAOC.  As an employee of ISOC, the activities of the IAD will be 
subject to ISOC supervision;  however, the IAOC serves as and independent 
oversight body on behalf of the IETF, and, as such, will not be subject 
to ISOC control.
The IETF would control the IAOC, not ISOC. It is essential not to be 
ambiguous here..

bob
At 11:15 AM 2/11/2005, Leslie Daigle wrote:
For myself, I find the arguments on both sides of controlled
and managed to be compelling -- perhaps because I am not a
lawyer.
However, I am conscious that the words we write down are scrutinized
and used by people the world over -- not always to our benefit,
and often without any of the context that caused us to write
them [*].
So, if the token really doesn't mean anything (per Jorge) because
the import is in the text of the document, perhaps the right
answer is to just *drop* that clause.
This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative
 Support Activity (IASA) as an [delete] activity housed within the
 Internet Society (ISOC).
That makes the entire abstract:

This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative Support
Activity (IASA) as an activity housed within the Internet Society
(ISOC). It defines the roles and responsibilities of the IETF
Administrative Oversight Committee (IAOC), the IETF Administrative
Director (IAD), and ISOC in the fiscal and administrative support of the
IETF standards process. It also defines the membership and selection
rules for the IAOC.

I think this is still clear about where responsibilities lie; the
document defines them in more detail; there is less possibility
for misconception (by using either controlled or managed,
depending on your perspective).
Leslie.
[*] A specific example, in a contribution to ITU re. e164.arpa:
As can be seen from:
http://www.iana.org/arpa-dom/e164.htm
the domain e164.arpa is delegated to:
Internet Architecture Board (IAB)
c/o IETF Secretariat
Corporation for National Research Initiatives (CNRI)
1895 Preston White Drive
Suite 100
Reston, Virginia 20191-5434
The IAB has no legal personality of its own, nor does the IETF. So it
would appear that the legal entity which can control changes to the
entries under e164.arpa is the Corporation for National Research
Initiatives (CNRI).
The whois entry is written this way because the IAB has no (other)
mailing address.  It does *not* mean that CNRI is in control of
the e164.arpa domain, but that's what this expression apparently
means to people.
It's this sort of thing that leads me to (personally) prefer the
use of the term controlled, if we're going to use a term. But,
if that term introduces misconceptions on the legal side, I'd
rather just drop the whole thing.

Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote:
--On 11. februar 2005 07:03 -0500 Margaret Wasserman 
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

So, with my ISOC Board hat on (a hat which none of the ISOC Board members
are legally allowed to take off), I am not inclined to ignore legal
advice from ISOC's corporate counsel.  Maybe the IETF Chair could ask the
IETF lawyer (Jorge) whether changing the word from controlled to
managed has any bad legal implications for the IETF?
I asked Jorge, and here's what he said:
this is a political point rather than a legal one.
The precise nature of the control/management is described
elsewhere, so this is just a characterization rather than
operative (executable) language.
So based on that advice, I'm not inclined to make a fuss over the 
term. but somewhat surprised that ISOC's lawyer thinks it's fuss-worthy.
  Harald

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Re: Controlled vs Managed (Re: ASCII diff of ISOC-proposed changes to BCP)

2005-02-11 Thread Leslie Daigle
For myself, I find the arguments on both sides of controlled
and managed to be compelling -- perhaps because I am not a
lawyer.
However, I am conscious that the words we write down are scrutinized
and used by people the world over -- not always to our benefit,
and often without any of the context that caused us to write
them [*].
So, if the token really doesn't mean anything (per Jorge) because
the import is in the text of the document, perhaps the right
answer is to just *drop* that clause.
This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative
 Support Activity (IASA) as an [delete] activity housed within the
 Internet Society (ISOC).
That makes the entire abstract:

This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative Support
Activity (IASA) as an activity housed within the Internet Society
(ISOC). It defines the roles and responsibilities of the IETF
Administrative Oversight Committee (IAOC), the IETF Administrative
Director (IAD), and ISOC in the fiscal and administrative support of the
IETF standards process. It also defines the membership and selection
rules for the IAOC.

I think this is still clear about where responsibilities lie; the
document defines them in more detail; there is less possibility
for misconception (by using either controlled or managed,
depending on your perspective).
Leslie.
[*] A specific example, in a contribution to ITU re. e164.arpa:
As can be seen from:
http://www.iana.org/arpa-dom/e164.htm
the domain e164.arpa is delegated to:
Internet Architecture Board (IAB)
c/o IETF Secretariat
Corporation for National Research Initiatives (CNRI)
1895 Preston White Drive
Suite 100
Reston, Virginia 20191-5434
The IAB has no legal personality of its own, nor does the IETF. So it
would appear that the legal entity which can control changes to the
entries under e164.arpa is the Corporation for National Research
Initiatives (CNRI).
The whois entry is written this way because the IAB has no (other)
mailing address.  It does *not* mean that CNRI is in control of
the e164.arpa domain, but that's what this expression apparently
means to people.
It's this sort of thing that leads me to (personally) prefer the
use of the term controlled, if we're going to use a term. But,
if that term introduces misconceptions on the legal side, I'd
rather just drop the whole thing.

Harald Tveit Alvestrand wrote:

--On 11. februar 2005 07:03 -0500 Margaret Wasserman
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
So, with my ISOC Board hat on (a hat which none of the ISOC Board members
are legally allowed to take off), I am not inclined to ignore legal
advice from ISOC's corporate counsel.  Maybe the IETF Chair could ask the
IETF lawyer (Jorge) whether changing the word from controlled to
managed has any bad legal implications for the IETF?

I asked Jorge, and here's what he said:
this is a political point rather than a legal one.
The precise nature of the control/management is described
elsewhere, so this is just a characterization rather than
operative (executable) language.

So based on that advice, I'm not inclined to make a fuss over the
term. but somewhat surprised that ISOC's lawyer thinks it's
fuss-worthy.
  Harald
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Re: Controlled vs Managed (Re: ASCII diff of ISOC-proposed changes to BCP)

2005-02-11 Thread Lynn St.Amour
Leslie,
this works for ISOC.
Lynn
At 11:15 AM -0500 2/11/05, Leslie Daigle wrote:
That makes the entire abstract:

This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative Support
Activity (IASA) as an activity housed within the Internet Society
(ISOC). It defines the roles and responsibilities of the IETF
Administrative Oversight Committee (IAOC), the IETF Administrative
Director (IAD), and ISOC in the fiscal and administrative support of the
IETF standards process. It also defines the membership and selection
rules for the IAOC.

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Re: Controlled vs Managed (Re: ASCII diff of ISOC-proposed changes to BCP)

2005-02-11 Thread Carl Malamud
Hi Leslie -

 For myself, I find the arguments on both sides of controlled
 and managed to be compelling -- perhaps because I am not a
 lawyer.
 

Finding both sides compelling makes you very qualified
to be a lawyer.  ;)

snip

 So, if the token really doesn't mean anything (per Jorge) because
 the import is in the text of the document, perhaps the right
 answer is to just *drop* that clause.
 

That makes sense.

Regarads,

Carl

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Re: Controlled vs Managed (Re: ASCII diff of ISOC-proposed changes to BCP)

2005-02-11 Thread Ted Hardie
At 11:15 AM -0500 2/11/05, Leslie Daigle wrote:
So, if the token really doesn't mean anything (per Jorge) because
the import is in the text of the document, perhaps the right
answer is to just *drop* that clause.
This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative
 Support Activity (IASA) as an [delete] activity housed within the
 Internet Society (ISOC).
That makes the entire abstract:

This document describes the structure of the IETF Administrative Support
Activity (IASA) as an activity housed within the Internet Society
(ISOC). It defines the roles and responsibilities of the IETF
Administrative Oversight Committee (IAOC), the IETF Administrative
Director (IAD), and ISOC in the fiscal and administrative support of the
IETF standards process. It also defines the membership and selection
rules for the IAOC.
I think this is a very sensible way out of the problem, and
I support it.
Ted

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