Re: [IPsec] Updated ESP/AH algorithm I-D

2013-03-14 Thread David McGrew (mcgrew)
Hi Sheila,

Thanks for pointing this out.   I agree that the draft needs to be changed
to align with the ESP RFC.

David

On 3/12/13 10:01 AM, Frankel, Sheila E. sheila.fran...@nist.gov wrote:

Hi David and Wajdi,

Your updated ESP/AH algorithm doc looks great, and is very much needed. I
just have one comment. You speak of the 2 services provided by ESP and AH
as confidentiality and data origin authentication. As I'm sure you
know, authentication is used in different ways by different communities.
I believe that in most of the IPsec docs the 1st service is referred to
interchangeably as encryption and confidentiality; the 2nd service is
interchangeably referred to as authentication and integrity protection.
However, in RFC 4303 (ESP) it states: Data origin authentication and
connectionless integrity are joint services, hereafter referred to
jointly as integrity. In your doc, the integrity-protection aspect is
not mentioned at all, and I believe that is a critical oversight.

Sheila Frankel
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Re: [IPsec] Updated ESP/AH algorithm I-D

2013-03-12 Thread Stephen Kent

Sheila,

I did a quick check of 4301, and it uses the term confidentiality 
consistently when referring to the service, and uses encryption to 
refer to the mechanism. They are not used interchangeably.
The same seems to apply to use of terminology re data origin 
authentication, integrity, etc.


Steve


On 3/12/13 10:01 AM, Frankel, Sheila E. wrote:

Hi David and Wajdi,

Your updated ESP/AH algorithm doc looks great, and is very much needed. I just have one comment. You speak of 
the 2 services provided by ESP and AH as confidentiality and data origin authentication. As I'm 
sure you know, authentication is used in different ways by different communities. I believe that in most of 
the IPsec docs the 1st service is referred to interchangeably as encryption and confidentiality; the 2nd 
service is interchangeably referred to as authentication and integrity protection. However, in RFC 4303 (ESP) 
it states: Data origin authentication and connectionless integrity are joint services, hereafter 
referred to jointly as integrity. In your doc, the integrity-protection aspect is not 
mentioned at all, and I believe that is a critical oversight.

Sheila Frankel
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Re: [IPsec] Updated ESP/AH algorithm I-D

2013-03-12 Thread Frankel, Sheila E.
Steve,

Perhaps I wasn't clear in the main thrust of my message. I'm not quibbling 
about terminology; I'm concerned that the I-D is lacking some vital 
information. The I-D discusses 2 services provided by ESP and AH: 
confidentiality and data origin authentication. My point was that the 2nd 
service includes connectionless integrity protection as well - which is not 
identical to data origin authentication - and therefore integrity protection 
should be mentioned in the I-D.

Sheila


From: Stephen Kent [k...@bbn.com]
Sent: Tuesday, March 12, 2013 11:09 AM
To: ipsec@ietf.org; Frankel, Sheila E.
Subject: Re: [IPsec] Updated ESP/AH algorithm I-D

Sheila,

I did a quick check of 4301, and it uses the term confidentiality
consistently when referring to the service, and uses encryption to
refer to the mechanism. They are not used interchangeably.
The same seems to apply to use of terminology re data origin
authentication, integrity, etc.

Steve

On 3/12/13 10:01 AM, Frankel, Sheila E. wrote:
 Hi David and Wajdi,

 Your updated ESP/AH algorithm doc looks great, and is very much needed. I 
 just have one comment. You speak of the 2 services provided by ESP and AH as 
 confidentiality and data origin authentication. As I'm sure you know, 
 authentication is used in different ways by different communities. I believe 
 that in most of the IPsec docs the 1st service is referred to interchangeably 
 as encryption and confidentiality; the 2nd service is interchangeably 
 referred to as authentication and integrity protection. However, in RFC 4303 
 (ESP) it states: Data origin authentication and connectionless integrity are 
 joint services, hereafter referred to jointly as integrity. In your doc, 
 the integrity-protection aspect is not mentioned at all, and I believe that 
 is a critical oversight.

 Sheila Frankel

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Re: [IPsec] Updated ESP/AH algorithm I-D

2013-03-12 Thread Frankel, Sheila E.
Steve,

I certainly didn't intend any insults, and I wouldn't characterize the wording 
in the RFC's as sloppy. It's very common to use these terms somewhat 
interchangeably. 

Sorry if my wording could be construed as a criticism. That's the last thing 
I'd want, considering the tremendous amount of hard work that went into the 
RFCs.

Regards,
Sheila

From: Stephen Kent [k...@bbn.com]
Sent: Tuesday, March 12, 2013 1:05 PM
To: ipsec@ietf.org; Frankel, Sheila E.
Subject: Re: [IPsec] Updated ESP/AH algorithm I-D

Sheila,

I understood your point. I objected to your statement that other IPsec
RFC were
sloppy in the use of security service/mechanism terminology.

Steve

 Steve,

 Perhaps I wasn't clear in the main thrust of my message. I'm not quibbling 
 about terminology; I'm concerned that the I-D is lacking some vital 
 information. The I-D discusses 2 services provided by ESP and AH: 
 confidentiality and data origin authentication. My point was that the 2nd 
 service includes connectionless integrity protection as well - which is not 
 identical to data origin authentication - and therefore integrity protection 
 should be mentioned in the I-D.

 Sheila


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