Re: [PATCH] docs: Clarify the documentation of the elements
On 1/29/21 11:04 AM, Thomas Huth wrote: The channel subsystem elements describe a channel in the I/O subsystem of a s390x machine, and not a normal device (like a disk or network card). Reword the documentation here to make it this a little bit clearer. Buglink: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1898074 Signed-off-by: Thomas Huth --- docs/formatnode.html.in | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/formatnode.html.in b/docs/formatnode.html.in index 1010a37a3d..8fbd3e6ece 100644 --- a/docs/formatnode.html.in +++ b/docs/formatnode.html.in @@ -396,15 +396,15 @@ css - Describes a Channel SubSystem (CSS) device commonly found on - the S390 architecture. Sub-elements include: + Describes a channel in the Channel SubSystem (CSS) commonly found + on the S390 architecture. Sub-elements include: cssid The channel subsystem identifier. ssid The subchannel-set identifier. devno - The device number. + The subchannel number. capability This optional element can occur multiple times. If it With Connie's additional nitpicked 'sub' :) Reviewed-by: Boris Fiuczynski -- Mit freundlichen Grüßen/Kind regards Boris Fiuczynski IBM Deutschland Research & Development GmbH Vorsitzender des Aufsichtsrats: Gregor Pillen Geschäftsführung: Dirk Wittkopp Sitz der Gesellschaft: Böblingen Registergericht: Amtsgericht Stuttgart, HRB 243294
Re: [PATCH] docs: Clarify the documentation of the elements
On Fri, 29 Jan 2021 11:04:44 +0100 Thomas Huth wrote: > The channel subsystem elements describe a channel in the I/O subsystem > of a s390x machine, and not a normal device (like a disk or network card). > Reword the documentation here to make it this a little bit clearer. > > Buglink: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1898074 > Signed-off-by: Thomas Huth > --- > docs/formatnode.html.in | 6 +++--- > 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/docs/formatnode.html.in b/docs/formatnode.html.in > index 1010a37a3d..8fbd3e6ece 100644 > --- a/docs/formatnode.html.in > +++ b/docs/formatnode.html.in > @@ -396,15 +396,15 @@ > > >css > - Describes a Channel SubSystem (CSS) device commonly found on > - the S390 architecture. Sub-elements include: > + Describes a channel in the Channel SubSystem (CSS) commonly > found s/channel/subchannel/, to be a bit nitpicky? > + on the S390 architecture. Sub-elements include: > >cssid >The channel subsystem identifier. >ssid >The subchannel-set identifier. >devno > - The device number. > + The subchannel number. >capability > > This optional element can occur multiple times. If it
[PATCH] docs: Clarify the documentation of the elements
The channel subsystem elements describe a channel in the I/O subsystem of a s390x machine, and not a normal device (like a disk or network card). Reword the documentation here to make it this a little bit clearer. Buglink: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=1898074 Signed-off-by: Thomas Huth --- docs/formatnode.html.in | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/formatnode.html.in b/docs/formatnode.html.in index 1010a37a3d..8fbd3e6ece 100644 --- a/docs/formatnode.html.in +++ b/docs/formatnode.html.in @@ -396,15 +396,15 @@ css - Describes a Channel SubSystem (CSS) device commonly found on - the S390 architecture. Sub-elements include: + Describes a channel in the Channel SubSystem (CSS) commonly found + on the S390 architecture. Sub-elements include: cssid The channel subsystem identifier. ssid The subchannel-set identifier. devno - The device number. + The subchannel number. capability This optional element can occur multiple times. If it -- 2.27.0
