Re: GDP: NR 2.2 Keyboard instruments first public draft

2008-07-12 Thread Arno Rog
Graham Percival gpermus at gmail.com writes:

 
 I'm happy to announce that NR 2.2 Keyboard instruments  is ready
 for the first public review!  Thanks to Andrew for writing and
 Carl for reviewing this section.
 
 Please proofread it carefully; let us know about any mistakes or
 omissions.  As always, GDP website is here:
 http://web.uvic.ca/~gperciva/
 
 Cheers,
 - Graham
 

Graham,

Where to post suggestions?

AWRog





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Re: GDP: NR 2.2 Keyboard instruments first public draft

2008-07-12 Thread Graham Percival
On Sat, 12 Jul 2008 11:39:34 + (UTC)
Arno Rog [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 Graham Percival gpermus at gmail.com writes:
 
  I'm happy to announce that NR 2.2 Keyboard instruments  is ready
  for the first public review!  Thanks to Andrew for writing and
  Carl for reviewing this section.
  
  Please proofread it carefully; let us know about any mistakes or
  omissions.  As always, GDP website is here:
  http://web.uvic.ca/~gperciva/
 
 Where to post suggestions?

Right here.

Cheers,
- Graham


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Re: GDP: NR 2.2 Keyboard instruments first public draft

2008-07-12 Thread Neil Puttock
Hi Graham,

Rather than trundle off a list of suggestions, I thought it might be
easier to send you a patch, which is attached.

Since the built-in support for accordion (using articulations) is no
longer working, should we junk the init file accordion-defs-init.ly?

Regards,
Neil
From c7b8ab823d6a206e3c5b311d6a98fa7c87217b19 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Neil Puttock [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Sat, 12 Jul 2008 22:24:13 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Proofreading for keyboards.itely.

---
 Documentation/user/keyboards.itely |  111 ---
 1 files changed, 63 insertions(+), 48 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/user/keyboards.itely b/Documentation/user/keyboards.itely
index 7ae11e0..640a22a 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/keyboards.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/keyboards.itely
@@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ instruments.
 
 Keyboard instruments are usually notated with Piano staves.  These
 are two or more normal staves coupled with a brace.  The same
-notation is also used for harps and other keyed instruments.
+notation is also used for other keyed instruments.
 Organ music is normally written with two staves inside a
 @code{PianoStaff} group and third, normal staff for the pedals.
 
 The staves in keyboard music are largely independent, but
-sometimes voices can cross between the two staves.  In this
-section we discuss some notation techniques particular to keyboard
+sometimes voices can cross between the two staves.  This
+section discusses notation techniques particular to keyboard
 music.
 
 Several common issues in keyboard music are covered elsewhere:
@@ -93,13 +93,14 @@ Learning Manual:
 Notation Reference:
 @ref{Grouping staves},
 @ref{Instrument names},
[EMAIL PROTECTED] resolution},
 @ref{Writing music in parallel},
 @ref{Fingering instructions},
[EMAIL PROTECTED] of articulations},
 @ref{Grid lines},
 @ref{Ties},
 @ref{Arpeggio},
[EMAIL PROTECTED] repeats},
[EMAIL PROTECTED] of articulations}.
[EMAIL PROTECTED] repeats}.
 
 Internals Reference:
 @rinternals{PianoStaff}.
@@ -135,27 +136,28 @@ Voices can be switched between staves manually, using the command
 
 @noindent
 The string @var{staffname} is the name of the staff.  It switches
-the current voice from its current staff to the Staff called
+the current voice from its current staff to the staff called
 @var{staffname}.  Typical values for @var{staffname} are
 @code{up} and @code{down}, or @code{RH} and @code{LH}.
 
 Cross-staff notes are beamed automatically:
 
[EMAIL PROTECTED],quote,ragged-right]
[EMAIL PROTECTED],quote]
 \new PianoStaff 
   \new Staff = up {
 e' c'8
-\change Staff = down
-g fis g
-\change Staff = up
+\change Staff = down
+g8 fis g
+\change Staff = up
 g'' c''8
-\change Staff = down
-e dis e
-\change Staff = up
+\change Staff = down
+e8 dis e
+\change Staff = up
   }
   \new Staff = down {
 \clef bass
-s1 % keep staff alive
+% keep staff alive
+s1
   }
 
 @end lilypond
@@ -179,7 +181,8 @@ Snippets:
 @rlsr{Keyboards}.
 
 Internals Reference:
[EMAIL PROTECTED]
[EMAIL PROTECTED],
[EMAIL PROTECTED]
 
 
 @node Changing staff automatically
@@ -200,15 +203,16 @@ bottom staff.  The syntax for this is
 @noindent
 This will create two staves inside the current staff group
 (usually a @code{PianoStaff}), called @code{up} and
[EMAIL PROTECTED]down}.  The lower staff will be in bass clef by default.
-The autochanger switches on basis of the pitch (middle C is the
[EMAIL PROTECTED]down}.  The lower staff will be in the bass clef by default.
+The autochanger switches on the basis of the pitch ([EMAIL PROTECTED] is the
 turning point), and it looks ahead skipping over rests to switch
 in advance.
 
[EMAIL PROTECTED],verbatim,ragged-right]
[EMAIL PROTECTED],verbatim]
 \new PianoStaff {
   \autochange {
-g4 a b c' d' r4 a g
+g4 a b c'
+d'4 r a g
   }
 }
 @end lilypond
@@ -223,14 +227,14 @@ can be created manually with the names @code{up} and
 its voice between the existing staves.  For example, this is
 necessary to place a key signature in the lower staff:
 
[EMAIL PROTECTED],verbatim,ragged-right]
[EMAIL PROTECTED],verbatim]
 \new PianoStaff 
   \new Staff = up {
 \new Voice = melOne {
   \key g \major
   \autochange \relative c' {
 g8 b a c b d c e
-d r fis, g a2
+d8 r fis, g a2
   }
 }
   }
@@ -274,15 +278,18 @@ staff based on the first note named in the chord construct.
 Whenever a voice switches to another staff, a line connecting the
 notes can be printed automatically:
 
[EMAIL PROTECTED],ragged-right,fragment,relative=1,verbatim]
[EMAIL PROTECTED],fragment,relative=1,verbatim]
 \new PianoStaff 
   \new Staff = one {
 \showStaffSwitch
 c1
-\change Staff=two
+\change Staff = two
 b2 a
   }
-  \new Staff = two { \clef bass s1*2 }
+  \new Staff = two {
+\clef bass
+s1*2
+  }
 
 @end lilypond
 
@@ -298,6 +305,7 @@ Snippets:
 @rlsr{Keyboards}.
 
 Internals Reference:

Re: GDP: NR 2.2 Keyboard instruments first public draft

2008-07-12 Thread Graham Percival
On Sat, 12 Jul 2008 23:15:27 +0100
Neil Puttock [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 Rather than trundle off a list of suggestions, I thought it might be
 easier to send you a patch, which is attached.

Thanks, applied.  Please note that [fragment] should be omitted in
almost all cases, though.  [relative=x] implies [fragment].


Andrew: in general I don't like changing doc sections without
first discussing it with the person resposible for that section,
but in this case all the changes were small enough that it wasn't
worth discussing.  Please download a new .itely file, in case you
need to change anything in response to bigger comments.


 Since the built-in support for accordion (using articulations) is no
 longer working, should we junk the init file accordion-defs-init.ly?

Hmm.  Please ask on -devel.  I mean, yes, if it's broken and
nobody is going to fix it, we should junk it.  But check if
anybody wants to rescue it first.

Cheers,
- Graham


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GDP: NR 2.2 Keyboard instruments first public draft

2008-07-10 Thread Graham Percival
I'm happy to announce that NR 2.2 Keyboard instruments  is ready
for the first public review!  Thanks to Andrew for writing and
Carl for reviewing this section.

Please proofread it carefully; let us know about any mistakes or
omissions.  As always, GDP website is here:
http://web.uvic.ca/~gperciva/

Cheers,
- Graham


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