Re: Pair of eyes needed

[tisimst]

Alberto Simões-2 wrote
> Just finished a transcription of a simple piece (four pages, for piano).
> I took all my care to correctly transcribe it, but I would love if 
> someone could help proofreading it.
> ...
> If you are willing to help, you do not need to mess with the lilypond 
> code. You can just annotate somehow the PDF, and I'll fix the code.

Alberto,

Looks pretty good. See my attached PDF for a small handful of specific
comments.

Best,
Abraham

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Re: Pair of eyes needed

[Michael Gerdau]

> If you are willing to help, you do not need to mess with the lilypond
> code. You can just annotate somehow the PDF, and I'll fix the code.

I'm not that used to editing in PDF, therefor I will give measures as
of the PDF:

I have found one missing note:
in Bar 169 in the left hand there is missing a c'2. in the chord

The following remarks are more a matter of taste thing:
you have left out quite a few advisory/cautionary accidentials, mostly
for grace notes, that appear in the original:
Bar 38 gis'' grace right hand
Bar 41 cis'' grace right hand
Bar 43 cis'' grace right hand
Bar 49 d''8 right hand (in Bar 43 you have this natural)
Bar 49 cis'' grace right hand (same as in Bar 43)
Bar 76 cis''4 right hand

I'm aware these accidentials/naturals aren't strictly required. However
some may help clarifying the intention.

Bar 121: the cresc hairpin starts 1 quarter note earlier than the original
Bar 124: the decr hairpin ends 1 quarter note earlier than the original
Bar 134: the decr hairpin ends 1 quarter note earlier than the original

For both decr hairpins you could just not end them explicitly (i.e remove
the \!)

I would use whole measure Rests in Bars 157-160 in the left hand by
replacing the r2. with R1*3/4

I would prefix the tie between Bar 162/163 with a '_' to force it
downwards.

Bar 200 the natural in front of the second b''4 could be removed.

Last not least the original had another empty bar in both hands. I don't
know wether that's part of the original manuscript or just for editorial
reasons.

If you decide to add that empty bar, use full bar rests R1*3/4.

Kind regards,
Michael
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Re: Pair of eyes needed

[Alberto Simões]

Thank you, and thank you Michael Gerdau too.

Will make fixes later tonight.
Alberto

On 02/11/2015 08:31, tisimst wrote:

Alberto Simões-2 wrote

Just finished a transcription of a simple piece (four pages, for piano).
I took all my care to correctly transcribe it, but I would love if
someone could help proofreading it.
...
If you are willing to help, you do not need to mess with the lilypond
code. You can just annotate somehow the PDF, and I'll fix the code.

Alberto,

Looks pretty good. See my attached PDF for a small handful of specific
comments.

Best,
Abraham

valse-with-comments.pdf
<http://lilypond.1069038.n5.nabble.com/file/n183055/valse-with-comments.pdf>



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Re: Pair of eyes needed

[Alberto Simões]

On 02/11/2015 07:19, Johan Vromans wrote:

On Sun, 1 Nov 2015 21:27:52 +
Alberto Simões  wrote:


If you are willing to help, you do not need to mess with the lilypond
code. You can just annotate somehow the PDF, and I'll fix the code.

Small nitpick: *you* did the transcribing, LilyPond did the typesetting.
"Transcribed with LilyPond" would imply (to me, at least) that you fed the
document to LP and LP did the rest.

Suggested replacement: "Transcribed by Alberto Simões for GNU LilyPond".



it was late in the night, thanks! :-)
Alberto

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Pair of eyes needed

[Alberto Simões]

Hello

Just finished a transcription of a simple piece (four pages, for piano).
I took all my care to correctly transcribe it, but I would love if 
someone could help proofreading it.


All the details are in [1] (source, pdf, lilypond).

If you are willing to help, you do not need to mess with the lilypond 
code. You can just annotate somehow the PDF, and I'll fix the code.


After this validation step is done, I'll request help for some lilypond 
details (but probably better to ask one thing at a time).


Thank you,
Alberto

[1] https://github.com/ambs/music/tree/master/Gounod/ValseDesSylphes

PS: of course you will be credited for your work.

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Re: Pair of eyes needed

[Johan Vromans]

On Sun, 1 Nov 2015 21:27:52 +
Alberto Simões  wrote:

> If you are willing to help, you do not need to mess with the lilypond 
> code. You can just annotate somehow the PDF, and I'll fix the code.

Small nitpick: *you* did the transcribing, LilyPond did the typesetting.
"Transcribed with LilyPond" would imply (to me, at least) that you fed the
document to LP and LP did the rest.

Suggested replacement: "Transcribed by Alberto Simões for GNU LilyPond".

-- Johan

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