Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Quim Gil
As a journalist, I have to say that the best press release combines
Claus notes with all its lenghts with some improvements taken from
Corey's notes in the first paragraphs.

Press releases explaining something interesting have a default size of 1
printed page. Should be started by a title a journalist can just opy and
paste. Should contain in the first paragraph all the elements we want to
have included even in the shortest brief published. In fact, the first
paragraph is frequently just copy&pasted if it's well written, in a
journalist fashion instead of PR self-promotion style.

About the size again, the most important is to have a very well
structured press release: you put *everything relevant* in the first 1-2
paragraphs, from that point most mass media journalists won't even read
more (unless you are a strong brand like Microsoft or the Prime
Minister, sending press releases all the time and forcing interested
journalists reading until the end). You use subheaders (easy to copy &
paste too) to identify clearly any new piece of information you provide.
This way you can reach the 2 A4 printed pages without big fear.

The quotes are needed and must be done by someone a journalist clearly
identifies as an authority (even if we don't like authorities): the
release manager, the GNOME Foundation chairman and, if needed,
coordinators of projects are the clearest speakers here. Quotes don't
show only "the human side", they also provide a material jornalists can
use that looks like more 'unique' to the readers. You put a quote in
your news story and it gives the vague impression that the journalist
did something else than just copy a press release. Of course, the quotes
need to say something interesting, not just 'how great we are' style
sentences. Quotes should sound like said by an expert - and we are
experts in GNOME.

About the fact of copying "About GNOME" from release to release, we
would need to improve and update this paragraph too, since GNOME evolves
every six months. For instance, I would add a mention to the fact that
the free GNOME technology is being increasingly used in mobile devices
by Nokia and Palm Source.

Also, it is important to provide a link to screenshots and GNOME artwork
stating that media can use this graphic material freely, and we
encourage them to do so. GNOME is beauty, GNOME screenshots and artwork
may help a news story look beautiful. The average journalist is used to
be careful when using graphics from other parties due to licensing
trouble, and none of them go and see the terms and conditions. Just the
fact of being able to reuse graphic material may bring a news story to a
bigger coverage instead of being thrown in a column.

Some more specific comments:


> The GNOME Project is please to announce the release of the latest
> version of the GNOME Desktop and Developer Platform, the leading
> desktop for Linux and Unix operating systems.

- the leading
+ the popular free

(this goes in the line of our collaboration with KDE and our common
attempt to promote the "free desktop" brand as somethign to be
identified by the mass media and the big public)

> Version 2.14 improves
> the usability, power and performance of GNOME in response to user
> feedback and developer contributions, and includes thousands of
> changes to refine the easiest and friendliest free software desktop.

Note that at the end of this paragraph I have no clear item to pick and
build a header of it. Claus' first paragraph is easier to pick for
journalists.


> Some the key new features:
> 
>  * The creation of an admin suite. including a lock down editor,
> Pessulus, and a user profile editor, Sabayon.
>  * A new search bar, called Deskbar, which can search through local
> files, programs and contacts as well as on the web
>  * Ekiga, a VOIP client which can now talk SIP, used by Google Talk,
> Asterisk and others. Ekiga was formerly known as GnomeMeeting
>  * The ability to switch users quickly, without logging off
>  * Even easier configuration
>  * Performance work, making your desktop even snappier.

This list rocks as second paragraph, the rest of Claus' notes could be
organised following this list, having a copypastable subheader for each
item.


> For more detailed information about the great new features of GNOME
> 2.14, please see the 2.14 release notes at
> http://www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/C/index.html
> 
> To get GNOME 2.14 for your favourite flavour of Linux, BSD, Solaris or
> Unix, please see our Getting Footware page at
> http://www.gnome.org/~davyd/footware.shtml

I would delete this and put Claus paragraphs instead. In any case, in a
press release we need to put shorter URLs like
http://www.gnome.org/start/ , avoid something like a "~" very few users
and journalists are going to be able to type if found in a piece of
paper, a have only corporate elements (no "davyd" in a URL).


> GNOME 2.14 Released
> 
> New version introduces new administration suite and improves performance.

What ab

Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Jeff Waugh


> As for journalists wanting more information, I mentioned we have excellent
> release notes.

I think that's the better way to go. Better, focused resources that press
release regurgitation.

> I also mentioned in my first mail that I excluded the About Gnome stuff on
> the mail because it doesn't really much change from release to release.
> Any final press release would have that included. Maybe I didn't
> communicate that clearly.

Makes more sense now. ;-)

> Regardless, as I mentioned before, I will work on this more this weekend
> and get a complete press release, including the About Gnome and Contact
> sections.

Cool - might be worth doing a compare/contrast/refactor if the About GNOME
stuff is better than, or complements, www.gnome.org/about/ too. By the way,
"GNOME". :-)

Thanks, looks good.

- Jeff

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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Corey Burger
On 3/10/06, Rajiv Vyas <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > Concerning lenght: The argument is, ehm, misleading. Otherwise, we
> > should simply write: "GNOME 2.14 released." and that's it. That's the
> > shortest version possible.  ;-)
>
> I agree.  I am a former journalist (non-tech press before) and also
> worked in public relations. I think the press release needs to be a
> bit longer than couple of paragraph for various reasons, but most
> importantly: it gives reporters enough material to understand what
> GNOME is and also use some of it for their stories. Otherwise, in this
> day and age, just write couple of sentences like "GNOME version XXX
> release. For more information visit Website ." Why even bother
> writing two paragraphs.
>
> Just to get an idea on how big a press release needs to be, below are
> links to press releases on SuSE 10 and MSFT's Windows Service Pack
> launch. See the second release to get an idea on the depth they have
> gone to explain some of the features. This is despite the fact that
> everyone knows about MSFT and even XP. Who seriously knows about GNOME
> except geeks or those who use Linux. If we are planning to broaden our
> reach, we need to dumb it down a bit and put some more information in
> the release.
>
> http://www.novell.com/news/press/item.jsp?contentid=a2e8d2eb89036010VgnVCM10017f
>
> http://www.microsoft.com/presspass/press/2004/aug04/08-06WinXPSP2LaunchPR.mspx

Wow. I wouldn't read either of those press releases. As printed press
releases, maybe, if forced. On the web, no way. There are links on the
web for good reasons. The cost in this case is not too high.

As for journalists wanting more information, I mentioned we have
excellent release notes.

I also mentioned in my first mail that I excluded the About Gnome
stuff on the mail because it doesn't really much change from release
to release. Any final press release would have that included. Maybe I
didn't communicate that clearly.

Regardless, as I mentioned before, I will work on this more this
weekend and get a complete press release, including the About Gnome
and Contact sections.

Cheers and thanks for the great feedback,
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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Rajiv Vyas
> Concerning lenght: The argument is, ehm, misleading. Otherwise, we
> should simply write: "GNOME 2.14 released." and that's it. That's the
> shortest version possible.  ;-)

I agree.  I am a former journalist (non-tech press before) and also
worked in public relations. I think the press release needs to be a
bit longer than couple of paragraph for various reasons, but most
importantly: it gives reporters enough material to understand what
GNOME is and also use some of it for their stories. Otherwise, in this
day and age, just write couple of sentences like "GNOME version XXX
release. For more information visit Website ." Why even bother
writing two paragraphs.

Just to get an idea on how big a press release needs to be, below are
links to press releases on SuSE 10 and MSFT's Windows Service Pack
launch. See the second release to get an idea on the depth they have
gone to explain some of the features. This is despite the fact that
everyone knows about MSFT and even XP. Who seriously knows about GNOME
except geeks or those who use Linux. If we are planning to broaden our
reach, we need to dumb it down a bit and put some more information in
the release.

http://www.novell.com/news/press/item.jsp?contentid=a2e8d2eb89036010VgnVCM10017f

http://www.microsoft.com/presspass/press/2004/aug04/08-06WinXPSP2LaunchPR.mspx




Cheers,

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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Corey Burger
Claus et al,

I sincerely apologize. Davyd said he had recieved something from you
and he offered to forward it on to me. It didn't post it to hack
anybody down. I have never written any press releases and wanted some
geniune feedback. There some really great things from each press
release. I will work this weekend to integrate the two.

Again, apologies,
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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Claus Schwarm
On Fri, 10 Mar 2006 10:07:54 -0800
"Corey Burger" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> Hello all,
> 
> We currently have two press releases, from myself and Claus. I have
> attached both. The key difference between the two is length. Mine is
> fashioned on the 2.12 press release, as well as looking at a few other
> non-gnome ones. They tend to be short, with very few actual details.
> Claus' is longer, with more detail. My inclination is to lead towards
> shorter and push people to the excellent release notes if they want
> more in depth information.
> 
> Thoughts?
> 

First of all, I'm not quite happy to see my draft on the list. If I
wanted it so, I would have sent it directly.

Concerning lenght: The argument is, ehm, misleading. Otherwise, we
should simply write: "GNOME 2.14 released." and that's it. That's the
shortest version possible.  ;-)

However. It wasn't my intention to start a discussion, so I'd suggest
we move on with your version.


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Re: release notes: first draft

2006-03-10 Thread Bob Kashani
On Fri, 2006-03-10 at 14:40 -0600, Shaun McCance wrote:
> On Fri, 2006-03-10 at 12:32 -0800, Bob Kashani wrote:
> > On Fri, 2006-03-10 at 14:05 -0600, Shaun McCance wrote:
> > > On Mon, 2006-03-06 at 23:57 +0800, Davyd Madeley wrote:
> > > > Ok guys and gals. I am announcing a preliminary draft of the release
> > > > notes for 2.14. We now require proof readers for spelling, grammar and
> > > > technical correctness.
> > > > 
> > > > The latest committed version is online at:
> > > > http://www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/C/index.html
> > > > 
> > > > You can also check out the release notes from CVS:
> > > > http://cvs.gnome.org/viewcvs/gnomeweb-wml/www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/docbook/C/
> > > > 
> > > > We are using gnome-doc-utils for translation. I hope the translators
> > > > know how to get all of that working, because I have no idea.
> > > > 
> > > > Warning, I AM AN AUSTRALIAN, SPELLINGS MAY BE CONSIDERED INCORRECT. My
> > > > grammar is also pretty appalling. Please send through corrections for
> > > > these. Feel free to correct minor spelling mistakes yourself.
> > > > 
> > > > Discussion should happen on list as appropriate or on the IRC channel
> > > > #release-notes on irc.gnome.org.
> > > 
> > > Way later than I'd hoped to provide this, but I've
> > > attached a diff with some small changes.  This is
> > > strictly copy editing; I didn't touch content.
> > > 
> > > Basically, the diff says this:
> > 
> > Seems you forgot to add the diff, Shaun...
> 
> Well that was silly of me.

Applied, thanks. :)

Bob

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Re: release notes: first draft

2006-03-10 Thread Shaun McCance
On Fri, 2006-03-10 at 12:32 -0800, Bob Kashani wrote:
> On Fri, 2006-03-10 at 14:05 -0600, Shaun McCance wrote:
> > On Mon, 2006-03-06 at 23:57 +0800, Davyd Madeley wrote:
> > > Ok guys and gals. I am announcing a preliminary draft of the release
> > > notes for 2.14. We now require proof readers for spelling, grammar and
> > > technical correctness.
> > > 
> > > The latest committed version is online at:
> > > http://www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/C/index.html
> > > 
> > > You can also check out the release notes from CVS:
> > > http://cvs.gnome.org/viewcvs/gnomeweb-wml/www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/docbook/C/
> > > 
> > > We are using gnome-doc-utils for translation. I hope the translators
> > > know how to get all of that working, because I have no idea.
> > > 
> > > Warning, I AM AN AUSTRALIAN, SPELLINGS MAY BE CONSIDERED INCORRECT. My
> > > grammar is also pretty appalling. Please send through corrections for
> > > these. Feel free to correct minor spelling mistakes yourself.
> > > 
> > > Discussion should happen on list as appropriate or on the IRC channel
> > > #release-notes on irc.gnome.org.
> > 
> > Way later than I'd hoped to provide this, but I've
> > attached a diff with some small changes.  This is
> > strictly copy editing; I didn't touch content.
> > 
> > Basically, the diff says this:
> 
> Seems you forgot to add the diff, Shaun...

Well that was silly of me.

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? rnotes-shaunm.diff
Index: rnadmins.xml
===
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnomeweb-wml/www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/docbook/C/rnadmins.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.11 rnadmins.xml
--- rnadmins.xml	10 Mar 2006 05:01:38 -	1.11
+++ rnadmins.xml	10 Mar 2006 19:54:35 -
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 		
 			Users or groups (???) are placed into profiles which will be used when
 			they log into their GNOME session. This allows an administrator to easily
-			create multiple profiles and allocate each user separately. Which allows
+			create multiple profiles and allocate each user separately, which allows
 			users to have different setups based on their job description (e.g. receptionist, data
 			entry clerk, programmer, human resources manager, etc.).
 		
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 Command-line access
 			
 			
-The ability to shutdown or reboot the machine
+The ability to shut down or reboot the machine
 			
 			
 Access to specific protocols in the web browser
Index: rndevelopers.xml
===
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnomeweb-wml/www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/docbook/C/rndevelopers.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.11 rndevelopers.xml
--- rndevelopers.xml	10 Mar 2006 05:11:44 -	1.11
+++ rndevelopers.xml	10 Mar 2006 19:54:35 -
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@
 	
 		The GNOME 2.14 Developers' Platform provides a stable base for independent
 		software developers to create third-party applications. GNOME and its
-		platform are licensed to allow the creation of both Free and Proprietary
-		Software to run on top of GNOME.
+		platform are licensed to allow the creation of both free and proprietary
+		software to run on top of GNOME.
 	
 
 	
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 			As of GLib 2.10,
 			the GSlice allocator replaces the older GMemChunk and GTrashStacks APIs
 			available in GLib. GSlice is very similar to the kernel slab allocator and
-			allows for fast, memory efficient allocation of small structures (e.g.
+			allows for fast, memory-efficient allocation of small structures (e.g.
 			GList
 			elements, GtkWindow structures). GSlice also has none of the locking
 			overhead of GMemChunk, which makes it much faster in multithreaded
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
 in this way.
 			
 			
-Session managed applications will not be handled cleanly, ensure that
+Session managed applications will not be handled cleanly, so ensure that
 you pass the --sm-disable flag on your
 Exec line.
 			
Index: rngettinginvolved.xml
===
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnomeweb-wml/www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/docbook/C/rngettinginvolved.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.7 rngettinginvolved.xml
--- rngettinginvolved.xml	10 Mar 2006 05:08:44 -	1.7
+++ rngettinginvolved.xml	10 Mar 2006 19:54:35 -
@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@
 	Getting Involved
 
 	
-		Helping GNOME is a rewarding, satisfying and positive experience. You will
+		Helping GNOME is a rewarding, satisfying, and positive experience. You will
 		join with hundreds of dedicated enthusiasts from all walks of life and all
 		places on the globe. Skilled and motivated contributors to GNOME may find
 		new doors and opportunities open for them in the form of recognition,
-		speaking appearances and gainful employment.
+		speaking appearances, and gainful employment.
 	
 	
 	
Index: rnusers.xml
===
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnomeweb-wml/www.g

Re: release notes: first draft

2006-03-10 Thread Bob Kashani
On Fri, 2006-03-10 at 14:05 -0600, Shaun McCance wrote:
> On Mon, 2006-03-06 at 23:57 +0800, Davyd Madeley wrote:
> > Ok guys and gals. I am announcing a preliminary draft of the release
> > notes for 2.14. We now require proof readers for spelling, grammar and
> > technical correctness.
> > 
> > The latest committed version is online at:
> > http://www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/C/index.html
> > 
> > You can also check out the release notes from CVS:
> > http://cvs.gnome.org/viewcvs/gnomeweb-wml/www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/docbook/C/
> > 
> > We are using gnome-doc-utils for translation. I hope the translators
> > know how to get all of that working, because I have no idea.
> > 
> > Warning, I AM AN AUSTRALIAN, SPELLINGS MAY BE CONSIDERED INCORRECT. My
> > grammar is also pretty appalling. Please send through corrections for
> > these. Feel free to correct minor spelling mistakes yourself.
> > 
> > Discussion should happen on list as appropriate or on the IRC channel
> > #release-notes on irc.gnome.org.
> 
> Way later than I'd hoped to provide this, but I've
> attached a diff with some small changes.  This is
> strictly copy editing; I didn't touch content.
> 
> Basically, the diff says this:

Seems you forgot to add the diff, Shaun...

Bob

> * I am a religious supporter of the serial comma.  Googling
>   for support brought up this very succinct argument:
>   http://www.getitwriteonline.com/archive/021201.htm
> 
> * The GDP Style Guide says "file system".
> 
> * "Shutdown" is a noun.  "Shut down" is a verb.
> 
> * Some compound adjectives needed hyphenating.
> 
> * Germans capitalize every last noun, but we don't.
> 
> * Nautilus is referred to everywhere (inclding throughout
>   this document) as the file manager.  So a lone reference
>   to the file browser seemed out of place.
> 
> * A few commas were missing, not just the serial type.
> 
> This is great work, Davyd.
> 
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Re: release notes: first draft

2006-03-10 Thread Shaun McCance
On Mon, 2006-03-06 at 23:57 +0800, Davyd Madeley wrote:
> Ok guys and gals. I am announcing a preliminary draft of the release
> notes for 2.14. We now require proof readers for spelling, grammar and
> technical correctness.
> 
> The latest committed version is online at:
> http://www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/C/index.html
> 
> You can also check out the release notes from CVS:
> http://cvs.gnome.org/viewcvs/gnomeweb-wml/www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/docbook/C/
> 
> We are using gnome-doc-utils for translation. I hope the translators
> know how to get all of that working, because I have no idea.
> 
> Warning, I AM AN AUSTRALIAN, SPELLINGS MAY BE CONSIDERED INCORRECT. My
> grammar is also pretty appalling. Please send through corrections for
> these. Feel free to correct minor spelling mistakes yourself.
> 
> Discussion should happen on list as appropriate or on the IRC channel
> #release-notes on irc.gnome.org.

Way later than I'd hoped to provide this, but I've
attached a diff with some small changes.  This is
strictly copy editing; I didn't touch content.

Basically, the diff says this:

* I am a religious supporter of the serial comma.  Googling
  for support brought up this very succinct argument:
  http://www.getitwriteonline.com/archive/021201.htm

* The GDP Style Guide says "file system".

* "Shutdown" is a noun.  "Shut down" is a verb.

* Some compound adjectives needed hyphenating.

* Germans capitalize every last noun, but we don't.

* Nautilus is referred to everywhere (inclding throughout
  this document) as the file manager.  So a lone reference
  to the file browser seemed out of place.

* A few commas were missing, not just the serial type.

This is great work, Davyd.

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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Murray Cumming
On Fri, 2006-03-10 at 10:07 -0800, Corey Burger wrote:
> Hello all,
> 
> We currently have two press releases, from myself and Claus. I have
> attached both. The key difference between the two is length. Mine is
> fashioned on the 2.12 press release, as well as looking at a few other
> non-gnome ones. They tend to be short, with very few actual details.
> Claus' is longer, with more detail. My inclination is to lead towards
> shorter and push people to the excellent release notes if they want
> more in depth information.
> 
> Thoughts?

Definitely yours, but you need at least one quote. Journalists like
quotes, to make stories personal. Quotes plus some bullet points give a
piece enough structure to be readable at a glance.

You should write the quote for someone and ask them to approve/adjust
it.

To encourage journalists to actually read the press release, I'd add
"and screenshots". And a link to the LiveCD, when it exists, might be
appropriate.

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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread David Neary


Hi,

Corey Burger wrote:

We currently have two press releases, from myself and Claus. I have
attached both. The key difference between the two is length. Mine is
fashioned on the 2.12 press release, as well as looking at a few other
non-gnome ones. They tend to be short, with very few actual details.
Claus' is longer, with more detail. My inclination is to lead towards
shorter and push people to the excellent release notes if they want
more in depth information.

Thoughts?


The shorter the better.

"GNOME 2.14 release, and it doesn't suck that much" with a URL would be 
a great release from my point of view. We need to remind people what 
GNOME is, and point them towards the release notes, and (as Tom said) 
include some notes explaining TLAs, but I like yours best, if we can add 
one piece of punch to it. Plus, I'd like to avoid using Linux n a press 
release, and either use GNU/Linux, or drop any mention of platforms. I 
hate those "the leading..." bits anyway, I'd drop it completely, and 
leave the nicer "the easiest and friendliest free software desktop" 
description at the end.



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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Corey Burger
On 3/10/06, Rajiv Vyas <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On 3/10/06, Corey Burger <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > Hello all,
> >
> > We currently have two press releases, from myself and Claus. I have
> > attached both. The key difference between the two is length. Mine is
> > fashioned on the 2.12 press release, as well as looking at a few other
> > non-gnome ones. They tend to be short, with very few actual details.
> > Claus' is longer, with more detail. My inclination is to lead towards
> > shorter and push people to the excellent release notes if they want
> > more in depth information.
>
>
> I personally like the longer version by Claus. I think it flows very
> well and can even be picked by non-tech press.
>
> Rajiv

I think the non-tech press is less likely to pick up a longer press
release, but that is my feeling.

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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Tom Chance
Ahoy,

For what it's worth...

On Friday 10 March 2006 18:07, Corey Burger wrote:
> We currently have two press releases, from myself and Claus. I have
> attached both. The key difference between the two is length. Mine is
> fashioned on the 2.12 press release, as well as looking at a few other
> non-gnome ones. They tend to be short, with very few actual details.
> Claus' is longer, with more detail. My inclination is to lead towards
> shorter and push people to the excellent release notes if they want
> more in depth information.
>
> Thoughts?

I'd go for yours plus a snappy quote after the new feature list. You'll also 
want to footnote a few things and provide, in editors' notes, a brief 
explanation of what the heck certain things are (GNOME, VOIP & SIP). Finally 
you need some "for more info" contact details in there, immediately after the 
text and before any editors' notes.

Tech press releases always seem to be inexplicably long and boring. Short 'n' 
sweet is always better =)

Regards,
Tom

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Re: Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Rajiv Vyas
On 3/10/06, Corey Burger <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hello all,
>
> We currently have two press releases, from myself and Claus. I have
> attached both. The key difference between the two is length. Mine is
> fashioned on the 2.12 press release, as well as looking at a few other
> non-gnome ones. They tend to be short, with very few actual details.
> Claus' is longer, with more detail. My inclination is to lead towards
> shorter and push people to the excellent release notes if they want
> more in depth information.


I personally like the longer version by Claus. I think it flows very
well and can even be picked by non-tech press.

Rajiv
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Press releases

2006-03-10 Thread Corey Burger
Hello all,

We currently have two press releases, from myself and Claus. I have
attached both. The key difference between the two is length. Mine is
fashioned on the 2.12 press release, as well as looking at a few other
non-gnome ones. They tend to be short, with very few actual details.
Claus' is longer, with more detail. My inclination is to lead towards
shorter and push people to the excellent release notes if they want
more in depth information.

Thoughts?
The GNOME Project is please to announce the release of the latest
version of the GNOME Desktop and Developer Platform, the leading
desktop for Linux and Unix operating systems. Version 2.14 improves
the usability, power and performance of GNOME in response to user
feedback and developer contributions, and includes thousands of
changes to refine the easiest and friendliest free software desktop.

Some the key new features:

 * The creation of an admin suite. including a lock down editor,
Pessulus, and a user profile editor, Sabayon.
 * A new search bar, called Deskbar, which can search through local
files, programs and contacts as well as on the web
 * Ekiga, a VOIP client which can now talk SIP, used by Google Talk,
Asterisk and others. Ekiga was formerly known as GnomeMeeting
 * The ability to switch users quickly, without logging off
 * Even easier configuration
 * Performance work, making your desktop even snappier.

For more detailed information about the great new features of GNOME
2.14, please see the 2.14 release notes at
http://www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/C/index.html

To get GNOME 2.14 for your favourite flavour of Linux, BSD, Solaris or
Unix, please see our Getting Footware page at
http://www.gnome.org/~davyd/footware.shtml
GNOME 2.14 Released

New version introduces new administration suite and improves performance.

BOSTON, Mass - September 7, 2005 - The GNOME Project today released the latest 
version of the popular GNOME Desktop and Developer Platform. With a new 
administration suite, system-wide performance improvements, better search 
capabilities, a brand-new Voice-over-IP softphone, and numerous other 
enhancements, GNOME 2.14 finishes another half year development schedule.

The new administration suite, initially consisting of two new packages called 
Pessulus and Sabayon, satiesfies the need of business system administrators to 
control and configure corporate, and institutional deployments: Pessulus allows 
administrators to disable certain features of the GNOME desktop, useful in 
corporate environments, Internet cafés, and schools. Sabayon allows 
administrators to set up generic, role-based  user profiles to simply set up 
and configure new user accounts.

The new release also includes several changes to improve system performance. 
Among them, the new memory allocator, called GSlice, will make the desktop more 
responsive and faster. 



Performance improvements will also originate from the inclusion of the latest 
release of the GStreamer Multimedia Framework in GNOME 2.14, removing several 
issues on multi-processor systems and improving stability and playback support.

GNOME 2.14 also includes Ekiga, the new version of GNOME's softphone client 
formally know as GNOME Meeting. With Ekiga, users are able to make video or 
audio calls over the Internet, using the industry standard protocal SIP. SIP is 
also used by Google Talk, and popular PBX software such as Asterisk.



GNOME 2.14 also integrates better search capabilities all over the desktop. In 
its core desktop module, the file manager Nautilus, searching gets as simple as 
in the Firefox Internet browser: A small window appears inside to enter 
expressions.

Additionally, a new so-called Deskbar will integrate into the desktop panel. 
Users will be able to use several internet search engines and content providers 
directly, without breaking workflow by starting another application. It will 
also enable them to make launch desktop applications related to a word or 
phrase, and its functionality is extensible by plugins. Searching is now also 
possible in GNOME integrated help viewer.

Other improvements include a new integrated screensaver, fast user switching, 
network saving and a plugin mechanism for the default editor, advanced 
functions for desktop windows, shared calendering, smarter bookmarking, and 
redesigned interface for configuring preferred applications and sound 
preferences.



Availability

GNOME 2.14 will soon be available as part of most popular Linux distributions. 
For those who can't wait, the new GNOME LiveCD (available from 
www.gnome.org/start/2.14/) allows users and journalists to test the latest 
GNOME desktop by burning a CD and rebooting - no installation is necessary.

Developers and advanced users wishing to install the GNOME 2.14 Desktop and 
Developer Platform now may download the software at 
http://ftp.gnome.org/pub/GNOME/desktop/ The software includes the source code 
for the GNOME 2.14 desktop interface and a complete set of d

Re: Writing the press release for 2.14.0 (was Re: release notes: first draft)

2006-03-10 Thread Corey Burger
On 3/9/06, Rajiv Vyas <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On 3/9/06, Vincent Untz <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > Hi,
> >
> > Le lundi 06 mars 2006 à 23:57 +0800, Davyd Madeley a écrit :
> > >  - Does anyone want to take charge on writing a press release? I am
> > > willing to raise my hand again if so required.
> >
> > Did anyone start working on it? Any volunteer from the marketing team?
>
>
> I can probably work on this. Am in beween jobs so should be able to
> work over the weekend. The only caveat is that my new job starts early
> next week, so after than I won't have much time.

Here is the first stab at the release notes. I have excluded the What
is GNOME part, as that is not likely to change that much.



The GNOME Project is please to announce the release of the latest
version of the GNOME Desktop and Developer Platform, the leading
desktop for Linux and Unix operating systems. Version 2.14 improves
the usability, power and performance of GNOME in response to user
feedback and developer contributions, and includes thousands of
changes to refine the easiest and friendliest free software desktop.

Some the key new features:

 * The creation of an admin suite. including a lock down editor,
Pessulus, and a user profile editor, Sabayon.
 * A new search bar, called Deskbar, which can search through local
files, programs and contacts as well as on the web
 * Ekiga, a VOIP client which can now talk SIP, used by Google Talk,
Asterisk and others. Ekiga was formerly known as GnomeMeeting
 * The ability to switch users quickly, without logging off
 * Even easier configuration
 * Performance work, making your desktop even snappier.

For more detailed information about the great new features of GNOME
2.14, please see the 2.14 release notes at
http://www.gnome.org/start/2.14/notes/C/index.html

To get GNOME 2.14 for your favourite flavour of Linux, BSD, Solaris or
Unix, please see our Getting Footware page at
http://www.gnome.org/~davyd/footware.shtml



Thoughts?

Corey
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