Joel, thanks for your reviews. Martin, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.
I do think the new text in Section 1 helps clarify the scope of the server’s responsibility (for me, at least). Alissa > On Oct 4, 2018, at 8:35 AM, Joel M. Halpern <j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote: > > I had thought we had discussed sufficient edits. When I looked at the diff, > what I saw helped some, but still left me concerned. > Yours, > Joel > > On 10/4/18 6:06 AM, Martin Bjorklund wrote: >> Hi, >> Joel Halpern <j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote: >>> Reviewer: Joel Halpern >>> Review result: Ready with Issues >>> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your >>> document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. >>> >>> For more information, please see the FAQ at >>> >>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>> >>> Document: draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-?? >>> Reviewer: Joel Halpern >>> Review Date: 2018-10-03 >>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-29 >>> IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11 >>> >>> Summary: This document seems to meet the specific requirements for >>> publication >>> as a proposed standard. >>> >>> Major issues: >>> It is still this reviewer's opinion that for a reader who has not been >>> involved in the discussion in the working group, the document is quite >>> unclear and confusing. For somewhat more details, please see my >>> previous >>> review at >>> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10-genart-lc-halpern-2018-06-28/ >> I'm sorry to hear that you find it confusing. I was under the >> impression that the edits that we made after your previous review were >> sufficient. >> /martin >>> >>> Minor issues: >>> N/A >>> >>> Nits/editorial comments: >>> N/A >>> >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> netmod mailing list >>> netmod@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod >>> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > gen-...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
