[OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (6615)
The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6749, "The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework". -- You may review the report below and at: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6615 -- Type: Editorial Reported by: Daniel Barclay Section: GLOBAL Original Text - Condition descriptions like "The authorization server ... validates the authorization grant, and if valid, issues an access token." Corrected Text -- Adjusted descriptions like "The authorization server ... validates the authorization grant, and if it is valid, issues an access token." Notes - The wording pattern "A validates B, and if valid, does X" means "A validates B, and if A is valid, does X" and is confusing. Those descriptions' wording should be adjusted, probably to the pattern "A validates B, and if it is valid, does X" (or whatever else actually says what was meant to be specified). There are many occurrences with literally "and if valid"; it looks (from a quick search) like most, but not all, need adjustment. There are also several cases of "and if" followed by something other than "valid"--some seem correct, but a few might need adjustment. Instructions: - This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -- RFC6749 (draft-ietf-oauth-v2-31) -- Title : The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework Publication Date: October 2012 Author(s) : D. Hardt, Ed. Category: PROPOSED STANDARD Source : Web Authorization Protocol Area: Security Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG ___ OAuth mailing list OAuth@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
[OAUTH-WG] RAR WGLC editorial feedback
In a PR to try and make it easy https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-rar/pull/74/files#diff-cbb16c6731a89f7daa2f8f1963f5c005633f4273846af12926d187292cb3a66b -- _CONFIDENTIALITY NOTICE: This email may contain confidential and privileged material for the sole use of the intended recipient(s). Any review, use, distribution or disclosure by others is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify the sender immediately by e-mail and delete the message and any file attachments from your computer. Thank you._ ___ OAuth mailing list OAuth@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
[OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (6614)
The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6749, "The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework". -- You may review the report below and at: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6614 -- Type: Editorial Reported by: Daniel Barclay Section: 5.1 Original Text - ... adding the following parameters to the entity-body of the HTTP response ... Corrected Text -- ... adding the following parameters as members to the JSON object in the entity-body of the HTTP response ... Notes - Saying "adding the following parameters to the entity-body" seems to be confusing, implying that HTTP entity bodies have parameters (at the level of semantics defined by HTTP), which they don't. The corrected text doesn't necessarily need to be what I proposed in the "Corrected Text" field, but it should probably at least refer to the data or (JSON) object inside the entity body instead of just referring to the entity body. Instructions: - This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -- RFC6749 (draft-ietf-oauth-v2-31) -- Title : The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework Publication Date: October 2012 Author(s) : D. Hardt, Ed. Category: PROPOSED STANDARD Source : Web Authorization Protocol Area: Security Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG ___ OAuth mailing list OAuth@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
[OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (6613)
The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6749, "The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework". -- You may review the report below and at: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6613 -- Type: Editorial Reported by: Daniel Barclay Section: 3.3 Original Text - The value of the scope parameter is expressed as a list of space-delimited, case-sensitive strings Corrected Text -- The value of the scope parameter is expressed as a space-delimited list of case-sensitive strings Notes - The original/current seems to be a bit confusing. The value is not a collection of space-delimited strings (whatever a "space-delimited string" would be), but it a space-delimited (representation of) a collection of strings. Instructions: - This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -- RFC6749 (draft-ietf-oauth-v2-31) -- Title : The OAuth 2.0 Authorization Framework Publication Date: October 2012 Author(s) : D. Hardt, Ed. Category: PROPOSED STANDARD Source : Web Authorization Protocol Area: Security Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG ___ OAuth mailing list OAuth@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth
