Re: [OpenIndiana-discuss] [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-24 Thread Alexander Pyhalov 

On 10/24/16 05:54 AM, Michael Kruger wrote:

This is a request for comments for an updated OpenIndiana-Welcome doc...

Did a quick update of the doc which ships with OI and is presented the
first time Firefox is run.

Please review and if you have suggestions for what else should be added
to this, or would like to see something changed, please let me know.

Feel free to turn on change tracking and send me back an edited copy.

but please no bike-shedding.as I would like to see this get shipped
with the next release.



Looks fine. As for table, it would be good to have some links in first 
column
(so that one could  click on ZFS and go to illumos-gate ZFS guide (or 
perhaps wikipedia page) and so on)



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Re: [OpenIndiana-discuss] [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-24 Thread ken mays via openindiana-discuss 


Michael,

I like it overall.

Ken




On Sunday, October 23, 2016 7:55 PM, Michael Kruger  
wrote:
This is a request for comments for an updated OpenIndiana-Welcome doc...


...
ODT file is attached.

thanks,

Michael

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Re: [OpenIndiana-discuss] [oi-dev] Updated OpenIndiana-Welcome

2016-10-25 Thread Alexander Pyhalov 

On 10/26/16 05:15 AM, Michael Kruger wrote:

Whoops...sent an old version. Here is the latest version with the fix.


I would move links to the first column (so that ZFS was a link, not File 
System and Volume Manager).



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