Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05

[Thomas.Graf]

Hi Rob,

Excellent. Many thanks for the AD review and comments.

I updated and posted the draft -06 version accordingly.

Best wishes
Thomas

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Subject: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05

Hi Thomas,

This is my AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05.

Thanks for the draft, it is both short and sweet, and I have only a few minor 
comments/suggestions:

1. In the abstract, I would suggest changing on which MPLS control plane 
protocol within => the MPLS control plane protocol used within

2. Please add a reference to RFC 7012 in the IANA registrations.

E.g., something like:

   This document requests IANA to allocate the following code points in
   the existing subregistry "IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46)" under the
   "IPFIX Information Elements" registry [RFC7012] available at [IANA-IPFIX].

3. Two minor nits:

Also [I-D.ali-spring-sr-traffic-accounting] => Also, 
[I-D.ali-spring-sr-traffic-accounting]

I would like to thank to =>
I would like to thank

Please post an updated draft with these changes, then let me know and I'll kick 
off the IETF LC.

Med, thanks for the good shepherd writeup, it is both clear and informative.

Thanks,
Rob


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[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-06.txt

[internet-drafts]

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group 
WG of the IETF.

Title   : Export of MPLS Segment Routing Label Type Information 
in IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)
Author  : Thomas Graf
Filename: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-06.txt
Pages   : 6
Date: 2021-07-01

Abstract:
   This document introduces new IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) code
   points to identify which traffic is being forwarded based on which
   MPLS control plane protocol used within a Segment Routing domain.  In
   particular, this document defines four code points for the IPFIX
   mplsTopLabelType Information Element for IS-IS, OSPFv2, OSPFv3, and
   BGP MPLS Segment Routing extensions.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type/

There is also an htmlized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-06

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-06


Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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[OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05

[Rob Wilton (rwilton)]

Hi Thomas,

This is my AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-05.

Thanks for the draft, it is both short and sweet, and I have only a few minor 
comments/suggestions:

1. In the abstract, I would suggest changing
on which MPLS control plane protocol within =>
the MPLS control plane protocol used within

2. Please add a reference to RFC 7012 in the IANA registrations.

E.g., something like:

   This document requests IANA to allocate the following code points in
   the existing subregistry "IPFIX MPLS label type (Value 46)" under the
   "IPFIX Information Elements" registry [RFC7012] available at [IANA-IPFIX].

3. Two minor nits:

Also [I-D.ali-spring-sr-traffic-accounting] =>
Also, [I-D.ali-spring-sr-traffic-accounting]

I would like to thank to =>
I would like to thank

Please post an updated draft with these changes, then let me know and I'll kick 
off the IETF LC.

Med, thanks for the good shepherd writeup, it is both clear and informative.

Thanks,
Rob

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Re: [OPSAWG] Call for presentation

[Benoit Claise]

Hi Tianran,

I would like to cover the soon-to-be-posted new versions of
draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-00 

draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-00 



Regards, Benoit
On 7/1/2021 9:50 AM, Tianran Zhou wrote:


Hi WG,

The OPSAWG meeting is now in the preliminary 111 agenda at 16:00-18:00 
Friday Session III.


We now open the call for presentation.

Please send over your request to the chairs.

Cheers,

Tianran


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[OPSAWG] Call for presentation

[Tianran Zhou]

Hi WG,

The OPSAWG meeting is now in the preliminary 111 agenda at 16:00-18:00 Friday 
Session III.
We now open the call for presentation.
Please send over your request to the chairs.

Cheers,
Tianran
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