Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt
I believe this version of the document addresses all concerns. The approach taken to reference the registry was accepted as is, so the only changes in this version was to convert textual references to RFC 8446 and RFC9150 to xref links and to add RFC 9150 to the list of informative references at the end of the document. The document should be ready to submit back to IANA for their approval; I've included Amanda on the email, but I assume the formal release needs to come from Joe (or perhaps Rob since the web site shows him as the action owner). Regards, Ken Vaughn Trevilon LLC 1060 S Hwy 107 Del Rio, TN 37727 +1-571-331-5670 cell kvau...@trevilon.com www.trevilon.com > On Mar 30, 2023, at 7:18 PM, internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Operations and > Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > > Title : Updates to the TLS Transport Model for SNMP > Author : Kenneth Vaughn > Filename: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt > Pages : 34 > Date: 2023-03-30 > > Abstract: > This document updates RFC 6353 "Transport Layer Security (TLS) > Transport Model for the Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP)", > to reflect changes necessary to support Transport Layer Security > Version 1.3 (TLS 1.3) and Datagram Transport Layer Security Version > 1.3 (DTLS 1.3), which are jointly known as "(D)TLS 1.3". This > document is compatible with (D)TLS 1.2 and is intended to be > compatible with future versions of SNMP and (D)TLS. > > This document updates the SNMP-TLS-TM-MIB as defined in RFC 6353. > > The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update/ > > There is also an HTML version available at: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.html > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14 > > Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts > > > ___ > OPSAWG mailing list > OPSAWG@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg > ___ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt
Hi Ken, Joe, OPSAWG, Thank you all for your work and reviews of this document. This document has now been approved and moves on to the RFC editor queue. Regards, Rob From: Kenneth Vaughn Sent: 31 March 2023 00:33 To: opsawg@ietf.org; Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; Rob Wilton (rwilton) Cc: i-d-annou...@ietf.org; Amanda Baber via RT Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt I believe this version of the document addresses all concerns. The approach taken to reference the registry was accepted as is, so the only changes in this version was to convert textual references to RFC 8446 and RFC9150 to xref links and to add RFC 9150 to the list of informative references at the end of the document. The document should be ready to submit back to IANA for their approval; I've included Amanda on the email, but I assume the formal release needs to come from Joe (or perhaps Rob since the web site shows him as the action owner). Regards, Ken Vaughn Trevilon LLC 1060 S Hwy 107 Del Rio, TN 37727 +1-571-331-5670 cell kvau...@trevilon.com<mailto:kvau...@trevilon.com> www.trevilon.com<http://www.trevilon.com> On Mar 30, 2023, at 7:18 PM, internet-dra...@ietf.org<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote: A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title : Updates to the TLS Transport Model for SNMP Author : Kenneth Vaughn Filename: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt Pages : 34 Date: 2023-03-30 Abstract: This document updates RFC 6353 "Transport Layer Security (TLS) Transport Model for the Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP)", to reflect changes necessary to support Transport Layer Security Version 1.3 (TLS 1.3) and Datagram Transport Layer Security Version 1.3 (DTLS 1.3), which are jointly known as "(D)TLS 1.3". This document is compatible with (D)TLS 1.2 and is intended to be compatible with future versions of SNMP and (D)TLS. This document updates the SNMP-TLS-TM-MIB as defined in RFC 6353. The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update/ There is also an HTML version available at: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.html A diff from the previous version is available at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14 Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts ___ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org<mailto:OPSAWG@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg ___ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt
Thanks, Rob! Joe From: Rob Wilton (rwilton) Date: Monday, April 17, 2023 at 13:05 To: Kenneth Vaughn , opsawg@ietf.org , Joe Clarke (jclarke) Cc: i-d-annou...@ietf.org , Amanda Baber via RT Subject: RE: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt Hi Ken, Joe, OPSAWG, Thank you all for your work and reviews of this document. This document has now been approved and moves on to the RFC editor queue. Regards, Rob From: Kenneth Vaughn Sent: 31 March 2023 00:33 To: opsawg@ietf.org; Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; Rob Wilton (rwilton) Cc: i-d-annou...@ietf.org; Amanda Baber via RT Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt I believe this version of the document addresses all concerns. The approach taken to reference the registry was accepted as is, so the only changes in this version was to convert textual references to RFC 8446 and RFC9150 to xref links and to add RFC 9150 to the list of informative references at the end of the document. The document should be ready to submit back to IANA for their approval; I've included Amanda on the email, but I assume the formal release needs to come from Joe (or perhaps Rob since the web site shows him as the action owner). Regards, Ken Vaughn Trevilon LLC 1060 S Hwy 107 Del Rio, TN 37727 +1-571-331-5670 cell kvau...@trevilon.com<mailto:kvau...@trevilon.com> www.trevilon.com<http://www.trevilon.com> On Mar 30, 2023, at 7:18 PM, internet-dra...@ietf.org<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote: A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title : Updates to the TLS Transport Model for SNMP Author : Kenneth Vaughn Filename: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.txt Pages : 34 Date: 2023-03-30 Abstract: This document updates RFC 6353 "Transport Layer Security (TLS) Transport Model for the Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP)", to reflect changes necessary to support Transport Layer Security Version 1.3 (TLS 1.3) and Datagram Transport Layer Security Version 1.3 (DTLS 1.3), which are jointly known as "(D)TLS 1.3". This document is compatible with (D)TLS 1.2 and is intended to be compatible with future versions of SNMP and (D)TLS. This document updates the SNMP-TLS-TM-MIB as defined in RFC 6353. The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update/ There is also an HTML version available at: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14.html A diff from the previous version is available at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-14 Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts ___ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org<mailto:OPSAWG@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg ___ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg