PEOW: Another GBH Portrait

2006-07-20 Thread Jay Taylor
I have not been able to get out and do much shooting as of late since  
I'm busy trying to move into a new home my wife and I are purchasing.  
That coupled with the start of Salmon fishing season has kept me away  
from my camera. This is another of my Great Blue Heron images  
captured with the *istDL and the FA*300 f4.5 + F1.7X adapter.  The  
full res image looked pretty awesome on this shot. For this web  
resized version I experimented with blurring the background more at  
an attempt to create a more pleasing bokeh. As always comments and  
suggestions are helpful.

Thanks,
JayT
http://i.pbase.com/o4/87/63987/1/63808751.VbQd49L0.GBHPortrait3.jpg

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Re: Another GBH Portrait

2006-07-20 Thread Kenneth Waller
As posted I have several issues with this one.

The bill touching the RH edge looks like a mistake, it needs to have more 
separation from the edge.
The intersection of the bill with that thingy in the background is 
unfortunate as it draws my eye to it.
Focus & exposure looks right on, although it appears a little dark IMHO on 
my calibrated monitor.

Kenneth Waller

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>I have not been able to get out and do much shooting as of late since
> I'm busy trying to move into a new home my wife and I are purchasing.
> That coupled with the start of Salmon fishing season has kept me away
> from my camera. This is another of my Great Blue Heron images
> captured with the *istDL and the FA*300 f4.5 + F1.7X adapter.  The
> full res image looked pretty awesome on this shot. For this web
> resized version I experimented with blurring the background more at
> an attempt to create a more pleasing bokeh. As always comments and
> suggestions are helpful.
>
> Thanks,
> JayT
> http://i.pbase.com/o4/87/63987/1/63808751.VbQd49L0.GBHPortrait3.jpg
>
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Re: PEOW: Another GBH Portrait

2006-07-20 Thread Christian
Jay Taylor wrote:
> I have not been able to get out and do much shooting as of late since  
> I'm busy trying to move into a new home my wife and I are purchasing.  
> That coupled with the start of Salmon fishing season has kept me away  
> from my camera. This is another of my Great Blue Heron images  
> captured with the *istDL and the FA*300 f4.5 + F1.7X adapter.  The  
> full res image looked pretty awesome on this shot. For this web  
> resized version I experimented with blurring the background more at  
> an attempt to create a more pleasing bokeh. As always comments and  
> suggestions are helpful.
> 
> Thanks,
> JayT
> http://i.pbase.com/o4/87/63987/1/63808751.VbQd49L0.GBHPortrait3.jpg
> 

It's a really sharp image, but like the other shot a while back (not 
sure from whom), I dislike disembodied head shots of herons, egrets and 
cranes.  They just look all wrong. :-)

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Re: PEOW: Another GBH Portrait

2006-07-20 Thread Keith McGuinness
Christian wrote:
> Jay Taylor wrote:
>> I have not been able to get out and do much shooting as of late since  
>> I'm busy trying to move into a new home my wife and I are purchasing.  
>> That coupled with the start of Salmon fishing season has kept me away  
>> from my camera. This is another of my Great Blue Heron images  
>> captured with the *istDL and the FA*300 f4.5 + F1.7X adapter.  The  
>> full res image looked pretty awesome on this shot. For this web  
>> resized version I experimented with blurring the background more at  
>> an attempt to create a more pleasing bokeh. As always comments and  
>> suggestions are helpful.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> JayT
>> http://i.pbase.com/o4/87/63987/1/63808751.VbQd49L0.GBHPortrait3.jpg
>>
> It's a really sharp image, but like the other shot a while back (not 
> sure from whom), I dislike disembodied head shots of herons, egrets and 
> cranes.  They just look all wrong. :-)

Nicely taken; texture on feathers is great.

I think the crop is too close; the heron looks squeezed in the 
frame. Also I think you may have overdone the blur and that makes 
it look a bit strange.

Just IMO.

Keith McG


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Re: PEOW: Another GBH Portrait

2006-07-20 Thread Bruce Dayton
I've got to go with Christian on this one.  Technically, it is
excellent.  It belongs in a book about Herons to help you see exactly
what they look like (at least the head/neck).

But aesthetically, it doesn't quite do it for me.  I'd like to see the
body and maybe even a small bit of surroundings.

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Thursday, July 20, 2006, 1:24:17 AM, you wrote:

C> It's a really sharp image, but like the other shot a while back (not
C> sure from whom), I dislike disembodied head shots of herons, egrets and
C> cranes.  They just look all wrong. :-)

C> -- 

C> Christian
C> http://photography.skofteland.net


C> Jay Taylor wrote:
>> I have not been able to get out and do much shooting as of late since
>> I'm busy trying to move into a new home my wife and I are purchasing.
>> That coupled with the start of Salmon fishing season has kept me away
>> from my camera. This is another of my Great Blue Heron images  
>> captured with the *istDL and the FA*300 f4.5 + F1.7X adapter.  The
>> full res image looked pretty awesome on this shot. For this web  
>> resized version I experimented with blurring the background more at
>> an attempt to create a more pleasing bokeh. As always comments and
>> suggestions are helpful.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> JayT
>> http://i.pbase.com/o4/87/63987/1/63808751.VbQd49L0.GBHPortrait3.jpg
>> 





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