Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows
Well seen - nice patterns intersecting. Mark On 9/19/2013 7:55 AM, Rick Womer wrote: From my walk to work Tuesday morning: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17532915-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows, Take 2
Quoting Rick Womer : Thanks for all the comments! Yes, the trolley was rather a dominating presence in the photo. This is from a slightly earlier exposure, cropped so that there's just a bit of the trolley to provide context: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17533634 or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17533634-lg.jpg Yes - I prefer that although the trolley is now an incidental part of the image. Probably need a new title :-)> -- Cheers Brian ++ Brian Walters Western Sydney Australia http://lyons-ryan.org/southernlight/ -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows, Take 2
On 19/9/13, Rick Womer, discombobulated, unleashed: >http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17533634 > >or > >http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17533634-lg.jpg That's better for me but the trolley does nothing at all for me. The shadows are the subject. :) -- Cheers, Cotty ___/\__Broadcast, Corporate, || (O) |Web Video Production -- _ -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows, Take 2
I like that much better. Before I couldn't really tell what was trolley and what wasn't. Better pattern overall. Marnie aka Doe :-) In a message dated 9/19/2013 6:40:55 P.M. Pacific Daylight Time, rwomer1...@yahoo.com writes: Thanks for all the comments! Yes, the trolley was rather a dominating presence in the photo. This is from a slightly earlier exposure, cropped so that there's just a bit of the trolley to provide context: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17533634 or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17533634-lg.jpg The old version is here: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 I think the new version is better. What say ye? Cheers, Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows, Take 2
I'm in the minority in that I liked the first better. There's enough streetcar (or tram or whatever you call them there) to distract but not enough to satisfy my curiosity. First one was more dynamic to my eye. Cheers, frank Rick Womer wrote: >Thanks for all the comments! > > >Yes, the trolley was rather a dominating presence in the photo. > >This is from a slightly earlier exposure, cropped so that there's just >a bit of the trolley to provide context: > >http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17533634 > >or > >http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17533634-lg.jpg > > > >The old version is here: > >http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 > > > >I think the new version is better. What say ye? > >Cheers, > >Rick “Analysis kills spontaneity.” -- Henri-Frederic Amiel -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows, Take 2
Better ann On 9/19/2013 21:40, Rick Womer wrote: Thanks for all the comments! Yes, the trolley was rather a dominating presence in the photo. This is from a slightly earlier exposure, cropped so that there's just a bit of the trolley to provide context: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17533634 or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17533634-lg.jpg The old version is here: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 I think the new version is better. What say ye? Cheers, Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
PESO - Trolley and Shadows, Take 2
Thanks for all the comments! Yes, the trolley was rather a dominating presence in the photo. This is from a slightly earlier exposure, cropped so that there's just a bit of the trolley to provide context: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17533634 or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17533634-lg.jpg The old version is here: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 I think the new version is better. What say ye? Cheers, Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows
On 19/9/13, Rick Womer, discombobulated, unleashed: >From my walk to work Tuesday morning: > >http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 > >or > >http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17532915-lg.jpg > >(K-5, FA 28/2.8) > >Comments? Did you shoot any of those patterns without the vehicle at right? I think the fence and shadows would work really well by themselves... -- Cheers, Cotty ___/\__Broadcast, Corporate, || (O) |Web Video Production -- _ -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows
The shadows are great, I like the pattern. But it needs more trolley to work. Or as others suggested, crop it and leave only the shadows. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows
For me, this is one of those shots that is all about pattern rather than a specific subject. The shot shows enough context to know what I am looking at. But that context weakens the pattern that is the real subject. If you crop off the upper third, the pattern comes into its own and reveals the interesting picture. My opinion, ymmv -- Bruce Sent from my iPad > On Sep 19, 2013, at 4:55 AM, Rick Womer wrote: > > From my walk to work Tuesday morning: > > http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 > > or > > http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17532915-lg.jpg > > (K-5, FA 28/2.8) > > Comments? > > Rick > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows
Rick I really like this. I (the mad cropper) would cut off the white object at the top as it pulls me away from the more interesting subject. YMMV pdml-requ...@pdml.net wrote: Message: 4 Date: Thu, 19 Sep 2013 04:55:08 -0700 (PDT) From: Rick Womer To: Pentax List Subject: PESO - Trolley and Shadows Message-ID: <1379591708.68750.yahoomail...@web121805.mail.ne1.yahoo.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii From my walk to work Tuesday morning: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17532915-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: PESO - Trolley and Shadows
It's a great idea that for me doesn't quite work. You need more trolley; its wheels more in view for instance. On Thu, Sep 19, 2013 at 7:55 AM, Rick Womer wrote: > From my walk to work Tuesday morning: > > http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 > > or > > http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17532915-lg.jpg > > (K-5, FA 28/2.8) > > Comments? > > Rick > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- -bmw -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
PESO - Trolley and Shadows
>From my walk to work Tuesday morning: http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17532915 or http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17532915-lg.jpg (K-5, FA 28/2.8) Comments? Rick -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.