Re: [svn:perl6-synopsis] r8532 - doc/trunk/design/syn

2006-04-02 Thread Uri Guttman
 AT == Audrey Tang [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:

  AT Uri Guttman wrote:
   one of these days when i have tuits of large circumference, i will do a
   nit pass over as much of the A/E/S as i can handle before my brain
   explodes. having done tech editing for perl books is good training for
   this. in fact it would be a good idea to have several such passes by
   those with editing skill before those docs are 'released'. some of the
   concepts are so new to so many and are bleeding edge that the wording
   used has to be extra clean of nits and such stuff as dangling pronouns
   and other common flaws of technical writing.

  AT Indeed.  If we can arrange to have a docathon of factoring S* via such
  AT reviewing passes into Perl6::Doc::{Spec,Overview,Tutorial} documents,
  AT that can greatly speed up Perl 6 adoption.

  AT Got some cycles at YAPC::NA::Chicago? :)

i dunno now. is there going to be a hackathon like last year before
toronto? i could possibly get there early for some of that and get some
of that manic group energy focused on the docs. hell, i would do it just
to try to grok some of the stuff that is flying around. :)

so is anyone going to volunteer their place for this?

uri

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Re: [svn:perl6-synopsis] r8532 - doc/trunk/design/syn

2006-04-02 Thread Audrey Tang
Uri Guttman wrote:
 one of these days when i have tuits of large circumference, i will do a
 nit pass over as much of the A/E/S as i can handle before my brain
 explodes. having done tech editing for perl books is good training for
 this. in fact it would be a good idea to have several such passes by
 those with editing skill before those docs are 'released'. some of the
 concepts are so new to so many and are bleeding edge that the wording
 used has to be extra clean of nits and such stuff as dangling pronouns
 and other common flaws of technical writing.

Indeed.  If we can arrange to have a docathon of factoring S* via such
reviewing passes into Perl6::Doc::{Spec,Overview,Tutorial} documents,
that can greatly speed up Perl 6 adoption.

Got some cycles at YAPC::NA::Chicago? :)

Audrey



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Re: [svn:perl6-synopsis] r8532 - doc/trunk/design/syn

2006-04-02 Thread Dr.Ruud
Uri Guttman schreef:

 you might as well attribute the s:g/Into/into/ to dr. ruud.

Right, s:g/I/i/ is all that remained. I really was amazed by your new
capitalization style.
:)

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[svn:perl6-synopsis] r8532 - doc/trunk/design/syn

2006-04-01 Thread autrijus
Author: autrijus
Date: Sat Apr  1 20:10:15 2006
New Revision: 8532

Modified:
   doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod

Log:
* upper/lowercase English nit fix for the last patch as suggested by TimToady 

Modified: doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod
==
--- doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod(original)
+++ doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.podSat Apr  1 20:10:15 2006
@@ -401,8 +401,8 @@
 %$args; # same as '$args as Hash   or Hash($args)
 $args; # same as '$args as Code   or Code($args)
 
-When cast into an array, you can access all the positional arguments; Into a
-hash, all named arguments; Into a scalar, the invocant; Into code, its slurpy
+When cast into an array, you can access all the positional arguments; into a
+hash, all named arguments; into a scalar, the invocant; into code, its slurpy
 nameless block.
 
 All prefix sigil operators accept one positional argument, evaluated in


Re: [svn:perl6-synopsis] r8532 - doc/trunk/design/syn

2006-04-01 Thread Uri Guttman
 a == autrijus  [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:

  a Author: autrijus
  a Date: Sat Apr  1 20:10:15 2006
  a New Revision: 8532

  a Modified:
  adoc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod

  a Log:

  a * upper/lowercase English nit fix for the last patch as suggested
  a by TimToady

you might as well attribute the s:g/Into/into/ to dr. ruud. all timtoady
did was correct dr. ruud's p5 s///g into p6's s:g///. if we are going to
pick nits this small, then the tiny amount of credit is worth bestowing
upon the correct contributor. :)

one of these days when i have tuits of large circumference, i will do a
nit pass over as much of the A/E/S as i can handle before my brain
explodes. having done tech editing for perl books is good training for
this. in fact it would be a good idea to have several such passes by
those with editing skill before those docs are 'released'. some of the
concepts are so new to so many and are bleeding edge that the wording
used has to be extra clean of nits and such stuff as dangling pronouns
and other common flaws of technical writing.

speaking of bleeding edge? what do you call the opposite of that?

spoiler space



















the coagulated edge.

uri

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