Re: Minor documentation fixes

2022-10-05 Thread Bruce Momjian 
On Tue, Sep 27, 2022 at 03:58:10PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everybody,
> 
> My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a few
> minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 15
> documentation. The attached patch fixes them.

> diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> index 2fe902eed2..53b178da95 100644
> --- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> +++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
> @@ -6757,11 +6757,11 @@ local0.*/var/log/postgresql
>   For example, if syncing the data directory takes 25 seconds and
>   thereafter resetting unlogged relations takes 8 seconds, and if this
>   setting has the default value of 10 seconds, then a messages will be
>   logged for syncing the data directory after it has been in progress
>   for 10 seconds and again after it has been in progress for 20 
> seconds,
> - but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged operations.
> + but nothing will be logged for resetting unlogged relations.
>  
> 
>   

Sorry I am just getting to this item.  You are correct this needs fixing
and I have applied this to master and PG 15.  I will send a separate
email about the release note changes.

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Re: Minor documentation fixes

2022-10-05 Thread Bruce Momjian 
On Tue, Sep 27, 2022 at 03:58:10PM +0300, Elena Indrupskaya wrote:
> Hello everybody,
> 
> My colleagues from the Postgres Pro documentation team and I noticed a few
> minor inconsistencies in recently updated sections of the PostgreSQL 15
> documentation. The attached patch fixes them.
> 
> Two contributor names in the Release Notes are changed to match the names of
> commit authors with those in the Acknowledgements list.

Wow, you and Peter Eisentraut did better job of researching these two
author names than I did.  I also applied the diff that removed the
comma, but the skipped the one that removed the "that" since I was told
not to use "that" when it isn't needed.

Thanks.

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