Dear all,
I have prepared a patch containing some minor inconsistencies in the
documentation. Please, take a look.
I will be looking forward to your feedback.
The patch shall be applied to the REL_18_STABLE branch.
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Regards,
Oleg Sibiryakov
Technical Writer
Postgres Professional, The Russian Postgres Company
https://postgrespro.ru
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index d1e103ed779..e589a8d6884 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -1234,7 +1234,7 @@ include_dir 'conf.d'
-The library/libraries to use for validating OAuth connection tokens. If
+Sets the library/libraries to use for validating OAuth connection tokens. If
only one validator library is provided, it will be used by default for
any OAuth connections; otherwise, all
oauth HBA entries
@@ -1400,7 +1400,7 @@ include_dir 'conf.d'
Specifies a list of cipher suites that are allowed by connections using
TLS version 1.3. Multiple cipher suites can be
-specified by using a colon separated list. If left blank, the default
+specified by using a colon-separated list. If left blank, the default
set of cipher suites in OpenSSL will be used.
@@ -2432,7 +2432,7 @@ include_dir 'conf.d'
-Sets the maximum number of open files each server subprocess is
+Sets the maximum number of files each server subprocess is
allowed to open simultaneously; files already opened in the
postmaster are not counted toward this limit. The default is one
thousand files.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/postgres-fdw.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/postgres-fdw.sgml
index 781a01067f7..9b032fbf675 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/postgres-fdw.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/postgres-fdw.sgml
@@ -1226,7 +1226,7 @@ postgres=# SELECT postgres_fdw_disconnect_all();
PostgresFdwCleanupResult
- Waiting for transaction abort on remote server.
+ Waiting for transaction abort on a remote server.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/postgres.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/postgres.sgml
index af476c82fcc..2101442c90f 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/postgres.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/postgres.sgml
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ break is not needed in a wider output rendering.
-After you have successfully completed this tutorial you will want to
+After you have successfully completed this tutorial, you will want to
read the section to gain a better understanding
of the SQL language, or for
information about developing applications with
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
index d336ee38f58..80eadfc0e1a 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
@@ -1636,7 +1636,7 @@ SELCT 1/0;
Likewise the server expects the client to not begin
the SSL negotiation until it receives the server's
- single byte response to the SSL request. If the
+ single-byte response to the SSL request. If the
client begins the SSL negotiation immediately without
waiting for the server response to be received it can reduce connection
latency by one round-trip. However this comes at the cost of not being
@@ -2394,7 +2394,7 @@ psql "dbname=postgres replication=database" -c "IDENTIFY_SYSTEM;"
- Change the definition of a replication slot.
+ Changes the definition of a replication slot.
See for more about
replication slots. This command is currently only supported for logical
replication slots.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_recvlogical.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_recvlogical.sgml
index 263ebdeeab4..2a0de0cfb63 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_recvlogical.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_recvlogical.sgml
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
-The --slot and --dbname are required
+The --slot and --dbname options are required
for this action.
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
-The --slot is required for this action.
+The --slot option is required for this action.
@@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
-The --slot and --dbname,
---file are required for this action.
+The --slot, --dbname, and
+--file options are required for this action.
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml
index ab252d9fc74..e2b2a0ea26f 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pgbench.sgml
@@ -2826,7 +2826,7 @@ statement latencies in milliseconds, failures and retries:
start a connection to the database server / the socket for connecting
the client to the database server has become invalid). In such cases
all clients of this thread stop while