Re: [regext] Document Shepherd check on draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05

2018-10-11 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
Thanks, Jiankang.



Scott



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Dear Scott,



  Thanks for your kind support and review.

  The version 06 has been updated to address your concerns.

https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-06.txt





section  7.2.3.  EPP  Command

 section  7.2.4.  EPP  Command

section  7.2.5.  EPP  Command

have refined the text and added the example according to your kind suggestion.



Section  11.  Security Considerations   has been updated to add some words 
related security.





CNNIC and some other registries have implemented this document, and tested the 
examples.



Thanks a lot.

  _

Jiankang Yao



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Date: 2018-10-02 19:29

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Subject: Re: [regext] Document Shepherd check on 
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I don’t recall seeing any discussion of or text changes to address my feedback. 
Here’s my note:



https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/regext/current/msg01541.html



Scott



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HI all,



I'm the document shepherd of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05.  
During review. The WG had made a last call on its -03 version (subject: 
[regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-03), and Scott 
Hollenbeck supported the publication but also raised concern on security 
consideration.



I have not see any further discussion on this, I would like to ask whether WG 
closed the issue. Thanks to all.



Best,

Joseph



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Re: [regext] Document Shepherd check on draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05

2018-10-11 Thread Jiankang Yao
Dear Scott,

  Thanks for your kind support and review.
  The version 06 has been updated to address your concerns.
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-06.txt


section  7.2.3.  EPP  Command 
 section  7.2.4.  EPP  Command 
section  7.2.5.  EPP  Command 
have refined the text and added the example according to your kind suggestion.

Section  11.  Security Considerations   has been updated to add some words 
related security.


CNNIC and some other registries have implemented this document, and tested the 
examples.

Thanks a lot.



Jiankang Yao

From: Hollenbeck, Scott
Date: 2018-10-02 19:29
To: 'j...@afilias.info'; 'regext@ietf.org'
Subject: Re: [regext] Document Shepherd check on 
draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05
I don’t recall seeing any discussion of or text changes to address my feedback. 
Here’s my note:
 
https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/regext/current/msg01541.html
 
Scott
 
From: regext  On Behalf Of Joseph Yee
Sent: Monday, October 01, 2018 5:15 PM
To: regext@ietf.org
Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] Document Shepherd check on 
draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05
 
HI all,
 
I'm the document shepherd of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05.  
During review. The WG had made a last call on its -03 version (subject: 
[regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-03), and Scott 
Hollenbeck supported the publication but also raised concern on security 
consideration.
 
I have not see any further discussion on this, I would like to ask whether WG 
closed the issue. Thanks to all.
 
Best,
Joseph
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Re: [regext] Document Shepherd check on draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05

2018-10-02 Thread Jiankang Yao
Thanks Scott and Joseph.  I will update a new version to address it.


Jiankang Yao 

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> 在 2018年10月2日,19:29,Hollenbeck, Scott 
>  写道:
> 
> I don’t recall seeing any discussion of or text changes to address my 
> feedback. Here’s my note:
>  
> https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/regext/current/msg01541.html
>  
> Scott
>  
> From: regext  On Behalf Of Joseph Yee
> Sent: Monday, October 01, 2018 5:15 PM
> To: regext@ietf.org
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] Document Shepherd check on 
> draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05
>  
> HI all,
>  
> I'm the document shepherd of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05.  
> During review. The WG had made a last call on its -03 version (subject: 
> [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-03), and Scott 
> Hollenbeck supported the publication but also raised concern on security 
> consideration.
>  
> I have not see any further discussion on this, I would like to ask whether WG 
> closed the issue. Thanks to all.
>  
> Best,
> Joseph
>  
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Re: [regext] Document Shepherd check on draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05

2018-10-02 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
I don’t recall seeing any discussion of or text changes to address my feedback. 
Here’s my note:



https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/regext/current/msg01541.html



Scott



From: regext  On Behalf Of Joseph Yee
Sent: Monday, October 01, 2018 5:15 PM
To: regext@ietf.org
Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] Document Shepherd check on 
draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05



HI all,



I'm the document shepherd of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05.  
During review. The WG had made a last call on its -03 version (subject: 
[regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-03), and Scott 
Hollenbeck supported the publication but also raised concern on security 
consideration.



I have not see any further discussion on this, I would like to ask whether WG 
closed the issue. Thanks to all.



Best,

Joseph



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[regext] Document Shepherd check on draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05

2018-10-01 Thread Joseph Yee
HI all,

I'm the document shepherd of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-05.
During review. The WG had made a last call on its -03 version (subject:
[regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-03), and Scott
Hollenbeck supported the publication but also raised concern on security
consideration.

I have not see any further discussion on this, I would like to ask whether
WG closed the issue. Thanks to all.

Best,
Joseph
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