Re: [Tails-dev] PATCH: Small improvements to contribute/how/documentation.mdwn

2015-10-21 Thread sajolida
Jesse W:
> As promised in my last email, two small improvements to
> contribute/how/documentation.mdwn 
> 
> https://gitlab.com/JesseW/tails/commits/add_doc_contrib_info

Merged, thanks!

I added two nitpicking on top of you work with:

  - 3235f56 Don't use serial comma in series of two
  - 965ff16 Avoid abbreviations
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Re: [Tails-dev] PATCH: Small improvements to contribute/how/documentation.mdwn

2015-10-12 Thread sajolida
BitingBird:
> Jesse W:
>> As promised in my last email, two small improvements to
>> contribute/how/documentation.mdwn 
>>
>> https://gitlab.com/JesseW/tails/commits/add_doc_contrib_info
>>
>> Any suggestions of particular other doc pages that are in the greatest
>> need of native English speaking ears (pun intended)?
> 
> I'll let sajolida do the patch review

I'll do that soon.

> but as pages to proff-read, I'd
> recommend to start with the core pages:
> https://tails.boum.org/contribute/l10n_tricks/core_po_files.txt
> 
> Those are also the ones that are translated first, and are the basic
> documentation. I guess starting with the first-level ones, then the
> about, then the get, and finally the first steps would be the logical
> order, but whatever works for you is fine :)

Yes, but you shouldn't work on any of these:

  - /download
  - /doc/get
  - /doc/first_steps/installation
  - /doc/first_steps/upgrade

as we're working on replacing them with a new web tool:

https://tails.boum.org/blueprint/bootstrapping/assistant/

As part of this if you want to work the development of this you could
review
https://git-tails.immerda.ch/tails/tree/wiki/src/install/win/usb.mdwn?h=web/assistant
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[Tails-dev] PATCH: Small improvements to contribute/how/documentation.mdwn

2015-10-11 Thread Jesse W
As promised in my last email, two small improvements to
contribute/how/documentation.mdwn 

https://gitlab.com/JesseW/tails/commits/add_doc_contrib_info

Any suggestions of particular other doc pages that are in the greatest
need of native English speaking ears (pun intended)?

Jesse
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