Re: Updated man page for release.8 - with feedback

2016-06-26 Thread Marc Espie
Pretty sure section 7 should now refer directly to bulk(8)



Re: Updated man page for release.8 - with feedback

2016-06-26 Thread Bryan Everly



On 06/26/16 09:28, Theo Buehler wrote:


There is a stray '. fs' here:


+The following steps will create the boot and installation images
+. fs

With that removed, this is ok tb@



Thanks Theo.

Please see attached updated diff.  Any other feedback?
Index: man8/release.8
===
RCS file: /home/cvs/src/share/man/man8/release.8,v
retrieving revision 1.72
diff -u -p -r1.72 release.8
--- man8/release.8	14 Sep 2015 20:06:59 -	1.72
+++ man8/release.8	26 Jun 2016 13:34:33 -
@@ -34,6 +34,8 @@ Build and install xenocara.
 Make and validate the xenocara release.
 .It
 Make the third party packages.
+.It
+Create boot and installation disk images.
 .El
 .Pp
 The following sections describe each of the required steps in detail.
@@ -338,6 +340,30 @@ subsystem of contributed applications is
 for installation, either individually or in bulk.
 This is described in
 .Xr ports 7 .
+.Ss 8. Create boot and installation disk images
+At this point,
+.Va RELEASEDIR
+contains the
+.Ox
+tarballs necessary to upgrade.
+.Pp
+The following steps will create the boot and installation images
+.No install${ Ns Ar VERSION Ns }.fs
+and
+.No install${ Ns Ar VERSION Ns }.iso
+suitable for installs without network connectivity.
+These images contain the tarballs and ports built in the previous
+steps.
+.Bd -literal -offset indent
+# export RELDIR=your-releasedir
+# export RELXDIR=your-xenocara-releasedir
+# cd /usr/src/distrib/${ARCH}/iso && make
+# make install
+# unset RELDIR RELXDIR
+.Ed
+.Pp
+The two installer images are now stored in the local release
+directory.
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr cvs 1 ,
 .Xr doas 1 ,


Re: Updated man page for release.8 - with feedback

2016-06-26 Thread Theo Buehler
On Sun, Jun 26, 2016 at 09:18:59AM -0400, Bryan Everly wrote:
> I have attached an updated man page for release.8 with feedback from jmc at
> Theo's request.  He preferred that we split the diff with the new content
> from the diff changing from second person to third person and submit them
> separately.
> 
> This diff is just the new content.  Any more feedback or could someone
> commit this for me?
> 
> Thanks
> 

There is a stray '. fs' here:

> +The following steps will create the boot and installation images
> +. fs

With that removed, this is ok tb@