Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
Am Sonntag, den 22.03.2009, 12:50 -0300 schrieb spg76: > 2009/3/20 Cory K. > Honestly, I liked the fat one. :) It was different. Let me > know which > one of these will be final. > > I like more drive-optical2. The main problem that I see with the "fat > one" it's the tray, I just don't like how it looks in the small sizes. > But if you all want I can try fix this (and other details). > -- > Seba (AKA spg76) > http://www.ubuntu-ar.org 24-22 and 16: Maybe the part from above for 2px down and center it. With the part above you don't have much play. :) Oliver -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
2009/3/20 Cory K. > Honestly, I liked the fat one. :) It was different. Let me know which > one of these will be final. > I like more drive-optical2. The main problem that I see with the "fat one" it's the tray, I just don't like how it looks in the small sizes. But if you all want I can try fix this (and other details). -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
Am Freitag, den 20.03.2009, 15:23 -0400 schrieb Cory K.: > spg76 wrote: > > I wasn't very happy with this icon for some of the things that commented > > Oliver and Thorsten, so I uploaded to the wiki a new version based on the > > Gnome and Tango icon. > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > > > Honestly, I liked the fat one. :) It was different. Let me know which > one of these will be final. > > > -Cory K. > > FAT :) gtk-media: Will make only in 128 and let them all out if I finished. Time? Maybe 1 week? So here are some difticults like "replay" etc. too. ;) Sincerly Oliver -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
spg76 wrote: > I wasn't very happy with this icon for some of the things that commented > Oliver and Thorsten, so I uploaded to the wiki a new version based on the > Gnome and Tango icon. > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > Honestly, I liked the fat one. :) It was different. Let me know which one of these will be final. -Cory K. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
I wasn't very happy with this icon for some of the things that commented Oliver and Thorsten, so I uploaded to the wiki a new version based on the Gnome and Tango icon. https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
On Do, 2009-03-19 at 09:56 +0100, Thorsten Wilms wrote: > On Wed, 2009-03-18 at 19:49 -0300, spg76 wrote: > > I uploaded to the wiki a new icon for drive-optical. > > Oliver did a great job retouching the small sizes. > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > Light and material impression are pretty good, with the exception of the > left and right edges of the front. The shading there suggests the front > is rounded back there, but the top doesn't show a matching curve. > > The proportion is off; it's to high / thick. > For get it thinner the only solution is to convert the disk-sliver into a only a "line". Oliver -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
On Wed, 2009-03-18 at 19:49 -0300, spg76 wrote: > I uploaded to the wiki a new icon for drive-optical. > Oliver did a great job retouching the small sizes. > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions Light and material impression are pretty good, with the exception of the left and right edges of the front. The shading there suggests the front is rounded back there, but the top doesn't show a matching curve. The proportion is off; it's to high / thick. -- Thorsten Wilms thorwil's design for free software: http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
Am Mittwoch, den 18.03.2009, 19:49 -0300 schrieb spg76: > I uploaded to the wiki a new icon for drive-optical. > Oliver did a great job retouching the small sizes. > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > -- > Seba (AKA spg76) > http://www.ubuntu-ar.org I like this drive really. :) I have something similar at home. It's from M$, but I like it ... :D I'm jocking a little bit. But really it's a good work ... Sincerly Oliver <>-- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
[ubuntu-art] [Breathe] drive-optical
I uploaded to the wiki a new icon for drive-optical. Oliver did a great job retouching the small sizes. https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
[ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
I like the lighter white. Breathe would go much better with white and light gray, but this looks a little too dark. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
2008/10/19 Cory K. <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > Thorsten Wilms wrote: > > On Mon, 2008-10-13 at 18:19 -0300, spg76 wrote: > > > >> I uploaded a new version of drive-optical (as drive-optical2) to the > >> wiki. > >> I think that the small sizes are much better. > >> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > >> > > > > The small sizes have a better defined tray, but there's still the issue > > with the right side of the tray on the large icon. Also, the darker grey > > looks less friendly, I think. > > > > Agreed. I'd like to see the 2 versions merge and go in this direction. > > -Cory K. > > > -- > ubuntu-art mailing list > ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art > I'll try to fix the right side of the tray like Thorsten said and I'll use lighter colors for the icon. -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
Thorsten Wilms wrote: > On Mon, 2008-10-13 at 18:19 -0300, spg76 wrote: > >> I uploaded a new version of drive-optical (as drive-optical2) to the >> wiki. >> I think that the small sizes are much better. >> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions >> > > The small sizes have a better defined tray, but there's still the issue > with the right side of the tray on the large icon. Also, the darker grey > looks less friendly, I think. > Agreed. I'd like to see the 2 versions merge and go in this direction. -Cory K. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
On Mon, 2008-10-13 at 18:19 -0300, spg76 wrote: > I uploaded a new version of drive-optical (as drive-optical2) to the > wiki. > I think that the small sizes are much better. > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions The small sizes have a better defined tray, but there's still the issue with the right side of the tray on the large icon. Also, the darker grey looks less friendly, I think. -- Thorsten Wilms thorwil's design for free software: http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
I uploaded a new version of drive-optical (as drive-optical2) to the wiki. I think that the small sizes are much better. https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
2008/10/13 Cory K. <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > I'd like to use the 1st drive. I like that the angle on the perspective > isn't as steep as the 2nd and Oxygen icons. Any +1's? > > It also appears that the sides of the from of the drive need a little > work. Something fishy with the angle they are at. I'll work on this icon later. I'm gonna try to improve the form making sure that I got the symmetry right, like Thorsten said. I'm not very happy with the small sizes, so I will redo them. > > > Killer work so far. > > -Cory K. > > -- > ubuntu-art mailing list > ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art > Thanks you very much :) -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
I'd like to use the 1st drive. I like that the angle on the perspective isn't as steep as the 2nd and Oxygen icons. Any +1's? It also appears that the sides of the from of the drive need a little work. Something fishy with the angle they are at. Killer work so far. -Cory K. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
spg76 wrote: > Maybe I should change the perspective on the small ones in order to > get them right. Just a note, I'm staying out *somewhat* so as to let things creatively develop. But, I do want to say it's perfectly acceptable for icons to change perspective at smaller sizes. It was talked about on IRC and the wiki will be updated to reflect this opinion. I believe the current optical and hardrives do this. I do want to say, that I think with the removal of the media from the optical drive is is an improvement over the old Oxygen one. I think we should examine whether a newly proposed icon (*any* new one not just this drive icon) is actually *better* than what's there and we be careful not to change for changes sake. :) -Cory K. PS - If anyone wants to split off the last statement because they feel it needs further discussion please do. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
2008/10/4 Danny King <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > Hmm. I think the perspective and proportions of the first are much more > > convincing. Would be good to hear other voice here ;) > > I agree, the perspective of the first seems much better. Nice work though! > > -- > - Danny King of Gleaming Pixel Web Design. > > Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED] / [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Web: www.GleamingPixel.co.uk > > Are you a web standards web developer that uses open source software? > Say hello, send me a mail! I'm looking for more like me. > > -- > ubuntu-art mailing list > ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art > Thank you all for your comments. The problem that I have with the first version it's with the small sizes of the icon (32px and below). The perspective doesn't let much space above and below of the icon, so I can't put much details on the small ones and they don't look very clear. Maybe I should change the perspective on the small ones in order to get them right. -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
> Hmm. I think the perspective and proportions of the first are much more > convincing. Would be good to hear other voice here ;) I agree, the perspective of the first seems much better. Nice work though! -- - Danny King of Gleaming Pixel Web Design. Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED] / [EMAIL PROTECTED] Web: www.GleamingPixel.co.uk Are you a web standards web developer that uses open source software? Say hello, send me a mail! I'm looking for more like me. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > Hmm. I think the perspective and proportions of the first are much more > convincing. Would be good to hear other voice here ;) > > > -- > Thorsten Wilms > > thorwil's design for free software: > http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ > > > -- > ubuntu-art mailing list > ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art > Hi, This is my first post to the list, hope I do it right! ;) I'd have to agree with Thorsten here, if you could use the front part from the second version but the perspective of the first version then you'd have a winner! The perspective of the second version would suit a hard drive icon more than an optical drive icon. -- David -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
On Sat, 2008-10-04 at 15:38 -0300, spg76 wrote: > I wasn't very happy with the first version of the icon, mostly because > on the small sizes doesn't look very well. I made a new version with > another perspective (is in the wiki now) from which the small sizes > should look good. To make sure of the symmetry I used guides and I > think that turned out well. > Still the icon could be better but if you all like it I made the small > sizes and try to refine the bigger one. https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions Hmm. I think the perspective and proportions of the first are much more convincing. Would be good to hear other voice here ;) -- Thorsten Wilms thorwil's design for free software: http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
2008/10/3 spg76 <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > > 2008/10/3 Thorsten Wilms <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > On Thu, 2008-10-02 at 15:49 -0300, spg76 wrote: >> > I submitted a new icon for drive-optical. I just want to show what I >> > got before I make the small ones. >> > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions >> >> I already like it much more than the Oxygen one. Looks pretty real on >> first sight, but the shadow on the sides isn't right. >> >> The headphone port and volume wheel are superfluous. If you want to keep >> them, you should line them up with the LED and eject button to be on one >> height. I think the led should be green, as that's the usual color. >> Orange would rather be used for burning, I'd say. >> >> Please check if the body is symmetrical (left-right). >> >> >> -- >> Thorsten Wilms >> >> thorwil's design for free software: >> http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ >> >> >> -- >> ubuntu-art mailing list >> ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com >> https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art >> > > > Thank you for your comments. I'll make some changes based on them and > announce here when the wiki it's updated. > -- > Seba (AKA spg76) > http://www.ubuntu-ar.org > I updated the icon for drive-optical in the wiki. I gonna have to redo the small icons (mostly 22px and 16px) but I just wanna show you what I got. -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
2008/10/3 Thorsten Wilms <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > On Thu, 2008-10-02 at 15:49 -0300, spg76 wrote: > > I submitted a new icon for drive-optical. I just want to show what I > > got before I make the small ones. > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > I already like it much more than the Oxygen one. Looks pretty real on > first sight, but the shadow on the sides isn't right. > > The headphone port and volume wheel are superfluous. If you want to keep > them, you should line them up with the LED and eject button to be on one > height. I think the led should be green, as that's the usual color. > Orange would rather be used for burning, I'd say. > > Please check if the body is symmetrical (left-right). > > > -- > Thorsten Wilms > > thorwil's design for free software: > http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ > > > -- > ubuntu-art mailing list > ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com > https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art > Thank you for your comments. I'll make some changes based on them and announce here when the wiki it's updated. -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
On Thu, 2008-10-02 at 15:49 -0300, spg76 wrote: > I submitted a new icon for drive-optical. I just want to show what I > got before I make the small ones. > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions I already like it much more than the Oxygen one. Looks pretty real on first sight, but the shadow on the sides isn't right. The headphone port and volume wheel are superfluous. If you want to keep them, you should line them up with the LED and eject button to be on one height. I think the led should be green, as that's the usual color. Orange would rather be used for burning, I'd say. Please check if the body is symmetrical (left-right). -- Thorsten Wilms thorwil's design for free software: http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
[ubuntu-art] Breathe drive-optical
I submitted a new icon for drive-optical. I just want to show what I got before I make the small ones. https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions Regards. -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
