Public bug reported:
There is the note under Step #5:
"...If this is true of the service you wish to register, you will need to use
an alternative method to create an account."
s/is true of/applies to
Sounds more direct that way.
Another one.
"You will typically be asked for some personal details such as username and
password."
Suggestion: You will be asked for your username and password.
Conciseness.
** Affects: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
Importance: Undecided
Status: New
** Tags: bitesize saucy
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accounts-create.page simplify a phrase
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