Public bug reported:
Binary package hint: ubuntu-docs
8.2 - The caution/warning section
"You still use a small amount of battery power whilst suspended, so is not
recommended for the low power action. If you remove AC power on a desktop, or
run out of battery power on a laptop then you will lose your work."
Should be:
...so is not recommended for the low or critical power actions. ...
Reasoning: I shouldn't use it for low, but I can for critical? Clarity.
8.6 - Title
"Why does not my IBM laptop have the brightness sliders in Power Preferences?"
Should be:
Why doesn't Power Preferences show the brightness sliders for my IBM laptop?
Reasoning: The laptop doesn't "have" possession of the slider, power
prefs does. Furthermore, "why does not <noun>" is not correct grammar,
it is "why does <noun> not"; however, when using it as a contraction it
is usually accepted, as in my correction.
Would also need changed in the index, at the top.
** Affects: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
Importance: Undecided
Status: New
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gpm manual errors: 8.2 & 8.6
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/390488
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