Re: A man and A woman
lanny is that you? nice take, whilst being the spectator it was about a gaze of sorts, but by writing it ...it kinda became a self observation. people do weird shit, i stare at strangers arguing in the park. thanks sheila. - Original Message - From: phanero To: WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.UTORONTO.CA Sent: Monday, December 12, 2005 8:25 PM Subject: Re: A man and A woman I like this Morrigan. For some reason I read it as being about the image and the gaze, the image being the woman, and the gaze being the man.. these could be swapped of course.. He returns to her and pulls her to her feet. She flops against him like an unfastened puppet. He holds her under her arms and she falls into him. Its all she wants, to be absorbed by him and granted strength through acknowledgement. and the spectator views the drama quite by accident this detail is also fascinating: I see him in front of her, a dark and light stripy jumper. as in the 'line bounding'.. boundaries that bound! shades of Blake.. lovely cinema with plenty of strange attractors. lq - Original Message - From: morrigan To: WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.UTORONTO.CA Sent: Monday, December 12, 2005 6:31 AM Subject: A man and A woman I walk the dog at midnight. The pavements are slick with winter rain that is freezing into speckled ice. The soles of my boots skid almost imperceptibly. I hear a woman scream, high and ragged. Immediately I am alerted. I scan the dark horizon. I see her some distance off, running across a road. She is a mere shadow. I walk in the direction she is running, worried momentarily that perhaps she has become maddened and will scream at me. I wonder whether she is shouting into a mobile phone. I see him in front of her, a dark and light stripy jumper. She is pursuing him but he does not break his stride of singularity. From somewhere deep inside her another gut wrenching howl, I love you so fucking much. He continues to walk away from her. She quickens her pace and draws level with him, half grabbing, half jumping at him. She hits him. For a moment they tussle and she collapses on the floor, folding up under the weight of her own drunken pain. The man walks away. She is lying on the ground. Her throat must be open because the sounds from it are reverberating around the park, ricocheting off the trunks of trees, rattling the empty winter benches, strafing the low grass He returns to her and pulls her to her feet. She flops against him like an unfastened puppet. He holds her under her arms and she falls into him. Its all she wants, to be absorbed by him and granted strength through acknowledgement. He rises again and set out from her. With every step he takes the distance between them increases. She stands, her arms flailing, no sense emerging from her contorted mouth that can only plead in half grunts and shrieks, but then he returns again and I see them silhouetted in the distance. I walk to where I cant see them, knowing my circle will bring me back to their position, my cycle of movement will always bring me to their place. The dog trots. The cathedral in front of me is illuminated against the night sky with blue-green light. Traffic passes me, all people going somewhere, or coming from somewhere. A drunken man lurches in his approaching walk. I turn the corner and they are there again. He walks in front of her and she trails behind him in a staggering confusion. He pauses. She hurries to reach him, her whole body propelled towards him. I draw closer to them. I can see her clasping at him. He takes her hand and punctures her anger. I am parallel with them now. She is limp in the tears she has shed, exasperation thickens his voice I love you, he says, I just cant do this anymore. She is sniffing. I can hear her heels against the concrete. Im sorry, she is saying, as I cross their path and head towards the road. No virus found in this incoming message.Checked by AVG Free Edition.Version: 7.1.371 / Virus Database: 267.13.13/198 - Release Date: 12/12/2005
Re: A man and A woman
Wow. --- morrigan [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: I walk the dog at midnight. The pavements are slick with winter rain that is freezing into speckled ice. The soles of my boots skid almost imperceptibly. I hear a woman scream, high and ragged. Immediately I am alerted. I scan the dark horizon. I see her some distance off, running across a road. She is a mere shadow. I walk in the direction she is running, worried momentarily that perhaps she has become maddened and will scream at me. I wonder whether she is shouting into a mobile phone. I see him in front of her, a dark and light stripy jumper. She is pursuing him but he does not break his stride of singularity. From somewhere deep inside her another gut wrenching howl, 'I love you so fucking much'. He continues to walk away from her. She quickens her pace and draws level with him, half grabbing, half jumping at him. She hits him. For a moment they tussle and she collapses on the floor, folding up under the weight of her own drunken pain. The man walks away. She is lying on the ground. Her throat must be open because the sounds from it are reverberating around the park, ricocheting off the trunks of trees, rattling the empty winter benches, strafing the low grass . He returns to her and pulls her to her feet. She flops against him like an unfastened puppet. He holds her under her arms and she falls into him. It's all she wants, to be absorbed by him and granted strength through acknowledgement. He rises again and set out from her. With every step he takes the distance between them increases. She stands, her arms flailing, no sense emerging from her contorted mouth that can only plead in half grunts and shrieks, but then he returns again and I see them silhouetted in the distance. I walk to where I can't see them, knowing my circle will bring me back to their position, my cycle of movement will always bring me to their place. The dog trots. The cathedral in front of me is illuminated against the night sky with blue-green light. Traffic passes me, all people going somewhere, or coming from somewhere. A drunken man lurches in his approaching walk. I turn the corner and they are there again. He walks in front of her and she trails behind him in a staggering confusion. He pauses. She hurries to reach him, her whole body propelled towards him. I draw closer to them. I can see her clasping at him. He takes her hand and punctures her anger. I am parallel with them now. She is limp in the tears she has shed, exasperation thickens his voice 'I love you,' he says, 'I just can't do this anymore'. She is sniffing. I can hear her heels against the concrete. 'I'm sorry,' she is saying, as I cross their path and head towards the road.
Re: A man and A woman
I like this Morrigan. For some reason I read it as being about the image and the gaze, the image being the woman, and the gaze being the man.. these could be swapped of course.. He returns to her and pulls her to her feet. She flops against him like an unfastened puppet. He holds her under her arms and she falls into him. Its all she wants, to be absorbed by him and granted strength through acknowledgement. and the spectator views the drama quite by accident this detail is also fascinating: I see him in front of her, a dark and light stripy jumper. as in the 'line bounding'.. boundaries that bound! shades of Blake.. lovely cinema with plenty of strange attractors. lq - Original Message - From: morrigan To: WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.UTORONTO.CA Sent: Monday, December 12, 2005 6:31 AM Subject: A man and A woman I walk the dog at midnight. The pavements are slick with winter rain that is freezing into speckled ice. The soles of my boots skid almost imperceptibly. I hear a woman scream, high and ragged. Immediately I am alerted. I scan the dark horizon. I see her some distance off, running across a road. She is a mere shadow. I walk in the direction she is running, worried momentarily that perhaps she has become maddened and will scream at me. I wonder whether she is shouting into a mobile phone. I see him in front of her, a dark and light stripy jumper. She is pursuing him but he does not break his stride of singularity. From somewhere deep inside her another gut wrenching howl, I love you so fucking much. He continues to walk away from her. She quickens her pace and draws level with him, half grabbing, half jumping at him. She hits him. For a moment they tussle and she collapses on the floor, folding up under the weight of her own drunken pain. The man walks away. She is lying on the ground. Her throat must be open because the sounds from it are reverberating around the park, ricocheting off the trunks of trees, rattling the empty winter benches, strafing the low grass He returns to her and pulls her to her feet. She flops against him like an unfastened puppet. He holds her under her arms and she falls into him. Its all she wants, to be absorbed by him and granted strength through acknowledgement. He rises again and set out from her. With every step he takes the distance between them increases. She stands, her arms flailing, no sense emerging from her contorted mouth that can only plead in half grunts and shrieks, but then he returns again and I see them silhouetted in the distance. I walk to where I cant see them, knowing my circle will bring me back to their position, my cycle of movement will always bring me to their place. The dog trots. The cathedral in front of me is illuminated against the night sky with blue-green light. Traffic passes me, all people going somewhere, or coming from somewhere. A drunken man lurches in his approaching walk. I turn the corner and they are there again. He walks in front of her and she trails behind him in a staggering confusion. He pauses. She hurries to reach him, her whole body propelled towards him. I draw closer to them. I can see her clasping at him. He takes her hand and punctures her anger. I am parallel with them now. She is limp in the tears she has shed, exasperation thickens his voice I love you, he says, I just cant do this anymore. She is sniffing. I can hear her heels against the concrete. Im sorry, she is saying, as I cross their path and head towards the road.
