[6lo] Iotdir early review of draft-ietf-6lo-deadline-time-02

2018-09-18 Thread Wesley Eddy
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Ready with Issues The draft is easily readable and can be understood and should be simple to implement by someone working in the area. I only have one technical issue that I think should definitely need to be resolved, and a few small editorial comments

[6lo] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-nfc-12

2018-12-17 Thread Wesley Eddy
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Ready with Issues This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's auth