Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15

2022-03-04 Thread Theresa Enghardt
Dear Cigdem, Thank you for preparing the revised version, it looks pretty good to me. Some replies inline: On 3/4/22 14:23, Cigdem Sengul wrote: Section 1.3: "Will                    If the network connection is not closed normally, […]" I suggest to make this a bit more

[Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-mqtt-tls-profile-15

2022-03-02 Thread Theresa Enghardt via Datatracker
Reviewer: Theresa Enghardt Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For