Hi,
Thank you for the changes and additional context.
This looks good to me!
Best,
Reese (aka Theresa)
On 3/5/22 05:40, Cigdem Sengul wrote:
Hello,
I've created a new pull request for the changes:
https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/101
Explanations are below.
> > [CS:
Hello,
I've created a new pull request for the changes:
https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/101
Explanations are below.
>
>
> > > [CS: Introduced a formal definition of Network Connection to
> > > MQTT-related terminology - as defined in MQTT standard.
> > > To the Will definition,
Hi Theresa,
On Fri, Mar 04, 2022 at 06:42:07PM -0800, Theresa Enghardt wrote:
> Dear Cigdem,
>
> Thank you for preparing the revised version, it looks pretty good to me.
>
> Some replies inline:
>
> On 3/4/22 14:23, Cigdem Sengul wrote:
> >
> >
> > Section 1.3:
> >
> > "Will
> >
Dear Cigdem,
Thank you for preparing the revised version, it looks pretty good to me.
Some replies inline:
On 3/4/22 14:23, Cigdem Sengul wrote:
Section 1.3:
"Will
If the network connection is not closed
normally, […]"
I suggest to make this a bit
Dear Theresa,
Thank you very much for the comments.
I have prepared a revised version, where the changes can be found in the
following pull request:
https://github.com/ace-wg/mqtt-tls-profile/pull/99
If you are happy with these changes, I can submit a new ID.
I also explain the changes below,
Reviewer: Theresa Enghardt
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
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