Jim,
Thank you very much for the detailed comments. Please see responses
inline. I have uploaded version -01 with minor edits listed at the end
of your message. (Unfortunately, I did not yet have time to propose
changes for the non-editorial comments.)
Jim Schaad writes:
I have some comments on this draft that I have gotten from implementation
attempts.
Major Issues:
Section 2 talks about looking things up in the resource directory, but it
does not say what one would be looking for. Is this material which should
be in the generic document?
Section 2 - I see a