Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-26 Thread Aaron Gable
On Mon, Feb 26, 2024 at 4:36 AM Carl Wallace wrote: > Two comments on the third paragraph of section 4.1: > > - The addition of section identifiers for the references makes the > sentences harder to read. Maybe wrapping the section identifiers and > reference in parentheses. > Thanks, this

Re: [Acme] Internet-Draft acme-pqcnegotiation-03

2024-02-26 Thread Aaron Gable
I have two main pieces of feedback on this draft, which unfortunately are rather large / sweeping and would require rethinking the whole document to address. 1) The algorithm negotiation mechanism is too specific. Why should ACME add new API endpoints dedicated solely to listing the public key

Re: [Acme] I-D Action: draft-ietf-acme-ari-03.txt

2024-02-26 Thread Carl Wallace
Two comments on the third paragraph of section 4.1: - The addition of section identifiers for the references makes the sentences harder to read. Maybe wrapping the section identifiers and reference in parentheses. - The preparation of the URI uses the keyIdentifier field of